I'll Love You Longer Than Forever - AR FF (Update Pg 144)

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DMGThings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: sochona
well well,Rahul is coming out of his ivory tower.good for him.i don't know why he thinks armaan is an idiot,when he has been pretty stupid himself.and now riddhimas accident is going to make him feel all the more guilty.as you mentioned,you have got something up your sleeve about yuvi getting to know about armaan riddhimas relationship.that will be interesting.and more details about chutki.

Hey Anoo!

Itna fast fast reply? Bohot jaldi padh liya iss baar!

And yeah, Rahul is coming out of his shell.

Don't worry, Armaan and Rahul are gonna make headway in the next chapter or two.

Chutki ke baare mein bhi more info in the coming chapters!

And let's not assume it to be Ridzy!

Maybe it's Armaan or Maybe it's Rahul or Maybe it's her! Or Maybe someone else entirely.

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Very nice part

Raul and ridhima talk is much needed

R ahul and ridhima conversation is sad and emotional

But Rahul really hurts ridhima by his words

Omg cliffy ending with ridhima's accident

I hope she is fine

Little sad because no armaan in this part

But that's ok

Thank for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continues soon

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Tajmahal1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Oye nice full on suspense part yaar👍🏼hey r u going to start ridz memory loss track now?😊just scratching your head😆lovely and want to know this chutki connection😊very interesting yaar

no problem with typos and all it's just in couple of places not a big deal😊rock on yaar nice concept from a different angle😃we know armaan is going to come back very soon so no worries👍🏼keep it up prags👏good job😉

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DMGThings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Very nice part
Raul and ridhima talk is much needed
R ahul and ridhima conversation is sad and emotional
But Rahul really hurts ridhima by his words
Omg cliffy ending with ridhima's accident
I hope she is fine
Little sad because no armaan in this part
But that's ok
Thank for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continues soon

Hey Twinnie!

So happy that you liked it.

Haan, Rahul - Riddhima talk is a little too intense and Rahul was a total asshole in the end, but he's gonna redeem himself too good in the next chapter. Don't worry!

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mahima00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

update good as always... confrontation was much needed, but damn why did you end it there?

cont super soon

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DMGThings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: Tajmahal1
Oye nice full on suspense part yaar👍🏼hey r u going to start ridz memory loss track now?😊just scratching your head😆lovely and want to know this chutki connection😊very interesting yaar
no problem with typos and all it's just in couple of places not a big deal😊rock on yaar nice concept from a different angle😃we know armaan is going to come back very soon so no worries👍🏼keep it up prags👏good job😉

Yo TJ!

Let's be clear, no memory losses in my story, ever. They're a pain! Everyone is crying and they're so angsty.

So, no memory loss.

Suspense toh tha thoda. Yeh Rahul aur Riddhima track thoda boring ho raha tha, toh kuch mirch masala chahiye na!

And thanks for all the appreciation. Love you. :* :*

Edited by DMGThings - 10 years ago

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Pakeez Muqadas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

If U think U R Evil Dat Actually U R Dn Let Me Clr U Baby I Am Maha Evil... So, i am Going to Shut My Mouth Till Nxt Update.. Not A word Frm Me For Todays Update.. 😛

Good
Bad..
Xcellent
Worst
wat Ever D Update was For Me will Tell U In Nxt Update..

Tab Tak K Liye..
Take Care..
Keep Smiling & Wrinting..
Love U
Stay Blessed..

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DMGThings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: mahima00
update good as always... confrontation was much needed, but damn why did you end it there?
cont super soon

Hahaha (That was m sad attempt at an evil laugh like Cruella De Vill or Voldemort, though it was an epic fail).

I ended it there cz I'm mean like that at times.

Don't worry. The next chapter will be up soon!

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DMGThings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: Mpakeez
If U think U R Evil Dat Actually U R Dn Let Me Clr U Baby I Am Maha Evil... So, i am Going to Shut My Mouth Till Nxt Update.. Not A word Frm Me For Todays Update.. 😛

Good
Bad..
Xcellent
Worst
wat Ever D Update was For Me will Tell U In Nxt Update..

Tab Tak K Liye..
Take Care..
Keep Smiling & Wrinting..
Love U
Stay Blessed..

Aisa badla Paki?

Yahi teri dosti, yahi tera pyaar?

Huh.

Par theek hai. Ab maine tujhe suspense mein rakha, toh bhi mujhe rakh le. It's only fair.

Is baar kuch nahi bolungi. Lekin next time yeh sab nahi chalega!

Love you, too.

Will post again soon!

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shreya03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#550

superb part love it... ridzy ka accident interesting & koi baad ni is part me armaan ni tha to next part me Jada kar dena & l love rahul riddhima relationship:-)