A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

heyy naba n ani
reading ur work after so long is such a refreshing thing
glad i cud make it
tis ff is promising
swayam n sharon thr characters hav quite a strong shade
sharon the perfectionist n swayam the hard task master
thr bond is still on a roll n they are still discovering
these new feelings sply swayam he feels protective of her
n his concerns for sharon are growing
but the best thing i liked here in tis ff was the bonds u
showed till now whtr it be tani n sharon
or sharon n rey or tani n rey
it was beautifully penned ⭐️
poor swayam he was teased by all 😆
whtr it be his frns or sharon .
waiting to read futher
ani n nabo tis was a very gud try
i m v happy
the only thing i want is swaron
in a new shade n u guys did a fantastic work in tat area
hope to find ur update soon



thanks rosy di!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

superb update... loved d sadoo swayam. 😛


thanksss...:))
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

heyya

the story is turning out to be very interesting
swayams confusion
the teasing leg pulling
very light update

shini


thanks yaa shini di
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 6



Next day...

It was the day of the grand wedding...swayam had given a day holiday to his entire office staff for his sister's marriage..he has invited all of them including the peon and the security guards for the auspicious occasion to share his happiness with all of them..



Sharon was busy tying a safa on rey's head at his house...both had a big mile on their faces..rey was excited to the core as well as nervous...sharon was also excited but her eyes reflected a tinge of sadness ...she was smiling..but her smile wasn't that genuine...

sharon's family was also invited and they were to reach the venue of the marriage that is swayam's house directly...


Soon rey's baraat was standing infront of swayam's house which was decorated like a princess today...everyone was dancing in the baraat..so was Sharon...she was dancing her heart out..as if it was her last opportunity to dance and live the moment...

Soon the bride and the groom were sitting in the mandap..swayam and Sharon were standing side by side behind them showering rose petals at the couple...

as soon as sharon's parents arrived and swayam instantlyrecognized them as they were in the same profession and knew each other...he went forward and greeted them with a smile ..sharon went and hugged her mom and smiled at her father...

Soon Sharon was called for the "gatbandhan" ...a friend of swayam came and whispered in his ears and instantly swayam looked at the floor and desperately searched for something ...


After the marriage was over and rey and tani had taken the blessings of their elders , rey searched for his shoes...tani rejoiced at that and happily looked at swayam and said

"wah bhai...apne meri wish puri ki??saru se bhai ne behen ki rasam puri karte hue joote churaye??wah wah..."she continued..."accha nek mangna isse...kangal banake chorna..."


Swayam made a puppy face and said

"nehi yaa...kaha chura paya??yeh gadha juta pehenke hi nehi aya shayad...kanjoosss kahika..."

"tu dhoond nehi paya...woh teri galati hai...lekin jute toh mai pehenke aya tha..." rey protested


Immediately Sharon came saying


"joote mere paas hai.."


Swayam was not surprised...he knew Sharon had the potential to do this...after all she was

rey's sister...

"theek hai...joote toh do use...bechara khali payer khara hai.."he said...

"oh ha ...yeh lo..." shaon lifted her ghagra a bit and everyone including swayam was left speechless ...sharon was wearing rey's shoes all this while ...


"mai haar ko bohot seriously leti hoon...yeh sangeet ka badla tha..." she spoke while she opened the shoes and then looked at swayam...now she wasn't afraid of her boss...because she knew that outside the office swayam was only tani's brother..not her "SIR"

Soon their conversation was interrupted by rey's mother who said the procedure of bidai was about to start and they need to leave...wayam's face fell...

Taani was hugging everyone and tears were rolling down her cheek when she noticed that swayam was standing in a corner looking at the floor...she went to him and pulled his sleeves but he didn't look at her...probably he wanted to hide his red eyes from her...when they were kids they always behaved like this when swayam was angry or sad...


"toh bhai aap ko toh bohot khushi hona chahie...aap hamesha bolte the ki mai chali ajungi toh accha rahega ...apko satane wali koi nehi hongi...u used to insist rey to take me with him...toh dekho now he is taking me with him..." taani complained childishly..

Swayam looked at her with teary eyes and said...


"haan toh mai abhi bhi keh raha hoon...ghar shaant rahega ur mujhe chachi aur maa ka undivided love milega..." Then he looked down and sai.."par mera kamrah kaun saaf karega ab??"

"abse alarm lagake sona...kyunki roz subah chillake apko uthane wali ghar se vidah ho rahi hai..."tani said while she rubbed swayam's tears

"thank god ab mujhe adhi raat ko koi jagayega nehi...icecream k lia..." he complained

Both of them laughed while tears poured out of their red eyes...

"u remember bhai?u used to say that mom and kaki loves u the most?? U were right..."

"I m always right.." swayam said and pulled her into a hug...

Then he rubbed his eyes and took taani to rey...


"I know I don't need to say this...par phir bhi...meri eklauti behen hai...sambhal ke rakhna isse.." swayam said and rey nodded..


"aur haa zyada sata bhi lia toh bhi m not taking her back...ab sari zindagi who tera hi sar khayegi..." he smiled...


Both rey and taani left in the car...sharon was supposed to leave in a car after their departure...she saw swayam standing at one corner looking at the car and waving at taani...she saw so much love in swayam's eyes for the first time...she was her parents' single child so she always missed being pampered but today...she missed being loved...

Thinking about this made her eyes teary...swayam saw her looking at the floor and deeply engrossed in some thoughts..so he frowned and walked towards her..


"bidai meri behen ki ho rahi hai...rona toh mujhe chahiye...tum kyun ro rahi hoo??tumhara bhai thori na apna ghar chor k jaa raha hai??" swayam complained like a small child..

Sharon smiled amidst her tears...


"main rey k saath thori na rehti hoon??shaadi thi toh roz ati jati thii..itni mast...itna shor,mai toh bhool hi gayi thi ki rey mera apna bhai nehi hai??"saying this she choked


All this while swayam was looking at the floor but hearing this he looked up,straight into her eyes...the loneliness in her eyes were shouting for a companion...

"baki mera toh koi bhai nehi hai...gharpe akeli rehti hoon...toh itne hangame ki aadat nehi hai...behek gayi thi...mujhe akele rehne ki adat hai..."she continued without looking at him


Her last sentence was enough for swayam to understand he state of mind...how lonely she was...how much she craved for a friend,someone to stay with her ,to share her happiness and sadness...

But hekept quiet...he wanted to listen to her..he wanted her to say it all...he wanted to sooth the torment of her heart...both of them kind of understood each other...


Then the car came to pick Sharon and she walked towards it...but before going she thanked swayam for the wonderful time she has spent with them and the awesome hospitality...

HERES THE UPDATE...DO LIKE N COMMENT

LOVE ANI N NABANITA
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update :)
Finally they are understanding each other
Hope to see them together soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
The bond btw taayam ws shown so well. It br8 tears in my eyes 😭 . i hope swaron strt getting close t each othr nd den we can see love btw dem.
Amazingly written. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
taayam convo made me emotional yr

their bond is great

happy to Know that swaron started understanding each other

lovely

thanks 4 d p.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy..
beautiful update...
so emotional one...
u made me cry na,😭
me angry...😡
aww poor sharon...
hmm it was great...
do continue soon..


with love
keechu
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow girls awesome update taayam convo was so sweet n swaron scene was good
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aniii ^_^ nice update
Well Mr. Shekhawat is confused these days :3 which is gonna deepen in near future :v
I'm so waiting to see Swayam being Sharon's companion and to vanish loneliness from her life ^_^
Its going great :D
Keep updating 😉

Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago

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