SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29] - Page 20

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Dew.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Speechless!!!!!
u knw when reading ur note i hv many things to say
and again when reading that Beautiful writing of urs which cms in the form of a story. .again i hv many things to say...
but when the end cme along with that magical twirling hug. .its brk me dwn!!! .
bcz its remind me that Magical SwaRon Twirling Hug...
they gone fr forever,
their memories with us but they gone!!
im nvr gonna see my SwaRon again. . .
sighhh... sorry i sdn't mke it a sad post!..
jus wanna sy that every good thing cms to an end... like SwaRon... like this ss. .
frm 1st chapter till last i love this ss
& surely its cms into those stories which i loved...
now im eagerly waiting to read ur nxt bcz i knw again u ll cm with something new and beautiful. . .
so, waiting.. waiting.. waiting 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!!!!! This part is just amazing...
Feeling sad ki this SS ended...
Yaar this is one of the best story i have read...
Meko or padhna h...
Each n every word of Swayam nd Sharon were just amazing...
Can't explain in words... Bs itna knw ki this is IT...
Thanx fr writting this story...
Keep writting...This is the only way to be connected with SwaRon...
Thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Update!
The confession was amazing..loved it!! 👏

Thanks for the pm..

Do write more on swaron...

waiting for your next swaron write up...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

I loved it..awsome update..👏 👍🏼

I cant choose one thing as my fav..i liked each n everything frm start till end..

bt phir bhi just loved dis part -

I know we are poles apart Sharon. . . I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together. . .You can rise and shine on me with your brightness and I can sooth you with my calmness. I know that I don't know you much but then love is all about knowing each other, rediscovering each other every day and still be together. . . Maybe You can find the the IT' of That is it' in me . . .Maybe you are my It' girl and I will try becoming your It' Boy!"

❤️

Yes n I njoyed this ss..And this update is definitely 1000 times better than the D3's finale episode.😊

now m waiting for next update of "cruel games" 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
aaahhh... finally the last chapter is here😊😊 will miss this ss , but as it is said ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END 😭😭 coming back to the os it was awesome... i loved the entire chapter be it sharon ka entry or be it the effect of swayam having on sharon... i just loved the confession😳😳 will be waiting for ur future posts .. and will be missing this ss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay so I planned to mark all the amazing things that I liked about this final chapter. But I ended up quoting the whole update. The confession, the speech, I LOVE YOU, each and every part of this update was mesmerising. You are a wonderful writer.
And the thing I loved the most was the comparison "I'm an open book, you are layered. You are sun I'm moon..."
Fantastic. Well done. Keep writing more.



Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

" Hey!" Sharon said as Swayam opened the door wearing a red shirt with a white T-shirt inside.
"Hi!" Sharon once again said when even after a minute Swayam stood in front of her staring at her without even blinking his eyelashes. He stood lost in her. . .She looked like a fairy of love in the sleeveless red frock which ended at her knee and black stilltoes. Swayam finally came out of the reverie this time and finally said "Hi" Leading her inside his home.
"Do I look like a beast right now?' Swayam enquired her making Sharin surprised.
"What?" Sharon exclaimed.
"Yeah. . . Because you behold all the beauty of the world in front of me right now" Swayam said making Sharon blush.
"You get red at my every compliment Sharon." Swayam teased her hiding his smile.
"Stop it Swayam!" Sharon pleaded not able to hide her growing blush.
"Come on Sharon! Let Me Enjoy. . . I don't get to see this Sharon much in college. Miss Dazzler Diva." Swayam teased her again.
"I don't get to see this Flirt Swayam in college too" Sharon answered back this time softly making Swayam blush a bit.
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Ummm . . . Dinner?" Swayam asked a bit hesitantly.
"You have?" Sharon said guessing his body language.
Swayam broke into an embarrassed smile and ruffled his hands in his hairs and said
"Actually no. . . Though I tried but ended up bringing my kitchen down." Swayam said looking down and Sharon broke into fist of laughter.
Swayam got upset at first but seeing her laughing so heartily he just couldn't stop himself and joined her in her laugh ride.
"You took so much efforts for me?" Sharon said after getting off her laugh ride.
"And more" Swayam said looking intensely at her.
"More?" Sharon said surprised and Swayam forwarded his hand and Sharon without a word accepted it.
Swayam took her to her balcony and Sharon gaped seeing the beauty in front of her. Roses, A dinner table, Orchids, Candles. . . There was nothing that Sharon found less. In front of her the view of the calm night just added to it. A beautiful setting in a shining night for two people in love. Sharon gasped at the thought . . .Love . . .Sharon looked at him and he leaded her to the edge with her hand in his.
Sharon couldn't meet her with his. Her heart raced wildly with the whole setting and him being so close to her.
"Why do you get so nervous around me?" Swayam asked in a voice Sharon hadn't heard coming from him before. It held a passion, a zeal which doubled the racing of her heart.
"No I don't!" Sharon uttered.
"Really? So why don't you talk to me ever looking into my eyes?"
"I don't know . . . you are intimidating!" Sharon said softly not looking at Swayam.
"Me and Intimidating? If I intimidate you I don't know what word I have to describe you!" Swayam said coming closer and blocking her to the wall.
"I intimidate you????" Sharon said softly surprised looking into his eyes.
"Yes you do. . . To an unimaginary extent . . . you are beautiful, bold, soft, brutal, kind, stubborn all at the same time" Swayam said huskily near her earlobe.
"Do . . .Don't do . . .Don't do that!"
"Do what Sharon?"
"You making me nervous" Sharon replied nervously holding his shoulders preventing herself from falling down as her knees started to give away.
Swayam smiled near her ears and Sharon sensed that.. . .It brought a smile on her face too. Her heart was racing with the closeness they were sharing but she didn't care because her whole attraction was on the person who was making it race on purpose tonight.
"One Dance?" Swayam said looking in her eyes.
She stared in his black orbs and nodded smiling. Swayam slid his hands around her petite waist and pulled her closer making her skip a heartbeat.
They danced under the shimmering sky on a soothing piano tune being played somewhere. Sharon was just enjoying the moment. . . This was something she dreamt of everyday. . . She in Swayam's arms dancing her heart out feeling close to him. . .
"What?"
"Is this a dream? Because If it is don't want to wake up!"
"You sure read a lot of romance" Swayam teased her and she blushed recalling her past encounter with him in the bookshop.
"Are you always so red like a tomato???"
"No. . ." She said with her Dazzler attitude.
Swayam turned her around in his arms sliding his hands across her belly . . . He aside her hairs from her shoulder blade to one side and said intensely in her ears "So it's just my effect?" Sharon became still hearing this. . . She looked at him nervously in his eyes without turning around.
Swayam stared at her and turned her around facing him.
"Not so long ago you literally barged into my table because a girl was trying to kiss me . . . You came like a storm and confessed your feelings for me in front of the whole world. I broke your heart by rejecting you. . .But you know it was weird for me. . .I couldn't even understand why you said it for like days. . .I always thought you as a mean, blunt kind of lady who just floats on the pride of her wealth but then during Dance Fest we got to work with each other and Slowly I saw the Sharon who is carefree, like romantic books, has the most number of Bollywood music on her playlist and most importantly has a kind heart. . .And you know what this Sharon makes me adore the Dazzler Sharon unlike the old days"
She stared at him blankly.
"I gave such a long speech. . .Say something? Do something? Or maybe at least nod your head?"
"And you are saying all of this because. . . ."
"Oh My God!!!I guess being shut up was the better option. . .Okay. . .Now this is the most difficult part of the evening"
"I don't know how and when but I guess there is something that I have started to feel for you. . .And it gives me immense joy. . .To see you, to be with you it's like I want it all day. . .Somehow I just can't get enough of you. . .Sharon I have started falling for you. . .In the last few days I have felt the kind of feelings I didn't even know existed. I know we are poles apart Sharon. . . I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together. . .You can rise and shine on me with your brightness and I can sooth you with my calmness. I know that I don't know you much but then love is all about knowing each other, rediscovering each other every day and still be together. . . Maybe You can find the the IT' of That is it' in me . . .Maybe you are my It' girl and I will try becoming your It' Boy!"
Sharon looked at him. . . her mouth open and she stared blankly in his eyes.
"Oh God! Not again. . .Silent mode!!!" Swayam rolled his eyes and crashed his lips on to hers kissing them cupping her face in his hands. Sharon went blank for a second and when she finally got her composure she kissed him back with equal fervor conveying all the love. . .all the love and excitement she had kept to herself in all these years. . . The happiness she got when finally he reciprocated her love in his words. . . The silvery night went still to see them taking a step forward with each other for each other and to be with each other. Sharon broke the kiss panting for oxygen and Swayam touched her forehead with his smiling like he has got all the world in the past minute.
"Swayam . . I have waited too much to hear those words from you. . I cannot wait any longer. Not anymore when you are this close to me. . . You have been the love of my life since I have seen you. . . Your innocence took away my heart with that one look of yours. . . I have dreamt of this moment so many times so many that I have lost count. . .I cannot tell you what I feel for you. . . I just know there will not be any other person except you for whom I will feel like this. . . Swayam please please say it."
Swayam just stared at her. . . His inside choking up with the intensity of her love, the purity of her love. He cupped her face and wiped the tears that flowed through her eyes. . . He could see the craving for him in her eyes. He smiled and kissed her forehead lovingly and finally declared what she wanted to hear from God knows how long.
"I love You Sharon" Swayam said looking at her lovingly and she broke down in happiness and jumped in his arms not able to hold her heart back which screamed in happiness
"Swayam" Sharon cried in his arms and he held her tightly repeating his words letting her to realize that this was not any dream this time, that it was real, she was real, he was real, they were real and the moment was real.
"I love You Sharon . . . I don't know about what when But I love You and I want to love you more much more. . . I want to love you in the way you love me"
Sharon broke into a happy content smile and finally gathered the courage to say it finally "I love You Swayam. . . I love You so much. . . I love you. . . I love You . . . I love You"
And Swayam twirled taking her in his hug and they stood in each other's embrace as the piano music started fading away and their hearts continued to sing their love song which just got a new meaning in lover's arms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
first things first...really sorry for
commenting sooo late...
coming to the updates...
sharon has really crazy wishes...
and swayam too is madly in love with sharon...
woh mujhe vodka wala part acha laga.😉.
she's open to swayam..loved the carefree
sharon who blurted out her wishes to
swayam.and mahn..the drunk swaron were hilarious...seriously...Deepika padukone...😆.
the next update wher sharon wakes up
near swayam it was bliss full,and finally
neha had to make him realise his feelings for sharon.
and ya finally their date..i seriously loved this part..
you have written it soo well..
the complex sharon who was scared
of being in love..well potrayed and justified...
the seet and lovable side
of diva madly in love.
.you r a versatile writer..
and felt happy reading the update..
expecting more n more good works from ya
..keep writing...and hope my comment makes up for the late response...thnx for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow ...wow ...u took my heart..just amazing...i loved the way you penned sharon...all shades of her charector was beautifully written...nd the class room romance ,loved it...read the ssbin one strech..top of happiness..
Do write more..
Love you
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Posted: 10 years ago
God. 😳
I can't believe I am reading this update just freaking now.

Well, I loved it Chitra, really. The whole setting, the dialogues, your description was so romantic, so dreamy.

I loved the way Swayam stated his and Sharon's opposite characters. The metaphors you used were lovely.

This is one happy SS. :) Great going girl.

Love you.
Cheers
NV.
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was luvely
the best swaron confession ever :)
i luved the way swayam expressed his feelings for sharon
i luved every single bit of it *_*
as amazing as it cn be :D
gr8 ending to the story
thanks fr d pm

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