~** AgniKanya Krishnaa : Sri, Sakthi, Saraswathi **~ - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Krishu Di!! That dimension and pain of silence, who knows it better than Yagyaseni and us!! You know Di, the silent pain portrayed here came out from your heart as I can see!! Expectations unreachable and hopes shattering give us a pain so intolerable that silence only makes us stable!! And you showed it beautifully!! Loved Bhrathasri Dhirst Ki dialogues!! And the ever intact hopes of Yagyaseni, so well portrayed, that I felt my tale being told in this!!
Now enough of my emotional atyachar, i conclude that it was beautiful and poignant!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
WOW!!!! 👏
This time I won't keep u with "res" 😆 so no worries!!!
I shall read this no matter what! 😎
So so loved this!!! ⭐️
I will give detail comment mrw morn! Coz am too tired now!
Don't doubt me, I will Defo give! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Our mytholgy has given us innumerable characters to hold and cherish; to love and hate; to dissect and discuss. And for most of them a definate black or white is available. But where do we put that woman who was born in white and then tainted in black?

When I was young I had heard so many people put countless allegations on Draupadi or as you said Krishnaa; the name she prefered more! Back then I never could understand as to why? Monsters like Dussashan had loyal supporters then why was this lady; who was so grieviously wronged; beared the burnt? Dharmakshetra had Krishnaa say the right words; she never got a chance to be a mother and importantly a woman! Her torment has no limits yet she agreed on having them as pricking thorns in her life. That is the shear strength of character, something all the 'Maharathi' didn't have. There was none bold enough to face the test of time hence she had to take it all over herself.


I can't even tell you in words the excitement I have to read this. This woman is bottomless ocean of strength, intellect, bravery, love, kindness and justice. No mortal woman have it in them to silence the storm the way she did. Indeed she is the manifestation of 'Shrijan', 'Sangrakshan' and 'Sanghar'! Please continue it soon Krishnaa di( I hope you don't mind me calling you that!:D) I can't wait any further for this roller coaster ride.
Edited by Meself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first of krishh congooo ! it takes more than just guts to come up with something from draupadis pov.. she is that kind of a character for whom people can only completely love or completely hate. too many authors have tried to figure her out, but i doubt anyone thought of draupadi as a being in themselves the fire the pride the women that was what she was , but you beleive she is in you and that is like the most important thing you understand the character ur writing about and thats why i would say you would be the best person to write this saga ... and please please make her the right balance between the arrogant queen she was in POI and the meek submissive one she was in yagyaseni... second the first chapters name , was just soo perfectly fit. silence. it was always silence she was greeted with every time she wanted or rather needed more. so the name of the first chapter is very apt. im just like burning with curiosity right now and if u even think about stopping this os i would personally tell my dhanu baby to break up with you. so yea no pressure. 😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW...i loved it Krishu!!
You seem to be able to look into her soul when you are writing!!
wonderful wonderful job
Looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Lovely one di , really loved it . Draupadi feelings was so real and u expressed it so well . Do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Hey Krishu (hope u don't mind),

Lets start from this word "BRILLIANT". ⭐️

I also want to add all the appreciating words which Usha Uthup used to say in Idea Star Singer.

(So, just leave it here).😆


Ur first chapter title is apt for Draupadi. She will in the future too, receive this silence as reply

to the atrocities done to her. So, yes lets start with silence.


Here, as you wrote, it's welcoming for her but it may hurt her later too.


Keep writing dear. U always mesmerize me with ur creativity.
Edited by vaishali09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Great concept and start Krishu!👏

Emotions in the first chappy were really very well expressed.
As always, loved your writing style.😎
Keep up the good work.👍🏼


thnak you grokz... 😃
love ya babes.. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Urmila11

Didi it's awesome 👏 loved the style 👍🏼 Bhoomidevi's cradle!! what a dialogue loved Shikhandini's concern 😃 Jiji ho to aisi update soon!


something tht popped up juz like tht!! 😆
wait for the coming chappies!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: amritat

Great start... 👏

Please continue... 😊



uummm... i'm not gonna get settle with this two lines...

okay i'll take it as a challenge... i'll make you comment a paragraph!! 🤣

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