Aham FF - My Kind of Love !!! - Page 10

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

ohhh!!tane this darling for ur wonderful update..so neat ..clear..well written smooth screen play.day dreaming jiya ..oh she is going mad!! lovely dream ..clean shaved cheeks..hmmm!!! avni is so cute..I like her..Hope Mrs.snooty heels is a mysterious character..and and and..what is this kabir is also bound by some strange feelings..oh he dreams about jiya..she resembles his x girlfirend sherlyn..!!!! who said u r poor in using metaphors..u wrote it well while describing the eyes with ocean once he swam and drowned in it...awww pukka!! apt words for explaing a broken up relation..as i said earlier u r awesome in handling words.u know how to present a story interestingly ..good dear..keep it up..and what u r not well how r u now?? and y u r asking for sandals always..i have only two pairs..and I need them

Originally posted by: sania_58

loved this part Hemangi.👏Clean writing.👏Why U think that we will throw sandals on U???😲
come on darling.U are managing both ur FF so brilaintly.U are doing a great job.👍🏼
Thank u Madhu 😳...I just felt it was a bit dull thats why 😕...yeah...now since I have posted a chapter here, I will post a chapter in my other FF very soon 😊

Loved Jiya & Avni's conversation.😃
Me too...I enjoyed everytime writing their sweet-spicy-funny convo 😆

& about Kabir & Jiya, unke liye yeh line apt hai, idhar bhi aag laagi hai, udhar bhi aag laagi hai.😉
ohh, so Jiya reminded him of his X-Girlfriend.
Yup...she did...thats' why he searched for her after the lift incident but finally found her right in his office after a year 😊...his search finally ends

Loved Kabir & Kunal convo.Aham & vin, two brothers.nice casting.😊
I was thinking a lot about whom to cast as Aham's aka Kabir's bro in the FF. I wanted with some similar resemblance after all they are half-bros in the story...I saw one pic of Aham & Vin 4m indonesia & immediately decided for Kunal's character as his chocolate boy looks perfectly fits in withe character 😊

but Jiya's dream, ohh she is imagining Avni as Kabir.oops, situation serious hai.😳😆
Yeah...and she' questing why his skin is so soft like a woman 😆

but Why that Ms Snooty Heels spying on Kabir???😕
that is another mystery...but dont worry u will know it soon 😉

& Kabir himself is a very mysterious person.Highly Suspicious.😳
Yes he is...but we & jiya still wont stop dreaming about him ☺️...are we 😉 😆

nice update.too good.great going.👏
waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

OHHH!! take care hemu..r u working in kolka?? don't strain ur eyes too much..work is essential..ok..but ff we can wait for u dear!!health is more important..take rest daring

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Finally read it Hema Awesome story yaar.Excellent way of presentation.I read the three parts in a go.It is so captivating.Jiya has really been swept off by Mr.Kabir.But not her fault.Itna hot and handsome hain to phir...😉I am happy to know things are not perfectly well at the other end too.He too is disturbed.Very good.And what I liked the most is the intriguing story linr.Now update fast

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Excellent..EXCELLENT 👏 👏