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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

HahahHahH this is hilarious
Loved the update

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Meera

@sweetlife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

nice update.
waiting for Anjali's reaction.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Oh I feel so sad for my daydreaming heroine. 😭😭 I will be back. Gotta take my daughter to soccer and then will comment.

It was funny how she just found her way to him. They must share a very deep connection for this level of awareness of each other's presence. Her Bollywood singing was hilarious but I guess she thought he was still imaginary like in the car. But he was as much into it as she was. They are both sanki.

Poor Payal must have thought her sister has really lost her marbles when she found her on his lap. Now they know each other's name and family connection. Will he dispell her sad thoughts of a sided love? I sure hope so.

Edited by Raila1014 - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

wow!! finally the meet!!

Payal is really really a bright girl!! got to say that!!

Super update!!! such a lovely couple!!! i will never get satisfied i think!! cause there is something so unique about them!! in which ever way you right about their love their is something very alag and special in them!! kuch to baath hai, which is beyond my understanding i guess!!

This pair will be something which can never be touched! so so so brilliant da!! i loved the way he asked her in the end about entering her room and the car!!! i just pray that anji dont have a heart failure or someone be ready for a cpr!! hehehe!!

Cont soon!

Thanks alot for such a long update! worth reading million times!

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

ha..ha...that was so funny..poor khushi...thinking thaat is all her imagination..

since anjali has the vital part..of them standing together anav holding her hand...i think things will happen soon..

loved it ...

thanku dears...

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Six parts , I am super happy .

Khushi found her way to her Raajkumar . Both of them felt they were hallucinating . Khushi sand ,danced , hugged , kissed & sat on Arnav's lap too (chance pe dance) they both were jolted from raaba ve land with Payal's entry .

Arnav knows her name & how she landed in his house . Since Anjali has seen this romantic scene , in no time she will arrange marriage for her chottey .

wonderful update

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Smita, this was indeed a very hilarious update. Khushi dancing, hugging, kissing Arnav and then sitting on his lap assuming he was a figment of her imagination, I cant stop laughing imagining it.. 😆

I wonder how Payal's expressions were when she saw her sister sitting on some random man's lap.

😆

So now things are in the open, hope the elders decide to get them engaged right today and then married soon. 😉😳

Loved this "Barsaat ki ek raat" story.

Edited by canapoem - 11 years ago

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Why stop there??? Please update quickly!!!!!

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Loved the update 👏

Wow wow wow 😃 🤗

Can't wait to see what happens next 😆

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

OMG! I can't stop 🤣. I was imagining after the last update what will happen if khushi sat on real arnav's lap in front of others and you really wrote that Smita di. That was hilarious. Smita di, Jahanpanah, tussi great ho.
Now that anjali saw the expression on her chotte's face for khushi, will she ask for khushi's hand before he can himself ask for it?

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