A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Hey

Nice update
Sharon surprise bday party...
N swayam finally realised tht he loves her
Yeahhh...n now as ur exmz r over so u will update fast...!!!😛😊

Thankz for PM...update soon

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Welcome Back!!! ^_^

Aah the emotional update :')

It was long, sweet and really important
Birthday celebration must have been Swayam's idea
I just love how you show him so concerned about her be it asking her not to drink,lifting her up till bed,wishing for her happiness ^_^

eeps he finally realized ^_^ waiting to read his confession to Sharon.
I appreciate how you wrote Sharon's emotional state where she let out most of her fears


Update soonish cant wait you know that
Thanks 😲

thanks...yes the update is on its way
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

heya ani and nabanita

sorry for not commenting individually on each of the chapters
chap 15
the long and much awaited update
swayams feelings for sharon
taaani and rey teasing her
each tym swayam said anything related to sharon
swayam saying that he doesnt go to office 4 seeing sharon
her fav flavour is chocolate
the laptop scene , swayam admiring sharon
unknown of the reason why he admires her
sharon coughing,then the blindfold game
swaron moments
chap 16
i love you guys for this chap
really long update
surprise for sharon
swayam made cake for her
poor swayam whoever gets drunk the one
who always gets targeted is swayam
sharons happiness knew no bounds
swayam has realisd his feelings for sharon
he cares a lot for this lady
sharon knows all this
swayam scooping her in his arms and making her sleep
and sharon not leaving him
swayam has finally realised his love for sharon
thank rey and taani for this\
looking forward for the future tracks
thnx 4 updating
awesome
thnx 4 d pm
update nxt part soon



thanks for the long reply dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vani20

Awesome update..😊

Swayam planned birthday surprise for Sharon. 😃
He baked the cake too.. Aww that's so cute..😊
Taarey never leaves a chance to tease Swayam..😆
Bechara swayam always becomes bakra..😆
Ohh finally Swayam admitted that he loves Sharon.. 😃
Update soonish.😊
Thanks for PM.
-Shivani

thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Ani its was superb upd luv it yr :-)

Suprise se was awsum aur swayam sir ne cake banaya :-D
Anjali's call.was best thg in upd i was.laughing lyk.hell yr jab vi.part pada mene
N finally swayam ne accept kia uska pyar sharon k lie :-)
N sry bcZ i never gvn feedback :-(
Bt i luved d all upds

plzz do read the nxt udates and giv ur feedback...thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Finally u updated..happyyy😃

Loved this update frm start to end...

It was just awesome..👍🏼

Nd swayam ne cake banaya with extra chocolate bade pyaar se😳..awww hw sweet..

just luv hw taarey tease swaron..luv reading it..😆

n dat phone call😛😉..n taani"s comment..bechara swayam😆

nd finally he realised dat he loves her..😊

Excited about next parts..

Update soon..

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

wowww... finally u updated... yayyy... its lovely... finally swayam confessed... 😃 now waiting fr seeing how he manages to make her fall in love... no plz update soon...

p.s- hw ws ur exm.??

thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aneesha93

The best update till date. TaaReYam surprising Sharon on her b'day, Swayam making chocolate cake for Sharon aww😛, she getting emotional with all the love showered on her but also sad that her parents did not wish her on b'da😭y. Loved how Swayam consoled her. Sharon and Anjali's conversation, Sharon understanding that Swayam is being teased by TaaRey, Swayam scooping Sharon in his arms😳, ReYam conversation everything was well and beautifully penned. You both have amazing writing and creative skills👏. No exaggeration, the update felt so realistic. Am absolutely loving this story. Finally Swayam understood he loves Sharon. Hope she realizes it soon too. The best part about this update was that, it was really long.

Thanks for the pm. Update super soon

thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
yes yes yes...today only u will get the update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 17

Sharon woke up and sat on the bed rubbing her eyes... Suddenly all the things that happened last night came back to her like a boomerang... Tears ran down her eyes...she quickly got up and gathered her stuffs and ran downstairs... She saw rey and swayam sleeping on the floor... she could see swayam's hair falling on his forehead... She had an urge to feel their touch in her hands for the first and last time... She was about to move ahead but stopped midway...

"nahi Sharon... agar swayam sir ko khush dekhna chahti hai to chali ja usse dur... Tujhe bhi pata hai tere saath koi khush nahi rahega..." She wiped her tears and left...

Meanwhile taani woke up and found Sharon missing beside her... she went down and checked the kitchen but couldn't find her there... She went and woke rey and swayam up...

"Sharon kaha gayi??? Kahi nahi mili mujhe..." She told them...

"kaha jayegi??? Yahi hogi ..." Swayam looked around... "bhai maine sab jagah dekh liya...nahi hai..." Taani panicked... "array babah taani relax... Chali gayi hogi...kaam agaya hoga koi...ruko I'll call her..." rey searched for his phone and dialed sharon's number... She didn't pick her phone... Rey tried for three times but Sharon didn't respond...

"ye phone kyun nahi utha rahi????" rey was worried now... Swayam couldn't understand what was going on... "mai bol rahi hoon...kuch garbar hai..." taani was saying when rey's phone beeped...

"Sharon ka message hai..." He quickly opened the thread... "kuch kaam agaya hai...isiliye I left... Don't worry... and thanks for yesterday..." rey read aloud...

"ajeeb larki hai... kaam agaya tha to batake bhi ja sakti thi... pakarke thodi na rakhte..." Swayam complained and went upstairs to get ready for office...

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Swayam was working in his cabin but wasn't been able to concentrate... Sharon has not come to office... "samajhti kya hai apne aap ko haa???? Ye koi restaurant hai???? Jab man kiya ayegi...ane do use... Aaj khayegi daant..." His concern always came out as anger... "kya yaar tu swayam... birthday hai aaj uska... mat daant use..." Swayam said to himself... "kaam tha agar...baata ke bhi to jaa sakti thi..." he was constantly looking at the phone...

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Sharon was sitting on the floor of her room leaning on the bed crying her heart out...

"ab tak mere liye sab kuch asaan tha... Coz sirf mai apke liye feel karti thi... but kal jo hua... Mujhe pata hai sir... maine kal apke ankhon mein mere liye kuch dekha... and I am scared... mujhe kisiki care , concern , pyaar iss sab ki adaat nahi hai... aur adaat dalni bhi nahi hai... And the most important thing is aap mere saath khush nahi rahenge..." she kept crying and each call from swayam made her cry some more...

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Sharon didn't come to the office that day...the next also she didn't come... After office swayam called rey...

. "Sharon aaj bhi office nahi ayi... Tujhe kuch pata hai???" he asked... "nahi yaar... phone bhi nahi lag raha... aaj bhi ek message kit hi saying she is fine...kaam hai..." Rey was also worried...

"tu abhi aa jaa... hum dono uske ghar chal rahe hai..." swayam started his car... "okay...I'll meet you Inorbit k samne...from there we'll go..." Rey cut the call... Swayam and rey were standing in front of sharon's house continuously ringing the doorbell...

"maam andar nahi hai..." The security guard told them...

"Sharon... I know tum andar ho... ye kya bachpana hai??? Bahar aao..." Swayam shouted from outside... Sharon was standing in front of the door determined not to open it... "swayam...chal chalte hai..." Rey pulled swayam outside...

"array chali ayegi...kaam hai shayad..." rey was worried himself but didn't show it to swayam...

"chali ayegi tab jab wo kahi jayegi... Wo andar hai I am so sure of that...n agar mai sahi soch raha hoon to wo kal office ayegi aur exactly waise behave karegi jaisa I predict..." swayam drove away...

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Swayam entered the office and everyone stood up to wish him...he smiled at them and passed sharon's cubicle n found her standing there reading a file... she was holding the file upside down and he was sure that Sharon has started avoiding him...

"miss raiprakash... In my cabin... 5 mins..." He said crisply and walked to his cabin...

After sometime Sharon knocked the door of his cabin...

"come in..." he said... "yes sir... koi kaam tha..." she enetered... "do din office nahi aye tum... kyun???...kitna pareshan the hum log... Ghar gaya tumhara...call kiya...koi answer nahi..." he came directly to the point...

"kuch kaam tha...maine leave application de diya maria ko..." she looked down... "sir agar koi kaam nahi hai...to mai jaun...bohut work pending hai..." "yup sure... But file seedhe karke kaam karna...jaldi kaam ho jayega..." He said sarcastically...

Sharon turned to leave but stumbled over the side table... "ouccchhh..." She hissed in pain...swayam immediately jumped up from his chair and ran towards her,... "dekh ke nahi chal sakti tum???? Baitho... dekhne do mujhe...mai first aid box mangwata hoon..." He held her ankle...

"koi baat nahi sir... nahi lagi hai mujhe... I'll manage..." Sharon got up and left...

"fine... To mai bhi tumse tumhare tareeke se hi deal karunga... I promise Sharon...tum khud aaoge mere paas..." Swayam smiled at himself and walked out of his cabin... He went to maria's cubicle...

"maria... I am leaving... aaj k baki meetings cancel kar do..." he said loud enough for Sharon to hear...

. "okay...par swayam... sab thik hai...???" a confused maria asked... swayam didn't reply but walked out of the office without even sparing a glance at Sharon...sharon closed her file as she saw him moving out...


HERE IS THE UPDATE GUYS...LIL SUSPENSE IS GOOD FOR HEALTH...THANKS FOR SHOWERING UR LOVE..WE R SURE U ALL WILL LOVE THE UPCOMING UPDATES


LOVE NABANITA AND ANI

Edited by main_tu_hamesha - 10 years ago

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