A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
A very cute update
when swayam confessed his feeling for sharon his expression would have been priceless
I really liked this chapter
and the precap was also fun
do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome one...😊

Loved it..awesome plan...

Drunken swayam is sooo cute..❤️

Loved dill wala part..right side ke dill mein pain hota hai..lol..😆

Precap is interesting😉😛

Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update!!
Dhanush..🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Small bt sweet update...
Taani nd rey's plan was awsum...
Swayam actually feel sumthng fr sharon yippiee...
Superb update...
Update soon nd thnx fr pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute update. Drunk Swayam confessing about his feelings for Sharon... Awww😛. He was too cute and innocent while saying all that. I could practically imagine all the scenes & conversations in my mind.
Eagerly waiting for the next update. Looks like some surprsisng plans by Taani & Rey are in store. If possible, give longer update next time. Thanks for the pm. Update super soonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww!!! Awesome update.. .
TaaRey ka effort rang laya...
Swayam ne apni dil ki baat keh dali...
Now its sharon's turn...
Waitng fr next update...
Thanx fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello guys...frst of al a very very happy but safe holi to all of u...thanks for commenting and liking the update,,... ur feedback is very important for both of us...
love ani and nabanita
Edited by main_tu_hamesha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 15

"bhai uthie...ghar pe jhadu lagayegi ..." swayam woke up listening to taani to find himself on the floor and the maid standing with a jhadu in her hand...

Swayam sat up and rubbed his eyes and then followed taani to the dining table...he sat down on the table with a thud and sreamed at rey who was also sitting on the chair with a drowsy sleepy eyes...

"saale tune kal kitna pila diya yaar...dard k mare sir fata jar aha hai..."

"haaa... Nahi pilata to pata kaise chalta ki kisike right chest mein pain hota hai..." Rey smirked at him and swayam choked at the water which he was drinking... he remembered what he had said to rey and taani ...

"seriously maat lena mujhe...nashe mein tha..." He said in a serious tone...

"isiliye to seriously liya..." taani chuckled and swayam glared at her...

"mai ja raha hoon to talk a bath...office jana hai..." he stood up and turned to go upstairs...

"sorry bhai...aaj to Sunday hai...to koi fayda nahi... Aaj to aap usse mil nahi paoge..." Taani laughed...

"main Sharon ko dekhne office nahi jata..." He retorted...

"maine kab bola Sharon??? I meant your clients...koi kaam ho to aaj unse mil nahi paoge na..." taani said seriously... swayam couldn't hold his smile anymore...

"waise don't worry... a jaegi thodi der mein Sharon yaha...maine socha use bhi bula loon..." rey said...

"I don't care..." Swayam said and went to leave...

"array bhai batake to jaao... ice cream kaunse flavor ka mangau..." Taani screamed when swayam turned from the stairs and immediately said..."chocolate use bohut ..." he stopped realizing what he is saying...

"hmmm..." rey teased him while swayam rushed upstairs...

After getting freshened he came and opened his laptop to check his mail... he found that his clients has sent him the pictures of the party from nainital...

He opened the pictures and looked at the pictures of their dance...he remembered the feeling of having Sharon so close to him...so close that he could breath her addicting smell... the first dance they shared...

Swayam closed the laptop and went near the window...

"I wish... I wish I could live that moment for some time more..." he thought...the next moment his mind pricked him...

"why am I wanting that moment to be with me...may be because she is a great dancer n as a dancer I appreciate her..." he reasone...at that moment he found Sharon drove inside the lawn... she got down from the car and removed her shades...

"no doubt .. she is beautiful..." he smiled...

He was about to go down to meet her but stopped mid way...

"abhi niche jaunga to taani aur rey aur khichegi..." He sat on the bed instead...

"par nahi jaunga aur un dono ne sharon se kuch bol diya to..." he immediately stood up and rushed downstairs... he stood in the landing of the stairs from where he could see everyone sitting in the lounge but no one saw him...

Suddenly his phone started ringing and he looked down startled...

"bhai...niche aao..." taani said... he came downstairs giving an awkward smile and sat on the couch concentrating on his phone...

"khaddos... Good morning bhi nahi bola..." Sharon gritted his teeth...

Taani and rey went to the kitchen to give them some privacy...

After sometime swayam looked up to find himself alone with Sharon... and Sharon was visibly bored... so he said something which he regretted the next moment...

"party ki pictures dekhi tumne????"

"nahi..." She replied nonchalantly...

"wo..client ne mail kiya mujhe... I'll show you..." swayam brought the laptop from up stairs and sat beside her...

Sharon could see the pictures clearly from the side cause of reflection... so she shifted close to him...and taani came at that moment...

Sharon was casually smiling while watching the pictures...

"kya dekh rahe ho...mujhe bhi dekhni hai..." taani came and sat beside Sharon...

"charge khatam ho gaya..." swayam immediately was about to snatch the laptop away...

"koi chrge nahi khatam hua..." taani snatched it back... Swayam had shifted away from Sharon but tanni pushed her to see the pictures so eventually Sharon again landed near him...

"ohho...kitna romantic hai yaar..." taani beamed and Sharon looked horrified... she started coughing all of a sudden...

Taani rushed to bring water... And Sharon immediately stopped coughing and closed the laptop...swayam was shocked to see Sharon acting like this...

Taani came back and Sharon again coughed and drank the water...

"baaaki pictures...??" Taani asked..

"charge khatam..." swayam said nonchalantly...

Taani smirked looking at Sharon and swayam... " haa of course..."

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They were sitting idly after lunch...

"lets play something..." taani suggested... Swayam gave her a hopeless look...

"lets play blindfolded pakram pakrai..." Taani answered her own question...

"WHAT????" rey screamed...

"haa..chalo... koi dener banega...we will blindfold him or her... and that person will have to catch any other to make him the denner..."

"to pehele kaun banega???" Sharon asked...

"bhai..." taani said...

"kyun??? Mai hi kyun bakhra banu hamesha..." He asked in a frustrating voice...

"ab banne ki kya zarurath hai..." taani chuckled and swayam glared at her...

Swayam was blindfolded and he was was walking aimlessly trying to catch someone...

He was about to walk into a stool and hurt himself when Sharon came ahead to remove the stool... she was a bit late and as a result both of them lost balance and fell on the floor...taani and rey saw them and immediately left so that it doesn't get any more awkward for swayam and sharon

Sharon was under swayam ...swayam immediately removed his blindfold and looked at her...

His trance was broken and he got up and sat beside her and she also sat up... As she was about to get up she felt a pain in her ankle and realized that she had twisted her ankle... she winced in pain but didn't scream...she sat down...

Swayam understood that she had hurt herself and was waiting for her to scream but when he found her quiet he asked...

"kya hua????"

Sharon immediately removed her legs...

"dekhne do mujhe..." swayam forced her to remove her hands and held his ankle...

He looked into her eyes and without removing the eye contact he twisted it more...

Sharon flinched again...he looked at her and asked...

"theek hai????" he asked...

Sharon moved her ankles and smiled at him... "haa...thanks..."



GUYS THIS IS A VERY LONG CHAPTER SO I HOPE U DONT HAVE ANY COMPLAIN AGAINST US NOW ...PLZZ LIKE AND COMMENT...


LOVE ANI AND NABANITA

Edited by main_tu_hamesha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey
Happy holi...
Awsumm update...
Swayam awkwardness soo sweet
Liked it!!!
They were playing blind folded pakdam pakdai...NICE
also taayam teasing swayam haha
Suerbbb chp
Thank uh for PM
Update soon
Edited by priya_sejwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was another interesting update and it was lengthy too😊 . Taarey teasing Swayam, embarassed Swayam at the same time trying hard to maintain a straight face, Sharon's fake cough (that was unexpected) their game, his concern for Sharon everything was simply superb😃. He still remembers chocolate is her favorite... awww😛 'Charge khatam' was😆😆. All in all, it was a lovely update⭐️.
Thanks for the pm. If time and schedule permits keep giving such lengthy update cuz this FF is one of my favorites and I love reading it. Update super soon..

Happy holi

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