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Dik

@Dik..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Awsome part...!!
Sabse pehle soory for being late.. Nmaine pichle part pr bhi coment nahi kia tha.. Network problem thi...!!

Im loving the way u write... N songs toh superb...!!!

Armaam ridhima fightung like cat n dog...!!!

Upsate sooonnn
love u take care. !!!

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: little_angle
Awsome part...!!
Sabse pehle soory for being late.. Nmaine pichle part pr bhi coment nahi kia tha.. Network problem thi...!!

Im loving the way u write... N songs toh superb...!!!

Armaam ridhima fightung like cat n dog...!!!

Upsate sooonnn
love u take care. !!!

First of all to thanks a lot
& it's ok no need to say sorry..
U comment now na so tension kyun lete ho yaar take a chil pil...😉[in k3g kajol style]
i'm glad that u liked it
yea they r coz i thought pyar k dusri pehlu nafrat hoti hai so usse hi start karu...
lv u also
Tc

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Unres on pg 11 😉

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Amazing Part,
Loved it,❤️
So Armaan wore a scary mask to scare someone so that the kid will smile 😆
Minnie and Armaan parts were too cute.

Armaan (While extending his hand armaan thought to introduce himself): Hi I'm Armaan,Armaan Mallik...Naam to suna hi hoga[guys again my srk films effect don't mind with this plz.😉😛]
Riddhima(Pehle se hi her mind was disturbed with all airport problems then suddenly her younger sister getting along with some random guy who nearly scared him like hell she really didn't like it & moreover armaan's flirtrious behavior & the prank reprimand it all above so being riddhima she little arrogantly said): Nhi suna

This part made me laugh 🤣, poor Armaan,
The song sequence was really nice.

I loved every bit of it,

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.😉

Love u 🤗

first of al to
A veryyy happpyyy new yearrr
&
Thank u so much for this amazing comment
yea he was putting on some scary mask
1st i thought i would put the pic of mask also but na phir socha khud dar gayi toh
kya hogi...so thought against it😉
i m glad to know that u liked it
don't say thnks too much it seems odd to me..
lv u
tc

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

i know...
Kuch dino se boht critical quiz de rhi thi toh socha thodi si easy de du
u see ab tak to koi sahi guess nhi kar pa rhi thi isiliye...
Aur heroine,...
Hmmm...let me think
Kaha thi kaha thi...*tapping finger on cheeks*
ha abhi nhi bataungi...
Age pado pata chal jayegi...😉😆

maja aya na...
Main bhi likhte waqt wohi soch rhi thi...
Aur i was like apne writing pe khud has rhi thi...😆
me too love her na...isiliye to aise shararatoon pe daal deti hoon...😉

Aur boht wait...kyun ki maine abhi part 8 likh rhi hoon & i don't right her full name yet...
So keep waiting...

main kyun batau kon hai...
Jo bhi hai...
Baad me pata chalegi na...
abhi to u can keep guessing for that...
Kyun ki maine bhi nhi sochi abhi tak kisko banau uski best frnd...😉😛😆

Btw achi baat hai lovely has to stay back...
Kyun achi baat hai woh bhi nhi bataungi.😛

Cute...lets see cute hoti hai yea kuch aur...😆

yeh to armaan ki speciality hai...intro nhi padi thi kya...wohi pe to bvatayi thi with song...😆

are abhi kaha
Milna to ho hi jayegi...
Aur kya kya ajube hogi woh bhi pata chal jayegi...
Btw nazar se nazar takrane bas kuch hi palo ki der hai...
So dion't worry

Hmmm
Lets see...
isbaar sahi hoti hai yea wrong
but don't worry woh bhi pata chal jayegi in next part kyun chillayi..
Kis liye chilayi..
Kiski wajah se chilayi...
aur kon kon chilayi...

APU
DID U SAY IT WAS SHORT...
ITS the same length as before...
but thodi si cut ki maine coz from lst parts mujhe 2part me post karni padti thi aur boht time lag jati hai...
Toh maine ek hi bar me post ho jay uski koushish kia bas...

lvs u alsooo
Dherrr
Saraaa
Tc

Hayye tumne kitna accha kaam kiya na

I mean easy quiz dekh ke... hehehe...

Accha, aage pata toh chalega na???

Bata na zarur haan... bhul toh nhi jaungi hehehe

Haan. bohot zyada maza aaya...

Maza toh aana hi ta na... After all tumhari writing hatke jo hota hai...

I was laughing too heheehe... Yah Even I just love her and her shararat...

Hailaa, matlab part 8 tak bhi pata nehi chalega...

Plz itna zyada wait mat karwana hum khudh bhul jaenge Minnie ki asli naam Minnie nehi kuch aur hai hehehe...

Hmm Koan hai kyun kiya sabke liyeh wait karna padega...

Koi nehi... Ek na ek din toh pata chalna hi hai hehehe...

Hahahaha Accha, nehi bataungi...

Waise I don't mind...hahaha mujhe pata laga ni bhi nehi hai until AR is together bas koi aur nehi chahiyeh mujhe hehehe...

Oh ho together means not like that together... Mil gaye na dono, itna kaafi hai hehehe...

Lolz, har koi baat ke liyeh wait pe kyun bita rahi ho...

tik hai tik hai wait karlenge... itna wait ki aur wait kar sakti hoon hehehe...

Yeah, thats right... Armaan ki speciality hai flirt karna...

Hehehe nehi nehi padi na... Aisa ho sakta hai intro nehi padi...

Waise zyada toh padti hoon intro ff's mein kynki then character ke baare mein bohot kuch pata chal jaenge u know...

But tumhare intro bhi tumhare ff ke tarah hatke hai hehehe...

lolz, sahi kaha...

Already next part pad chuki hoon... and u r right...

Bohot kuch hone wala hai yeh dono milte rahenge toh hahaha...

haan haan sab answer milgayi...

Doh guess toh right ti hehehe... but third guess sahi nehi ti... no problem...

teen mein se doh sahi hona bohot badi baat hai mere liyeh hahaha...

Yesss BABY GIRL...

I SAID IT WAS SHORT hahahaha...

Accha , shayad mujhe padne ka itna mann ho rahi ti toh mujhe laga hoga short hai hehehe...

U know how it is being a reader and writer na ;)

Muwaahhh love u more...

Take care...

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Wohooo awesome part baby girl...

Hmm lets start from the starting of this part...

Meri two guesses correct ta hahahaa...

But third guess sahi nehi ta... no problem... maine socha Minnie waapas aakhe chillaya hoga but yeh toh airhostess nikli hehehe...

Lolz, Armaan ne kissi koh hasane ke liyeh kiya and bechari doh ladki koh dara diya...

Lekin woh chota sa ladka hasi toh sahi... Armaan mission complete hehehe...

Masttt ta...

Oh ho, again Ridz couldn't see Armaan face... Koi nehi... kab tak nehi dekhenge hehehe...

Lol, Armaan koh laga uska imagination ta haahaha... not bad...

Baapre, Ridz toh bohot zyada gusse mein hai...

Accha huva nehi dekha, nehi toh pata nehi kiya hoga us waqt...

But milna toh hai hi na...

At lasttt, dono milgaye hehehe...

Lekin yeh kya, hamesha ke tarah dono hero heroine ke beech takrar hogaya hahaha...

Humhare liyeh accha hai... tohda fight shight ke baad hi sahi, dil toh milne hi wala hai... Kynki yehi toh har pyar ki shuruwat hai...

Yeyyy, Minnie also met Armaan again hahaha...

Lolz, yeh dono toh same time baat kar rahi hai saat saat...

Hahaha Ridz Armaan koh Mr.Ball bol rahi hai hahaha... Niceee...

Lolz, Armaan introducing and Ridz Reply was mast hahaha... Can imagine Armaan expression lolz and Minnie bhi kam nehi hai, maza le rahi hai humhari tarah hahaha...

Oh ho, yeh dono toh pehli meeting mein hi shuru hogayi ufff...

Bechari Minnie phas gayi dono ke beech ahaha...

Wohooo, Armaan ne nickname de diya hehehe... Its a official tag now, Ridz nickname can be only Basket when it comes to Armaan and that makes their relation sso unique...

Kitna accha tom and jerry show ta, Minnie ne rokha kyun... hehehe...

Chalo tik hai, after all they were on a plane...

Hahaha, yeh Armaan bhi na... kabhi koi moka nehi chodte flirt karne mein...

Aur Ridz, yeh bhi Armaan ke baare mein abhi se soch rahi hai hehehe...

Wohooo, Minnie ne bhaga diya usko hahahah...

Armaan and Minnie ki conversation was super and cute... Minnie acting like a possessive girlfriend hahaha... too cute mahnnn...

Then Minnie telling about Riddhima fear and Armaan help Ridz on his way hehehe...

By god it was fun how Armaan was making Ridz irritate...

Did just Armaan sing that song hahaha... Its very perfect for him ;)

Then Ridz commenting on his face and Armaan getting little offense about his look hahaha...

Waise yeh baat toh Armaan ne bilkul sahi kaha... Uske chehre pe bohot ladkiyan marte hai hehehe...

Wah wah kiya answer diya hai Ridz ne hahaha...

Finally after all the drama's, Ridz realized what Armaan did and thanking him...

Typical Riddhima Gupta is back hahaha... Ary wah thanks ke saat saat sorry bhi milgaye Armaan koh free mein... lucky guy hahaha...

omg... hahaha I m laughing on what Armaan just said badle mein hahaha...

Aur Riddhima react na kare aisa ho sakti hai kiya...

Armaan also being Armaan, baat koh badhal ke Ridz koh kehdiya woh dirty sochte hai hahaha...

Ridz hogayi phirse gussa hehee...

Awesome song sequence... Love it and description was superbbb...

Everything was so perfect and I enjoy the song as well hehehe...

Aur Armaan ne kiya starting ki hai... Lolz Ridz reaction was superb hahaha...

I like when she say Mr.Ball hahaha...

At lasttt, they reach to their destination...

The way Armaan was getting near her and thn Ridz wake up... How Armaan make an excuse hehehe... cuteee...

As soon as they leave the plane Ridz trying to escape from Armaan hahaha...

Hmmm I m sure Minnie would tell this to Armaan, issiliyeh toh gayab hogayi tohdi der ke liyeh... Kuch toh pkha ke aaye hai yeh ladki uske boyfriend ke saat hehehe...

I love the way Ridz pamper Minnie and take care of her all the time...

Ridz always do for everyone but bohot kam FF's mein aisa hota hai Ridz take care of a small sister... Nehi toh hamesha uski badi behen Anjali hoti hai still she used to take care of everyone else leaving herself...

Aur yeh koan aagayiii... Haahahh Ridz ke comment sunke toh aisa lag raha hai Armaan hi hai...

OMG, did u just make him as a waiter hahahaha...

I m sure Armaan ne jaanbhuj ke kiya yeh hahahaha... Just to irritate Ridz and as usual Minnie would help him hahahaha to bring Ridz to the restaurant...

I can imagine Minnie cute giggle hahaha, I love her giggle like that in DMG...

So over roll, it was fun, super awesome, cute and adorable part...

Love it from the starting to end... Love the song sequence...

Continue super soon... Muwhhh...

Happy New Year hehehe...

Love u moreee...

Take care...

P.S

Zyada late toh nehi huva na... hehehe

Actually I have read that day when u update but being the lazy girl, didn't want to open the lap and comment...

Lekin jab majboor hogayi toh socha comment bhi kar hi dete hai heheh...

Muwaahhh Love u <3 and I know I m not late...

Next update se pehle jo comment ki hahaha...

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Aisha Akhter

@Ruppkotha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
Wohooo awesome part baby girl...
Hmm lets start from the starting of this part...

Meri two guesses correct ta hahahaa...
But third guess sahi nehi ta... no problem... maine socha Minnie waapas aakhe chillaya hoga but yeh toh airhostess nikli hehehe...
Lolz, Armaan ne kissi koh hasane ke liyeh kiya and bechari doh ladki koh dara diya...
Lekin woh chota sa ladka hasi toh sahi... Armaan mission complete hehehe...
Masttt ta...

Oh ho, again Ridz couldn't see Armaan face... Koi nehi... kab tak nehi dekhenge hehehe...
Lol, Armaan koh laga uska imagination ta haahaha... not bad...

Baapre, Ridz toh bohot zyada gusse mein hai...
Accha huva nehi dekha, nehi toh pata nehi kiya hoga us waqt...
But milna toh hai hi na...

At lasttt, dono milgaye hehehe...
Lekin yeh kya, hamesha ke tarah dono hero heroine ke beech takrar hogaya hahaha...
Humhare liyeh accha hai... tohda fight shight ke baad hi sahi, dil toh milne hi wala hai... Kynki yehi toh har pyar ki shuruwat hai...

Yeyyy, Minnie also met Armaan again hahaha...
Lolz, yeh dono toh same time baat kar rahi hai saat saat...
Hahaha Ridz Armaan koh Mr.Ball bol rahi hai hahaha... Niceee...
Lolz, Armaan introducing and Ridz Reply was mast hahaha... Can imagine Armaan expression lolz and Minnie bhi kam nehi hai, maza le rahi hai humhari tarah hahaha...

Oh ho, yeh dono toh pehli meeting mein hi shuru hogayi ufff...
Bechari Minnie phas gayi dono ke beech ahaha...
Wohooo, Armaan ne nickname de diya hehehe... Its a official tag now, Ridz nickname can be only Basket when it comes to Armaan and that makes their relation sso unique...
Kitna accha tom and jerry show ta, Minnie ne rokha kyun... hehehe...
Chalo tik hai, after all they were on a plane...

Hahaha, yeh Armaan bhi na... kabhi koi moka nehi chodte flirt karne mein...
Aur Ridz, yeh bhi Armaan ke baare mein abhi se soch rahi hai hehehe...
Wohooo, Minnie ne bhaga diya usko hahahah...
Armaan and Minnie ki conversation was super and cute... Minnie acting like a possessive girlfriend hahaha... too cute mahnnn...
Then Minnie telling about Riddhima fear and Armaan help Ridz on his way hehehe...
By god it was fun how Armaan was making Ridz irritate...
Did just Armaan sing that song hahaha... Its very perfect for him ;)
Then Ridz commenting on his face and Armaan getting little offense about his look hahaha...
Waise yeh baat toh Armaan ne bilkul sahi kaha... Uske chehre pe bohot ladkiyan marte hai hehehe...
Wah wah kiya answer diya hai Ridz ne hahaha...

Finally after all the drama's, Ridz realized what Armaan did and thanking him...
Typical Riddhima Gupta is back hahaha... Ary wah thanks ke saat saat sorry bhi milgaye Armaan koh free mein... lucky guy hahaha...
omg... hahaha I m laughing on what Armaan just said badle mein hahaha...
Aur Riddhima react na kare aisa ho sakti hai kiya...
Armaan also being Armaan, baat koh badhal ke Ridz koh kehdiya woh dirty sochte hai hahaha...
Ridz hogayi phirse gussa hehee...

Awesome song sequence... Love it and description was superbbb...
Everything was so perfect and I enjoy the song as well hehehe...
Aur Armaan ne kiya starting ki hai... Lolz Ridz reaction was superb hahaha...
I like when she say Mr.Ball hahaha...

At lasttt, they reach to their destination...
The way Armaan was getting near her and thn Ridz wake up... How Armaan make an excuse hehehe... cuteee...
As soon as they leave the plane Ridz trying to escape from Armaan hahaha...
Hmmm I m sure Minnie would tell this to Armaan, issiliyeh toh gayab hogayi tohdi der ke liyeh... Kuch toh pkha ke aaye hai yeh ladki uske boyfriend ke saat hehehe...
I love the way Ridz pamper Minnie and take care of her all the time...
Ridz always do for everyone but bohot kam FF's mein aisa hota hai Ridz take care of a small sister... Nehi toh hamesha uski badi behen Anjali hoti hai still she used to take care of everyone else leaving herself...

Aur yeh koan aagayiii... Haahahh Ridz ke comment sunke toh aisa lag raha hai Armaan hi hai...
OMG, did u just make him as a waiter hahahaha...
I m sure Armaan ne jaanbhuj ke kiya yeh hahahaha... Just to irritate Ridz and as usual Minnie would help him hahahaha to bring Ridz to the restaurant...
I can imagine Minnie cute giggle hahaha, I love her giggle like that in DMG...

So over roll, it was fun, super awesome, cute and adorable part...
Love it from the starting to end... Love the song sequence...
Continue super soon... Muwhhh...
Happy New Year hehehe...
Love u moreee...
Take care...

P.S
Zyada late toh nehi huva na... hehehe
Actually I have read that day when u update but being the lazy girl, didn't want to open the lap and comment...
Lekin jab majboor hogayi toh socha comment bhi kar hi dete hai heheh...
Muwaahhh Love u <3 and I know I m not late...
Next update se pehle jo comment ki hahaha...

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Ab pad liya to pata chal gayi na...😉
Meri line mujhe hi cut paste kardi i used to say that na...
That apne likha hai to maja to ana hi tha

Nh nhi bhulogi nhi
Agar bhul bhi gaye to wo song yaad hai na...

Kiska hai yeh tumko intezar
Main hoon na

& waise it will more late revealing minnie's name coz uske liye ar ko phirse milna jo padega..
Jo itni jaldi to hone nhi wali...

Waise apko kaise pata AR together hogi ya nhi
meri mind change hone me der nhi lagti na
To kya pata dono ko last milwau ya aise hi chod du...
u see...u can never say that
if u r thinking they will live happilly ever after toh to bhul jao itni jaldi kaha...😆

isiliye kyun ki intezar ka faal mitha hota hai
ha woh to hai...boht kuch aur bhi baki hai...😉😆

HOW...IT was the same length apu...like previous one but ha pic thodi jayda thi...

Now new parts comment...

Lvs u a lotttsss
yea lets start...
Wohooo
u commented in every bit of part
awww
I love u a lotsss[u know right this is my way to say thanks]

yea i know...
mujhe lagi thi sabko yehi lagegi that its minnie to isiliye maine jaan bhujh ke minnie ko late karwa di...😛
ha toh jaise daraya waise khud bhi to dar gayi na...
As he also shouted

yea... Wo logo e hasi batte rehte hai to isiliye kiya

u liked it ..i m glad for that

Are kab tak bhagegi ek hi plane me hai to ana to wohi hai..u see
yea finalllyyy
they meet

waise yeh to sahi hai
But nhi mila toh..
I mean takkar k baad pyar nhi ayi toh...

yea i thought wo basket to ye ball dono milke basket ball...😉😛😆
Aur m,minnie ko to maja leni hi thi
Akhir aise situation pe beith k sirf nazare dekhne se hi bade maje ate hai

yea kind of as it opted from Dmg only
Are abhi roka toh kya hua...
yeh dono ek sath hai aur chup hai matlab tom & jerry show pe break chal rhi hai
Phir se shuru ho jayenge uska kya hai
yea..on plane
isiliye ek dusre se jayada dur bhag bhi nhi sakte

Are abhi kaha yeh to general hai
kisi ko flirt karne dekha to usually log raise eye brows na
But when they get used they just ignore it..
thats what happened here also

ha kisiko to akhir armaan ki izzat ki raksha k liye bhi rakhna chahiye na...😉😆

Are ridz kaha sunti hai armaan ki baat shanti se
Agar shanti se sunti to armaan irritate thodi hi karta..

u knoe apki comment padte wat my cheeks are hurting now...
Coz hearing awesome u loved it perfect & all now my mouth goes like...😃

yea abhi to ball k age mister laga k thodi izzat de di
But baad me dekhna kya kya aur lagati hai ball k age

yea kuch paka ke jarur ayi hai...
Dekhna next part pe wo

hmm its coz her family is not around
warna yeh ridz jaise sabki care karte hai waise tang bhi karte hai..
just wait & watch...
Coz dono behen k rishte itni mithi mithi to all time nhi ho sakti isme khatti-tikhi ka tadka bhi to dena hai abhi...😆

Amine kuch nhi ki
Sachi me*with innocent look*
Jo kia jo ayi hai phir se usne kia...
Maine thofdi ma kisi ko bola waiter banne ko...
Btw

i ws thinking to update as kaam karne ka mann nhi hai aur classes got cancel due to wo kal batai thi na usiliye
But soch rhi hoon kya karu...
lvs u the mosttt
tc...

PS:
Bilkul jayada nhi hua...
Aur likhte toh bhi jayada nhi hoti
I mean u comment on evry bit of the part
I feeling so blessed..❤️
yea u r not
& i don't think u culd b as maine har part post se pehle apko batati jarur hoon na
lvs u lots lots lots
tc

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Rihoo Haws

@RihooHaws

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Reply of previous comment

Ab pad liya to pata chal gayi na...😉
Meri line mujhe hi cut paste kardi i used to say that na...
That apne likha hai to maja to ana hi tha

Nh nhi bhulogi nhi
Agar bhul bhi gaye to wo song yaad hai na...

Kiska hai yeh tumko intezar
Main hoon na

& waise it will more late revealing minnie's name coz uske liye ar ko phirse milna jo padega..
Jo itni jaldi to hone nhi wali...

Waise apko kaise pata AR together hogi ya nhi
meri mind change hone me der nhi lagti na
To kya pata dono ko last milwau ya aise hi chod du...
u see...u can never say that
if u r thinking they will live happilly ever after toh to bhul jao itni jaldi kaha...😆

isiliye kyun ki intezar ka faal mitha hota hai
ha woh to hai...boht kuch aur bhi baki hai...😉😆

HOW...IT was the same length apu...like previous one but ha pic thodi jayda thi...

Now new parts comment...

Lvs u a lotttsss
yea lets start...
Wohooo
u commented in every bit of part
awww
I love u a lotsss[u know right this is my way to say thanks]

yea i know...
mujhe lagi thi sabko yehi lagegi that its minnie to isiliye maine jaan bhujh ke minnie ko late karwa di...😛
ha toh jaise daraya waise khud bhi to dar gayi na...
As he also shouted

yea... Wo logo e hasi batte rehte hai to isiliye kiya

u liked it ..i m glad for that

Are kab tak bhagegi ek hi plane me hai to ana to wohi hai..u see
yea finalllyyy
they meet

waise yeh to sahi hai
But nhi mila toh..
I mean takkar k baad pyar nhi ayi toh...

yea i thought wo basket to ye ball dono milke basket ball...😉😛😆
Aur m,minnie ko to maja leni hi thi
Akhir aise situation pe beith k sirf nazare dekhne se hi bade maje ate hai

yea kind of as it opted from Dmg only
Are abhi roka toh kya hua...
yeh dono ek sath hai aur chup hai matlab tom & jerry show pe break chal rhi hai
Phir se shuru ho jayenge uska kya hai
yea..on plane
isiliye ek dusre se jayada dur bhag bhi nhi sakte

Are abhi kaha yeh to general hai
kisi ko flirt karne dekha to usually log raise eye brows na
But when they get used they just ignore it..
thats what happened here also

ha kisiko to akhir armaan ki izzat ki raksha k liye bhi rakhna chahiye na...😉😆

Are ridz kaha sunti hai armaan ki baat shanti se
Agar shanti se sunti to armaan irritate thodi hi karta..

u knoe apki comment padte wat my cheeks are hurting now...
Coz hearing awesome u loved it perfect & all now my mouth goes like...😃

yea abhi to ball k age mister laga k thodi izzat de di
But baad me dekhna kya kya aur lagati hai ball k age

yea kuch paka ke jarur ayi hai...
Dekhna next part pe wo

hmm its coz her family is not around
warna yeh ridz jaise sabki care karte hai waise tang bhi karte hai..
just wait & watch...
Coz dono behen k rishte itni mithi mithi to all time nhi ho sakti isme khatti-tikhi ka tadka bhi to dena hai abhi...😆

Amine kuch nhi ki
Sachi me*with innocent look*
Jo kia jo ayi hai phir se usne kia...
Maine thofdi ma kisi ko bola waiter banne ko...
Btw

i ws thinking to update as kaam karne ka mann nhi hai aur classes got cancel due to wo kal batai thi na usiliye
But soch rhi hoon kya karu...
lvs u the mosttt
tc...

PS:
Bilkul jayada nhi hua...
Aur likhte toh bhi jayada nhi hoti
I mean u comment on evry bit of the part
I feeling so blessed..❤️
yea u r not
& i don't think u culd b as maine har part post se pehle apko batati jarur hoon na
lvs u lots lots lots
tc

Hahaha yeah pad toh li Abhi...

Lolz, nehi nehi maine tumhari line kyun chori karungi...

when u said only maine socha and I realized it hehehe...

Accha, bohot zyada wait karna padega...

Hmmm no other option kiya... secretly mere koh batao na plzzz...

Kyunki mein jaanti hoon u will not like to separate them...

But till u want to then karo karo... Shauk se karo hahaha..

Waise hope rakhne se kiya chali jaenge ;)

Na meri kuch bigdenge na teri haina ;)

Hehehe Mujhe kaise pata... Yeh toh tum jaanongi na...

Aur tumhe pata haina readers ke demands hamesha high hote hai...

Kuch bhi likho karo, kam hi lagti hai heheh...

Lolz, comment toh har bit of the part pe likhna hi padta haina...

After all tumne itna accha jo likha hai, hayye... I m loving it every day more and more...

Haan haan mujhe pta hai I love u ka dusra meaning kiya hai hehehe... Muwaahhh

Hahaha, accha...

Bohot smart ho tum but boht accha ta plan...

Lolz, sahi kaha... Armaan bhi toh dar gayi... Lekin kisse dekh ke dar gayi woh...

Ridz koh ya airhostess koh hahaha...

Like??? I toh love it hehehe...

Lolz, sahi hai... Kitni din tak time tak bhaagengi yeh log...

Milna toh hai hi ek dusre se ek na ek din toh yaha pe kyun nehi right hehehe...

Pyar nehi huva toh kuch aur toh hoga hi na hahaha...

Lekin takkar toh zarur hogi right...

pyar vyar un dono pe ya should I say tujhpe chod dena chahiyeh hehehe...

Wah wah, kiya connection kara diya tumne dono ka hahahaa...

Well done... Like I said tu toh ek hi piece hai hehehe...

Sirf tu hi aise soch sakte hai... Basket and ball milenge toh hojaenge basketball hahaha... niceee...

Sahi kaha, aise moment toh bas dekh ke enjoy karne ka hai hehehe...

Tab jo maza aati hai hayye, kaise bataun lolzzz...

After all humhe bhi toh padne mein kitna maza aa rahi hai right hehehe...

hahaha Sahi kaha ...

Break toh banta haina bosss... Aur dono ek plane mein ho aur shuru na ho, aise toh un dono ke dreams mein bhi nehi hoga ab hahaha...

I know, ridz toh kissi ki baat shaanti se sunti nehi hai hahaha...

Thats why Armaan likes to irritate her so much... Nehi toh woh aur logo koh irritate karti nehi bas Ridz koh karne mein usko maza aati hai because she react so much on his talks...

Ayye Hayye...

Haste raho muskuraate raho...

Kyunkiii mein toh aise comment hi dungi aage se bhi insha Allah hahaha...

Ab mujhe awesome and super mindblowing lagti toh waise hi bolenge na...

Tohdi na bolenge not super heheh...

Lolz, aage woh izzat bhi khone wali hai kiya Armaan hahaha...

But I really like the way she say MR. BALL... Woh MR laga te toh aur zyada pasand aati hai mujhe hehehe...

Of course dekhungi na... I m sooo excited to know kiya pakaya hai dono ne Ridz ke liyeh hehehe...

mann toh kar raha hai waha tere ghar abhi poch jaun aur teri complete updates padlun :P

U and I know its not possible only na hahaha... Bas dream main mil sakti hai hahaha...

Accha... Means Ridzy ki two sides hai hehehe...

Yes yes yes yes yesss will wait for more more more and many moreee...

Hhahaha sahi kaha hai... Dono meeti meeti hogi toh diabeties hone ka dar lagega... Acchai khatti meeti tikhi bhi bana doh hehehe...

Hahahaa... Haan haan tu kabhi kuch kar hi nehi sakti...

Yeh toh Minnie and Armaan ka plan hoga... Phirse ridz koh irritate karne ke liyeh hehhe..

Hahahaha, New year toh 4din pehle hogayi but lagta hai abhi mere liyeh start huva hai...

U know what I mean na ;)

So Happy new year to u too three four five hehehe...

Hmmm socho socho...

Kyunki mere koh bohttt mann kar rahi hai next part padne koh...

U know bohot zyada excited hoon hehehe...

muwaahhh Love u too the most hehehe...

Take care...

P.S.

hahaha I knew I wasn't...

Hayye... its my pleasure darling to know that u feel so much blesssed...

hahaha yeah..

Muwaahhh love u too lots lots lots lots and more lotsss...

Take care...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Hahaha yeah pad toh li Abhi...
Lolz, nehi nehi maine tumhari line kyun chori karungi...
when u said only maine socha and I realized it hehehe...

Accha, bohot zyada wait karna padega...
Hmmm no other option kiya... secretly mere koh batao na plzzz...

Kyunki mein jaanti hoon u will not like to separate them...
But till u want to then karo karo... Shauk se karo hahaha..
Waise hope rakhne se kiya chali jaenge ;)
Na meri kuch bigdenge na teri haina ;)

Hehehe Mujhe kaise pata... Yeh toh tum jaanongi na...
Aur tumhe pata haina readers ke demands hamesha high hote hai...
Kuch bhi likho karo, kam hi lagti hai heheh...

Lolz, comment toh har bit of the part pe likhna hi padta haina...
After all tumne itna accha jo likha hai, hayye... I m loving it every day more and more...
Haan haan mujhe pta hai I love u ka dusra meaning kiya hai hehehe... Muwaahhh

Hahaha, accha...
Bohot smart ho tum but boht accha ta plan...
Lolz, sahi kaha... Armaan bhi toh dar gayi... Lekin kisse dekh ke dar gayi woh...
Ridz koh ya airhostess koh hahaha...

Like??? I toh love it hehehe...
Lolz, sahi hai... Kitni din tak time tak bhaagengi yeh log...
Milna toh hai hi ek dusre se ek na ek din toh yaha pe kyun nehi right hehehe...

Pyar nehi huva toh kuch aur toh hoga hi na hahaha...
Lekin takkar toh zarur hogi right...
pyar vyar un dono pe ya should I say tujhpe chod dena chahiyeh hehehe...

Wah wah, kiya connection kara diya tumne dono ka hahahaa...
Well done... Like I said tu toh ek hi piece hai hehehe...
Sirf tu hi aise soch sakte hai... Basket and ball milenge toh hojaenge basketball hahaha... niceee...

Sahi kaha, aise moment toh bas dekh ke enjoy karne ka hai hehehe...
Tab jo maza aati hai hayye, kaise bataun lolzzz...
After all humhe bhi toh padne mein kitna maza aa rahi hai right hehehe...

hahaha Sahi kaha ...
Break toh banta haina bosss... Aur dono ek plane mein ho aur shuru na ho, aise toh un dono ke dreams mein bhi nehi hoga ab hahaha...
I know, ridz toh kissi ki baat shaanti se sunti nehi hai hahaha...
Thats why Armaan likes to irritate her so much... Nehi toh woh aur logo koh irritate karti nehi bas Ridz koh karne mein usko maza aati hai because she react so much on his talks...

Ayye Hayye...
Haste raho muskuraate raho...
Kyunkiii mein toh aise comment hi dungi aage se bhi insha Allah hahaha...
Ab mujhe awesome and super mindblowing lagti toh waise hi bolenge na...
Tohdi na bolenge not super heheh...

Lolz, aage woh izzat bhi khone wali hai kiya Armaan hahaha...
But I really like the way she say MR. BALL... Woh MR laga te toh aur zyada pasand aati hai mujhe hehehe...
Of course dekhungi na... I m sooo excited to know kiya pakaya hai dono ne Ridz ke liyeh hehehe...
mann toh kar raha hai waha tere ghar abhi poch jaun aur teri complete updates padlun :P
U and I know its not possible only na hahaha... Bas dream main mil sakti hai hahaha...

Accha... Means Ridzy ki two sides hai hehehe...
Yes yes yes yes yesss will wait for more more more and many moreee...
Hhahaha sahi kaha hai... Dono meeti meeti hogi toh diabeties hone ka dar lagega... Acchai khatti meeti tikhi bhi bana doh hehehe...

Hahahaa... Haan haan tu kabhi kuch kar hi nehi sakti...
Yeh toh Minnie and Armaan ka plan hoga... Phirse ridz koh irritate karne ke liyeh hehhe..
Hahahaha, New year toh 4din pehle hogayi but lagta hai abhi mere liyeh start huva hai...
U know what I mean na ;)
So Happy new year to u too three four five hehehe...

Hmmm socho socho...
Kyunki mere koh bohttt mann kar rahi hai next part padne koh...
U know bohot zyada excited hoon hehehe...
muwaahhh Love u too the most hehehe...
Take care...

P.S.
hahaha I knew I wasn't...
Hayye... its my pleasure darling to know that u feel so much blesssed...
hahaha yeah..
Muwaahhh love u too lots lots lots lots and more lotsss...
Take care...

Acha ji
Toh aise baat hai...

Acha secreaty li janna hai...
Uhmmm let me think...(tapping index finger on cheeks with lost look)
Soch k bataungi...😉😛😆

That's bad u shouldn't know that*with complaining eyes lower lips out with blinking eyes twice*
Chalo koi gal nhi yeh janti ho to kya hua...
Aur bhi boht kuch hai yaha jo ap nhi jante
& u can't even imagine main kya soch rhi hoon...
Huhehahahaha...😈

Achi baat hai pata hai...
Warna mera kya hoti...*with head side ways two hands on ears filmy look*😆

Woh na armaan dono chikh sunke dar gayi..
Aur woh to soch rhi thi ridz imaginashion hai to usse dekh k kaise dare huh...batao...😉

Waise what do u mean by kuch aur huh...
batao batao...*with one brow up suspecious look*

Shukriya ...*with head little bow down in filmy style*

yes...break banta hai
Kyunb ki

Kitkat break banta hai...😉😆

Waise ap not super nologi toh bhi i won't mind...😆

Chalo apki khatir abhi k liye mr.ball hi kehte hai
But i really think jab mr hata denge to apko jayada maja ayegi..

ha ha ajao man kisne kia hai...😉
u r always invited..
aogi toh batana i'll go airport to recieve u
U know meri uni k boht pass hai airport
But ghar se boht dur..
Are aise kyun
milenge na sirf dream me milna thodi hi
Jab kismat me likha hogi jarur milenge
In-Sha-Allah

yup...
Evryone has different sides na...
Aur ridz toh yaha ki multi media hai..u see

new year khatam kaha
Abhi toh shuru hui hai...
Age toh puri saal baki
So Happpyyy
Newww
Yearrr
Till evry year whenever its comes around...till ure whole life...😳

Chalo thik hai ap itni excited ho toh i m thinking aj ya kal kuch sochti hoon..😉
Waise i hv time but let me think...

lv u alsooo
Itnaaa🤗🤗🤗
Saraaa🤗
Tc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Thanks Once Again for all the love & support u all did by liking & commenting...(for some specific persons no thanks but lv u all a lots)

Well i want to dedicate this part to one of my new friend urf choti behen KitKat

Chalo i know u r surprised

As u didn't expect anything

But i think to give u it as a surprise by dedicating this part to u as ur late bd gift...(as tab to tumhe janti nhi thi na...😉😛)

& i know u love surprises so I hope u like ur gift though it is late...

So here goes the story ...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.

Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...

Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...

Shukriya...

Precap:
Ek shararaat se puri hui yeh mulakat

Gusse me bhi ek ne dia susre ki sath

Asmaan me Rangoon bhari mulakatoon ki sez bichayi

Anjane me hi sahi dono khub sath nivhai

Jameen pe utar aye ye dono jab

Dekhna yeh hai kya aur hungamma hogi ab?????

Part 6

Riddhima(nearly shouting at him):Tum???Yaha kya kar rahe ho...?

Armaan(Bringing a chair while sitting with them): Girlfrnd apne jiji ko batao jara mehmaan se aise baat nhi karte hai

Riddhima(frowning with confused look): yaha mehman kon hai?

Armaan(pointing with hand to him): Main aur koan?

Riddhima(pointing her index finger on him): tum?(then raising one brow up)aur wo kabse jaha tak I know mujhe to yehi lagta hai that u r from india only to yaha k citizen to apni hi desh me mehman nhi hoti hai

Armaan(Smiling naughtily):Nice observation basket waise maine expect to nhi ki thi but u did notice me...huh(nudging at her arm)& main hoon yehi ka but abhi to tum dono k liye iss table me travel hi kar rhi hoon ma...so hui na tumhari mehmaan..

Riddhima holding her head with one hand then stretch her hair then just got up to place her & minnie's order..

While placing order she look back & saw armaan & Minnie talking while Minnie laughing hearing some jokes which armaan cracked...

She smile & place some order for him also.

Riddhima picked her ordered food & go back to her sit after paying for it.

When she reached she saw armaan keep talking with Minnie..while Minnie was continuously laughing hearing him armaan cracked another jokes...

Armaan(he noticed that riddhima is coming so he said):Acha ek sher ab tumhare jiji k naam...

Asmaan me tum ho,

Samundar me tum ho,

Zamin pe tum, hawa me tum,

Jahan b dekho tum hi tum ho.

DOMEX wali aunty thik kehti thi KITANU har jagah hote hain.

Riddhima hear it & got irritated in next second as till now she was thinking wo kuch jayada rude ho rhi hai but uske jokes sunke riddhima ka gussa phirse wapas agayi aur she ignored as if she didn't hear anything & place the foods while placing some food before armaan also.Armaan got confused as she kept food before him as he didn't order anything.he was going to ask when riddhima said clearing his doubt.

Riddhima(clenching her teeth looking at Minnie as armaan's joke already makes her irritated again): Minnie apne boyfrnd se bol yeh kha le aur waise bhi khate waqt jayada baat nhi karni chahiye..aur yeh kya tujhe jokes sunati hai main tujhe sunati hoon na...

Ek yug tha jab log apne ghar ke dwar pe likhte the: ATITHI DEVO BHAVA

Phir likha: SHUBH LABH

Phir likhne lage: U R WELCOME

Aur ab likhte hain: KUTTON SE SAVDHAN

Armaan was shocked as she got food for him but secretly smirked then about to say thanks when riddhima cracked the joke & he knew this was for him but before he react she got up to bring her something from counter.

As she was back the joke was long forgotten as armaan again started to c8 with Minnie.

Armaan notice riddhima didn't eat much so he think now again need to do some actions & uski jokes ki badla bhi to leni hai. He nudged Minnie to look at her when Minnie also noticed this.

Armaan (whispering in her ear so that riddhima could not listen): Minnie,tumhari jiji kya humesha se hi aise hai ya aj kuch special hai

Minnie(frowning):Tch boyfrnd meri jiji to boht ache hai wo bilkul aise udas nhi beithte..par aj wo almost 5year baad india aye hai na aur ane se pehle jiji ka call ayi thi unki best frnd ka accident ho gayi jo humare sath ane wali thi..jiji ko last moment pe pata chali na so she can't do anything isiliye shayed unki mood off hai

Armaan (Thinking something): Chalo tumhari jiji k mood thik karte hai(he wink at her & give a hi-fi)

While riddhima was lost in her thought didn't hear anything about their talk.

Armaan (loudly enough to bring riddhima back from her thought): Yooo basket..Aj kuch special hai kya jo tum fast kar rhi ho...

Riddhima(didn't got what he said & suddenly realized actually till now she was just rounding her spoon didn't eat a bit): Tum apna kaam pe dhyaan do main kya khati hoon ya nhi isse tumse matlab...Aur meri koi fast nhi hai

Armaan(then acting as if he got the point): Oh to phir tum diet pe...chalo suits u kamse kam thodi si patli ho jaogi to dharti ka boj thodi to kam ho jayegi.

Riddhima(her mouth open in like O'): Tumne mujhe moti bola...How dare u?

Armaan(making innocent face said):Maine are na ji touba touba(while touching his own checks crossing with both hands)Maine aisa kuch bhi nhi bola sachi me maine to sirf itna bola that u r doing a great job by dieting dharti ka bojh halka ho jayegi..Aur baki who moti wala baat to tumne khud additional part karke beitha dia usme meri kya galti

Riddhima(irritated): U...tumhe to main(While clutching her both hands in air as if armaan's throat is that & she is doing gala dabaw practice)

Armaan(Horrified taking his both hand towards his shirt collar when clutching his shirt tightly): Tumhari irada kuch nek nhi lag rhi hai mujh jaise handsome hot young man ko aise bebas pa kar tum kya karna chahte ho...

Riddhima(making disgusted face): U shut up(then turning towards minnie) Minnie ise bol de yeh chup ho jay sirf teri khatir isse ab tak jhel rhi hoon warna iski to main kabka plane se dhakke marke bahar phikwa deti...

Minnie giggled hearing her then when riddhima glared at her keeping a straight face she said: Boyfrnd meri jiji ko tang mat karo...

Armaan(Winking at riddhima then turning towards Minnie but eyes still fixed on riddhima said): anything for u sweetheart(When riddhima turned towards him glaring him he just added)Waise Minnie aj to hum co-incidentally meet ho gayi but tumne ab tak tumhari jiji ka naam nhi batai(Then again turning towards riddhima)Apne apna nam nhi batai ab tak?

Riddhima(with attitude):As if u don't know?

Armaan(Making innocent face as if very interested to know her name):Really I don't know bas Minnie to jiiji bolti hai naam to bataya bhi nhi main to Minnie se bhi puch sakti thi but wo kya hai na apki muh se sunni thi mujhe..

Riddhima(getting irritated again): look I'm not at all interested about ur all this crap so apki bhasha me kehti hoon..Mehmaan banke aye ho to mehmaan banker hi raho

Armaan(showing an amusing effect with hands & showing amusing expression from face): Aye hayye...Itni kam waqt me meri language bhi bolne lag gaye well that's cool chalo ab to naam bata hi sakti ho..

Riddhima (frustrated with all this):Minnie u stay here I'll b back...

Music start...

A:Kuch To Bata Are Kuch To Bata, [Scene shows armaan goes behind her & sing the song]

R:Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Naaa[scene shows riddhima turned and gesturing with both hands in left & right saying na na na]

A:Phone Ka Number Ghar Ka Pata, [Scene shows riddhima stand in the counter but armaan appear from inside with apron & mask in mouth & gesture her to write down the number in note..while she was going to do that something stuck at her mind & she move the mask from his mouth]

R:Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Naaa[Scene shows after removing mask riddhima hit him with the note pad & said following lines]

A:Tere Liye Hal Hai Yeh[scene shows riddhima started to go but armaan again come in front this time apron little misplaced & he come towards her while walking comically as if just now got beaten up & said following lines]

Dekh Mujhe Tu Yu Na Sata[then gone forward her & removing apron indicating with hands said this lines]

Riddhima goes near the table pick up the bag & said something to Minnie & go When Minnie gestured armaan to go behind her with eyes & wink at him.Riddhima gone to the packing section to ask about their bags.Armaan appears from somewhere & again pleading to forgive him while holding his ear so riddhima finally thought to listen.

R:Kehna Hai Joh Kaho Jaldi Jaldi, [Scene shows riddhima gestured him to continue but he again took out an note pad to ask number & details so riddhima irritate & said following lines & started to leave]

Ver Na Yu Hi Rahon Main To Chaldi

A:Aise Karo Nahin Hi Bye,[scene shows riddhima gone to canteen where Minnie was & taking Minnie's hand started to leave so armaan sing]

Aao Piye Kahin Chai Bai[scene shows armaan force them to sit & present different kind of tea & coffee before them]

R:Samjao Kitni Bar Yeh Koshishe Bekaar,[scene shows riddhima hit her head with hand & sing following lines]

Samjo Mujhko Hai Iinkar

A:Dil Meh Pyar Hai Albetta,[scene shows armaan bending & sing with Minnie & dance while some people also join with them they did the step like one leg at front & waist movement]

R:Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Naaa[scene shows riddhima took menu list & hitting with that at armaan's head & took Minnie with hand goes away ]

Kuch To Bata Are Kuch To Bata,[scene shows armaan again goes behind them & this time he had some board at his hand like in song SRK have]

Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Naaa[scene shows riddhima go away with minnie]

Music end...

Till now riddhima was fully irritated so this time she just totally ignored armaan & then took minnie's hand & walk away from the security board as their all work done. Minnie waved at armaan saying bye & armaan also do the same & give a flying kiss towards them on this exact moment riddhima looked back at him & she was angry & embarrassed as saw him blowing kiss she immediately just turn away.

As they were out now they just catch a cab & both headed out of the airport...

Here armaan smiled thinking about whole flight scene. Then go out & headed towards his home...

After 30min...

Somewhere in a big mansion...

A huge gate of steal decorated like flowery design..

Is Ghar me jo rehte hai wo har ek insaan apne ap me hi alag alag pieces hai..

Why I say piece u will got to know once u know about them..

Opps ghar ki logo k bare me baat karte karte to main ghar ka intro dena hi bhul gayi...

Chalo milvate hai...

Its named as Rangin Ashiyaana

Namoon ki tarah is ghar k taur tarike aur insaan bhi boht hi rangin hai..

Chalo again back to house describe 1^st...

Yeh ghar janemaan jane jigar

Chalo milwate hai tumhe sabse yaar...

so audience meet rangin ashiyaana

& rangin ashiyana meet the audiance

Now the proper intro...

I mean serious wala intro...:p

It's a Beige-blue shade house roofs decorated as castle shape in front but in back its plain roof with a beautiful Terence

A swimming pool start at in front of the house some pool side..

With lots of trees decorating it

This house shows little royal but inside it is occupied with every modern equipment & facilities

The persons who lives here are golden at heart but with different kind occupied in each one...😛

Like the man of the house though he looks like as if koi khatarnak insaan but in real very kind hearted loves her family a lot

The lady of the house is looks like soft one but in real very heard to show for outsiders but in heart she is also very pure...

& the other member's r also verify their personality on their own.

But jaise bhi hai boht ache hai...

In my style kahu to...

Ho maane ya koi maane na

Yahaan apni bhi thodi adaa thoda andaaz hai

Aise hain chaahe waise hain

Arey jo bhi hain jaise hain

Khud pe humein naaz hai

Jaane na humko ye zamaana

Chaaho to humko aazmaana

Hum yaar-baaz hum jaal-saaz

Hum ishq-baaz dilwaale

Kehte hain humko pyar se India waale

Ok..now kaha the hum ..yea ghar ki intro...

There are nearby 15 bed rooms with impressive interior in each one,

Every room have their own specialty in interior..

At the entrance there a beautiful door of glass & wood in side engraved with straight lines

After entering in it...

Scene is like there is a sofa kept in squire

In left there is 2guest room & little forward of it one study & library room attached

& in right side there are kitchen with dinning space

& little further of it a prayer room...

& here when u go near it u can see there is two person peeping from somewhere to see what's happening in the kitchen...

One old lady wearing a pink suit with white salwar & white shawl & one man wearing black Panjabi & pajamas their convo...

Lady (whispering & looking the other person who was above her peeping while pushing him little forward): Tu ja

Man (balancing himself in his position whispering near her ear bending watching to see in the kitchen):Ap jao na...mujhe kyun sherni k muh me dhakel rahi ho..

Lady(Whispering): Abe oy mard ban mard...teri biwi hai aur tu dar to aise rhi hai jaise koi raksash ho aur tujhe dekhte hi kha jayegi..

Man(mockingly said):Oh helloo..Wo apki beti bhi hai,ap kyun darte ho phir ap jao na..

Lady(standing properly & little loud but not enough that the person in the kitchen could hear): Oy main nhi darti..

Man(quickly hold her hand & make her bend & keep his one hand on her mouth): Shhh...dhere bolo agar usne sun liya aur use pata chal gayi that hum phirse...

Lady(quickly putting her hand on his mouth): abe oy shub subh bol...kuch achi nhi bol pati to bura to mat bola kar samjha

Man(Looking at her):Aur jab ap chilla rhi thi tab kuch nhi hua??????

They started bickering like this while whispering...they never realize the person wearing amaranth pink color salwar suit who was working at kitchen come out & saw them like that & next moment she know y they are here again...

Person(looking at them while her hands on her hips): Pata hi tha mujhe ap dono phirse ajaoge...

They both got startled & look at the person & quickly stand up from their siting position. But before they do that they were bath in kitchen rubbish as they both were peeping near the kitchen window & just beside them the rubbish container were put which they didn't notice & not even the servant notice them who just put the rubbishes from window to the container. As the container put there today morning from the kitchen to here they both didn't notice it for that & the servant was overconfidently put the garbage coz sometime this container put out & they always use to put the garbage though window that time.

So now the scene is like the old lady & the man standing in front of the person & in their head kati hui sabzi ki wastages & the person in front of them trying hard to control her laugh watching their state...she almost forgot their deed

Both stand their sar jhukake in front of the person..

Man(Whispering to the old lady): Lagta hai iss bar luck achi hai

Lady(Whispering to the man):Ha lagti hai mood badi achi ho gayi iski...

The person standing there look at the clock hearing the clock ring of hour correct her expression & said: Arit...(a servent comes)saran maine tumhe nhi bulai tum...khair tum a hi gayi ho to yeh saman saaf krdo

Everyone meet saran...

He is working here from a long time

He is like a family member

As he comes from the material house of the person's as in dehej... 😆

I imagine rajpal Yadav at this place & this character is like the same as in film waqt' lakshman charachter

U can imagine any one as ur wish coz this character is out of dmg

So I didn't give any pic of him

Well let's talk about saran

He is a funny character here

His character is like...har baat pe yeh sawal puchte rehte hai itna ki at the end answer dene wala thak jati hai par inki sawal nhi

Inke liye boli jay to...

Inke man me humesha rehte hai...

Ek sawaal main karun,

Ek sawaal tum karo

Har sawaal ka sawaal hi jawaab ho

Now back to story

Saran:Kaha saaf karu?

Person(indicating the place):Waha garbedge stand k pass

Saran(goes there & ask):Sab saaf kardu

Person:Ha sab saaf kardo

Saran(looking at the flower pot):Flower pot bhi saaf kardu

Person:Ha saran sab saaf kardo

Saran(looking at watch):Abhi saaf karu ya baad me

Person(getting irritated):Maine tumhe kab bulai

Saran(lowering his head):Abhi

Person(little high voice):to phir abhi saaf karo

Saran(again ask):Akele saaf karu ya kisi ko leke saaf karu

Person(Irritated by now):Pure barat ko leke saaf karo

Saran(confusingly):par abhi barat kaha se lau

Person:Saran tum abhi k abhi andar jao ek bhi sawal nhi karoge ab tum aur arit ko bhejo(she again saw him to open his mouth to say something)not even a word saran go

Saran nodded & go inside & send the servant called arit

By now the person was totally irritated with saran's question so turn to the man & the lady & saw them trying hard not to laugh

Person(so the effect fall on them):Ap logo ko sharam nhi ati...kitni umar ho gayi hai phir bhi aise harkat karte rehte ho...Aur (turning towards the lady) ap bhi inke sath shamil hogayi..(Then indicating both)Ab kya ap logoko invitation deni padegi ya muhrat nikalwani padegi change karne k liye...jao achi se fresh hoke kapde change karke phir ana warna ajki khana vul jao sirf khichdi milegi khane ko..

Hearing this both of them run towards their respective rooms. After a while the man come back wearing off-white Panjabi-pajamas & lady wearing yellow salwar with black salwar & sawl.

The person go towards them & said:Ache hua ap log agaye main wo dono ane se pehle fresh hone ja rhi hoon but dubara wo sab karne ki sochna bhi mat maine saran ko bolke gayi hoon agar kuch bhi kiya na this time to samajhlena mujhse buri koi nhi hogi...

After hearing her both of their face fall coz they know saran is the last person they would go if the world turn even disaster...coz once they start to try they will fall in badly on their own trap so finally they thought to ignore it.

& then they thought once the persons comes for whom they are waiting eagerly they will also got what they wanted.

After a while the person wearing white salwar kamiz while leaving hair wide open as her husband love it like this only come back & called the man..

Person:suniye

Man:Ha Padma bolo...

Everyone meet Padma Gupta..

She is a gynocologist but don't work regularly basis after her wedding

She loves her family a lot.

Her whole world roarate around it only

Inki character is like

Bahar se kadak but andar se ek boht hi naram dil insaan...

Inke dimag me kab kadak hoti hai aur ka naram hoti hai pata hi nhi chalti

In my style kahu to...

O Teri Mahima Aprampaar

How I Wonder What You Are

Baki about her wil reveal later

Back to the story...

Padma:Apne wo main apse puchne wali thi wo log to ek week baad ane wali thi na phir achanak pre-pond kaise kia plan ko??

Man(looking at the old lady hesitating):Wo...wo wo...kya hai

Lady(backup her):Are padma tu bhi kya bate lekar beith gayi...yeh sari baate toh hoti rahegi tu ja na pehle jake check karle sab thik hai ya nhi unlogo ka ane ki time hogayi dekh...(showing the watch)

Padma(remembering something):Oh ha main to vul hi gayi mujhe to kuch last minitue things karna abbhi baki hai...thanks ma apne yaad dila dia...

Well this lady is the Shanti Kapoor:

She is padma's mom

Though her naam is shanti but unke kaam bilkul bhi kisiko shant rakhne wali nhi hoti hai

She is very caring

Though she is old but her heart is always young

She is like loved her family a lot. Especially her grandchild

Uske liye in my style kahu to...

Thodi Thodi seena zori

Thodi Thodi Matha fodi

Thoda action thoda Jackson

Bbuddah Hoga Tera Baap[opps not baap its ma here...😉 ]

Inki character dmg se thodi si alag hai but baki ka details u will got to know later

Now back to story again...

Padma gone towards kitchen. The man took sigh of relief then turn towards shanti

Man(sighing in relief):Thank god aj toh bach gayi..

Shanti(Scaristicly said):Oy kya god ko thanks bol raha hai...mana god ne bhi rehmet thi but thodi si rehmat teri samne khadi hui is lady ne bhi dikhai to mujhe bhi to thanks bol

Man(rolling eyes):yea right...thanks to u too mate shri...

Shanti(with raising hand):Jeete raho bete...(then lowering her voice)is bar to nikal liye par tune yeh sochi hai jab who dono ake mujhe vali changi dekhegi to unka reaction ki kya jawab dega tu...?

Man(thinking):Ha yeh to maine sochi hi nhi ap batao na..

Shanti(scolding):Shashank...

Here everyone meet one of the most important character Dr. Shashank Gupta

As maine ab tak Padma k intro de diya to sabko to ab tak pata chal hi gayi hogi that yeh aur koi nhi balki shashank gupta hai...

Well he is a famous surgeon...

Loves her family a lot specially his daughters

Well inke daughters kon kon hai wo pata chal jayegi..so wait for that

He is not like dmg wali khadus one

Here he is very supportive & ek aur info hai...

But abhi nhi bata sakti...kyun ki...bad me pata chalegi toh jayada maja ayegi... ;)

To abhi k liye I can say that he is very supportive towards his children specially daughters

& for his daughters he is like daddy cool...

& her daughters are like crazy for him..

In my style kahu to...

She is crazy like a fool. What about it Daddy cool?

I'm crazy like a fool. What about it Daddy Cool?

Daddy Daddy Cool

[sorry isse acha abhi aur kuch yad nhi a rhi hai]

So baki about him u will got to know later...

Back to story again...

Shanti(with little whispering):Toh sochna chaiye tha na kya bolna hai..

Shashank(defending):Maine bola tha kya jhoot bolne ko yeh sab apki plan hai.so ap jano..mujhe kuch nhi pata

Shanti(with sweet coted tone):Beta unko call kon kia tha?

Shashank(Confusingly why she is asking this suddenly):Maine

Shanti(again with same voice):Jhut kisne boli thi

Shashank:Maine(confused with his own thought)

Shanti(little harshly):To phir pakdegi to tujhe hi na...

Shashank(in complaining voice):Yeh cheating hai...meri kya galti hai apne hi boli thi...sari plan apki..jhut bolne ko bola apne aur jab saja k time ayi ap kaha bhag rhi ho mujhe bich raste me chodke...yeh galat hai ma

Shanti(irritated):Abe chup maine kab bola main ja rhi hoon maine sirf tujhe sachai dikhai...aur ab ladne ki waja yeh soch karna kya hai...?

Shashank:Acha to aise bolo na...waise karna kya hai...apki beti ko toh ek pal me sari jhut samajh a jati hai

Shanti(slapping his own forehead with hand):Hey bhagwan...ek baat bata tujhe doctor kisne banai

Shashank:Unhi logo ne jo apki beti ko doctor banai..

Before they continue further bell rings...

Bckground Music start...

Aandhi aayi aandhi aayi aandhi aayi..[Scene shows both of them look at each other with horrified expression]

Bhaag bhaag DK bose, D K bose, D K bose[scene shows though they were tense still they forget all things & started to run towards door watching who can reach first]

Bhaag bhaag DK Bose dk bhaag...

Bg Music stop the door flung open...

Shashank standing there at door & shanti is behind him..& in front of them two girls are standing some bags were behind them..

As soon as they saw shashank both hug them

While the one girl among them started to cry saying: Papa,nani...(but before she continue further her eyes fall on shanti)

As soon as she saw her she leave shashank & with questioning eyes look at shashank.

But before she ask something they here a voice from behind..

That's it for today...

Thanks for the all support

Love u all for that...

I really hope I don't disappoint u coz now-a-days

I don't really know where this characters going...