A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

chap 17

nice update

sharons insecurities on recieving

so much of love and care that she isnt used to

swayam and reys concern for sharon

sharons POVwas well written

swayam is too caring

waiting for the next update

wanna read how swayams efforts

to bring sharon closer her love

and make her realize her love for him

thnx 4 d update

thnx 4 d pm

Edited by athi_vrushan - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

res

unres

actually i hadnt recievd the pm for 18th chapter:P

how cud i miss this

one of the best updates ever

sharon tensed on not seeing swayam

the way she was enquiring about him shows how she feels for him

swayams was at sharons place

he made her believe in his and her own feelings

his confession

the best part was the way she indirectly confessed to him

sharing the chocolate and a promise to share her life with him

swayams expressions would have been priceless

their first moment after confession itself was nice

well as you said the story has actually begun now

eagerly waiting to read more

update soon and pm me

Edited by athi_vrushan - 10 years ago

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Ritika

@ritz15

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Hayee confessionnn 😳
It was just perfect
sharon all.tensed fr him
nd then swayam came nd confessed ...amazing
Now update soonishhh

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: --Keechu--
Yipppiiieee
Me first 😛
After along time i got a chance to comment first...🥳
Me super duper happy 😎
And finally my swayam confessed 🥳
I didnt expect he will confess so soon
Loved it...
So sorry for not commenting from long time...
Was busy with some problems
And thank u for the Pm
Continue soon...😛
And keep writing 😉

Love
Keechu 🤗

aweweee keechu di!!! me also dancing reading ur comment...😆😆

thanks a lot!!!

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron
*Happy dance ^_^
Confession...yayeee this is gonna be my fav. update now :p
Din think he will confess this soon to her
So he finally made her realize :') they would be happy together
I love you both girls ^_^

The chocolate part so cute
I was wondering why she is still calling him Sir :v and read next few lines :v Swayam's way of asking ;) poor Sharon could not hide her blush :3

Waiting to read more of their romanceee

Thanks

double comment...😆😆

thanks sanchi...tumse to mera demand kam hoga hi nahi...

bara wala comemnt k liye thanks...😳😳

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: swaronicfan
awesme update finally their story started nw wil get to read sme swaron moments n d bst line was wen sharon said,"ab puri life share karungi toh choclate kya h" n thanks foe d pm update soon n wen u gonna update rest of ur ff's pls do update dem also

thanks a lot se bhi zyada...:')

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: prajana
Hey..i have never commented on this ff before..but have followed it religiously😛
This update is the best update so far
I am loving the story
Cant wait to read more
Plz update soon😊

comment kiya karo na... tahnks btw!

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: gsk4
Lovely chapter. I was expecting Swayam to be in Sharon's house only.. And I was waiting for her to stop calling him Sir.. Very niely put. But i want more. Please do update fast.

thanks yaa...even i was waiting for her to stop calling him sir😉

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: vrushanlove
Oh my god...what an update...filled my heart with happiness...i loved their confession...the way swayam saud pyar karta hu tumse...hayee...

heh heh...thanks yaaa

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: ujwalv
Happyyy😊

Awesome update...finally they confessed..

"ab puri life share karungi to chocolate kya hai????" awww

Last part was sooo cute..😳

Excited fr next updates..

thank u so much buddy!