Taayam FF:THE PAST UNTURNED(chapter 7up page 36 #pm later)

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

its aswom upadte...

kriya nice.. she knw swayam aur not...

jadi dikha age... but ndc faceoff me swayam dikhna jisne jitya...

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princess1926

@princess1926

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Interesting!!
Really nice...
Ranveer is so bad !!!
Eager to read more..
Update asap

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chandrima

@chand91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

awsmmm prt dr

thnks 4 pm

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dh19

@dh19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

😆😆nice start of chapter

swayam's dream

and taani ne uspe pani dal diya

😆

loved it

but still confuse..and worried about taayam

hope they have not done big mistakes

and why ranveer is behaving like this with her own daughter

loved to see this father daughter duo

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Awesome update :)

Loved it :)

Update soon :)

Thanks for the PM :)

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Trisha

@Trisha49

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Thanks for the pm

Totally loved it, waise thanks also for thanking me 😆

Swayam's dream was really sweet

Taani's entry too was cute

Loved their crazy fight and laughter

Uff Ranveer, chal kitna pareshaan kar sakta hai

Apni heroine bhi Jhansi ki rani hai

Uff college, thank God for Sharon

Loved The Original Taarey Eye- Lock 😳

Waiting to know ki dance ka kya hoga

Mohabbatein 😳😳😳 tooo cute

Loved Swayam's part. Wo na best hai

Hey unke friends, Sanjana and Rohan and Varun and KRIA

Coming to Mumbai wooow waiting for the dhamaka

Ofcourse you're extending this story

Do update soon and pm me

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Swayam's dream was wow..
Bt tani..why did yoi pour water???

Loved the wayway sharon stand by tani's side..

So taayam friends are coming...

Good
Thanks 4 d pm

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praneeta

@pd786

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

update after real long

but worth a wait

really amazing update

so i think something happened which turned taayum's life upside down

happy to see the gang supporting taani

waiting to see the confrontation of then gang of taayam

update soon

thanks for the pm

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Diya

@foreverlazy

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+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Okay, I don't know why, but somehow I have never commented on this. I know, what the hell! But, whatever.

Ooo, interesting character sketch, really detailed. Lots of my classic favorite characters. But what the heck did Taayam do to make people hate them so much?! So much suspense...

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Diya

@foreverlazy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Omigosh, you are such an amazing writer, this prologue is just fabulous! It was beautifully written. I liked both Swayam and Taani's points of views. It was almost as if I can tell what they're thinking. The description was just... I have no words, I'm speechless right now.

And don't even get me started on Taani and Swayam's bond. It is the most beautiful brother-sister bond ever in my opinion, and you portrayed it perfectly.

And I am so glad that you're making this a Taayam ff, because there aren't many of them, so I think it's very necessary.