SwaRon SS: You are my 'It'Boy!FINALE UP on Pg29]

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i_yatharthk

@i_yatharthk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

I know we are poles apart Sharon. . . I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together. . .You can rise and shine on me with your brightness and I can sooth you with my calmness.

these lines of yours were as if swayam is saying that he and sharon are like the two sides of the coin so different and opposite to each other yet so together always no matter what anyone dos but cant separate the two sides of the coin the words used too were such that they just depicted what we all swaon fans feel about them being eternalwith those who all are eternal, sun, moon, galaxy...

Edited by i_yatharthk - 10 years ago

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Beautifully written...the lines swayam said to sharon !!! So romantic n the way they botu shared their feelings for each other!!!

I just loved this confession part...adorable!!!

But this is the last part:-( this ss was awesum...thanks for PMs :-)

Amazingg SS

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

OMG.. What an update.. 😊

Each and every line was beautifully written.. 😃

I can't tell u how much I loved this part.. 😃

From beginning to end it was pure bliss to read..😊

Their confession was just beautiful..😊

Swayam's line- ❤️

"I don't know how and when but I guess there is something that I have started to feel for you. . .And it gives me immense joy. . .To see you, to be with you it's like I want it all day. . .Somehow I just can't get enough of you. . .Sharon I have started falling for you. . .In the last few days I have felt the kind of feelings I didn't even know existed. I know we are poles apart Sharon. . . I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together. . .You can rise and shine on me with your brightness and I can sooth you with my calmness. I know that I don't know you much but then love is all about knowing each other, rediscovering each other every day and still be together. ."

Each word was filled so much love.. 😊

I fell in love with ur writing.. This is one of my favorite SS.. And now it comes to an end. I hope u start with something new and refreshing like this again soon.. 😃

Thanks for PM. 😃

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dvrushu

@dvrushu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together. . .You can rise and shine on me with your brightness and I can sooth you with my calmness. I know that I don't know you much but then love is all about knowing each other, rediscovering each other every day and still be together
perfect lines...loved it...
jst one thing to say PERFECT END to this story...
this ss will remain one of my fav ss i had read...so pure, cute and soothing :)

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

its so deep & romantic... Loved d end... Beautifully penned. Keep writing on swaron plz...
p.s- plz write an epilogue of dis ss... Plz plz plz

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Yup they are poles apart but meant to be
Hayee their confession..

Loved it

Thanks 4 d pm

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

awesome chitra what an ending hayeee their confession im in swaron dreamland now it was so beautiful his each n every word said by him im so lost in him im so happy for her finally he confessed

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Such an Amazing ending...

jus love it all...

the lines u used are so perfect...

its really Awesome...

Congratulations for Successful Completion of such an Amazing Story... :)

Waiting for next one now :)

Best Wishes :)

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Its so beautiful update that I wanna cry with joy

You have some magic Di the way you play with words

No could have described Swayam's feeling the way you did,It was heavenly and one could feel the while scene in front of his eyes ^_^

I'm your fan :o and these lines with such a deep meaning - 'I know we are poles apart Sharon. . . I am an open book You are layered. . .I am an analyst and you are impulsive. . .You are Sun I am moon but maybe just maybe we both can find our galaxy together'

Hats off to you for such writing _/\_

This SS will always remain close to my heart, I never wanted it to end :')

The confession could not get any better

Keep writing :*

Thanks a lot for this SS

Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago