Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM.😊
I'm so sorry for not commenting on last parts,Please forgive me..😭
It was So Interesting Part.😊
The story was getting was so Interesting day be day.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Hate kunti. she is so selfish and evil.
Feeling sad for karna.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter Hemangi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome...thanks for the PM


Thank You dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

I know I was late but I updated it on 4th Oct.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarti_

Sooo sorry for being late Hemangi di. 😭

Just read parts I missed earlier. Amazing nd last part when Swarna reveals truth. I was like😲 omg!!!!
Plsss update soon na.


Its okay Aarti dear...but yes I was missing u here 😳 & yes I have given quite a twist of VH with the revelation. Do read the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

You want detailed review so here I go..
First of all I never expected sugh abig kahani mein twist!!😲 I didnt expect Swarzz to sit mum bt not revealation in DS... Its like star Ju stole KK daan scene frm star Karna TT Karna stole it frm TT Drau via TT ki maa Hema errr Swana😉🤣 do u have ny idea how I find humour in such serious update😳 but u know how serious writer I am😛
I know nobody expected such a twist in my story but then u r right to guess why Swarna sit idle doing nothing and watch the play as it went before... no she wouldn't And I was miffed with the scene of Star Ju's slurping the cream in Karna's KK daan so there... I have stolen I mean Swarna helped her hubby to steal the scene in VH & on the serious note I did not want TT Drau to go thru the humiliation of being disrobed in the royal court

nyways now to Kunti be it TT, Sid T or original Text wali I never get this character, I loath it at times nd at times I feel some tilt towards it! The MOST shrewd character of the epic!!! She always made sure whatever she got be it out of a mistake its the best... like Karnas birth she made sure that Karna had all his fathers good qualities though it ws a mistake nd she very well knew... I dnt really beleive that she asked all that jst as sheer curosity, there might be some bt nt 100%, also I always had a question why didn't Madri invoke more gods for kids like Kunti was it bcoz Ku didnt allow her as she wanted to be supreme as at that time nly the higest level ny women can reach is being eldest wife nd MOm to more kids, ofcourse she didn't wish Madri to stay barren bt she didnt wish that her saut goes ahead of her also in case of Madri why nly Ashwini kumar twins did she knew her sautan so well nd thus used a clever strategy for two kids so that she remains no less?(again this is just my thought no offense PLEASE!!) okay I think I am going off topic we will discuss this via PM😛
U and I have same views on Kunti so I wont repeat much here. Kunti said that out of curiousity she evoke the sungod by using the magical mantra but she did own up to take the responsibility of infant Karna and decided to abandon him and later his entire life. Not only she was shrewd I say she is coward too. Okay at the teen age she may not have the guts or she may have panicked with the outcome or consequences of being ostracized by the society but what about later. She had number of opportunities but she held back and indirectly played one of the instigator or culprit of what happened at last with Karna.
Regarding KUnti & Madri having sons...okay after seeing Kunti with her 3 sons it was obvious Madri also desired sons of her own. Well I dont think Kunti & Madri's relation was much close...not that I think Madri is a vamp they have shown it all wrong in the show to white wash Kunti again 😡. Madri must have confided to Pandu that she too desired for a child. And then Pandu told Kunti to help Madri with the mantra. Kunti had to follow Pandu even if she may not wish too (maybe). But Madri played smart by invoking the Ashwini twins and got two sons. Kunti may have thought it as a possible threat that next time Madri may summon another set of twin gods... and thus end up with 4 sons to her 3. The sceptre of power may go over to Madri she thought. All this is game to stay in power from her sauten

bck to Kunti I personally dnt think she will accept her fault... NOWAY!! She will never allow her silk white sari ka pallu to be stained with the blackest die!!!! Acc to me she nly let the truth of Karna out to everyone bcoz her consience refused any more burden after his death and the reason behind going to Karna is mostly to save her 5 sons and some percent bcoz of her consience as I dnt really think she didnt knew Karna would have given the throne to Dury!! But again though she faced no less loss she made things turn to her side, she got what she wanted! Throne for sons... No competition for them...
Hhmm... well the next update will tell what I feel about it

Nyways waiting for everyones esp Ku's reply


Thanks for sweet comments I loved discussing it with u 😳 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: appu6

Hii Hemangini, m nt a frequent visitor of ths forum. Bt yesterday I visited n found ur FF. Its jst awesome 👍🏼 i finished it in a day. Plsss update soon. Eagerly waiting fr it...


Thanks dear 😳
I m glad u liked it. Do read my next chapter

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

yepieee🥳

Ps I m still waiting for ur new FFs


I m trying to complete the drafts Sansii but time is becoming the biggest obstacle 😭
I will start one when TT ends 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you dear 😃

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