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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Trisha49

Thanks for the pm

Finally update edited 🥳
Loved it, Swayam's pov was awesome
Loved how he thought of Shaani
Taayam are tooo cute
Mr. Sharma uff another villain
Loved how Taani got angry, an
Ranveer ne aake sab badal diya 🤢
Taani was tooo good, the bargaining was really funny
Loved the way Swayam thinks
Waiting to read further

Promo too is awesome, so NDC is here
Surely Ranveer is making thinhs funny, Mohabbate
Do update soon and pm me

in 😆

don't be
sorry kafi busy thi
glad you likeed his POV
Shaani i want to show it more often
Taayam are more cuter in the comming updae
Mr. Sharma won't be any villian shayad kisi aur update me uske darshan ho
but that's only jab usse pata chalega Ranveer ke saath unka kya relation hai
but on general terms i don't think i will ever bring him back to picture
you know i had actually planned for just 8 chaptrers
but ab lagta hai i should increase it
so i am going to do
Ranveer won't make things funny its Taani's frustration which you'll find funny
warna me Ranveer ko villain se commedian nahi banane wali
but as is it said its the hardest thing to make people laugh and if you did
then i am overwhelmed
Mohobatte may be a track...
how just wait and watch
NDC iske saath saath bahot kuch aayega
the update is done
updating and pm in the evening
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks dear
glad you liked it
updating...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ARiya100

Updated soon !!!!
Please write more
Love it !!!!!

thankyou so much
glad you liked it
i'll write more soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

???????????????? mtlb
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks dear
glad you liked it

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

nice adn interesting story
read all chapter in one go
loved taayam bond as am a big fan of taayam and taarey
missing them
confused abt there past
hope they havent done any big
really worried for taani and swayam
why his father behaving like this with them
rey's confession .. loved it..
do cont soon and if possible pls pm, me

thanks alot dear
glad you liked it
i am glad to find so many Taayam fan's
ya even i miss them
and the entire cast of d3
past its a big mystery
and their deeds are bigger then big
its not his its her father swayam's father is kind a simple man as compared to Ranveer who's cunning
Rey's confession glad you liked that too
ya i'll surely Pm you

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Posted: 10 years ago

...Author's Note...

Thanks a lot for the likes and comments on the last chapter guys. That was really a flop chapter but still you guys appreciated I am really overwhelmed. This is a better chapter through my POV yet not a good one. The first part of the chapter is dedicated to Anmol the only reason is he had demanded for this scene and I couldn't give a good Swaron scene is past chapter too. Thanks to Trisha for helping me edit the last chapter. My whole device got corrupted and out of blue I wrote anything in that. Sorry to disappoint you all. I hope you all like this.

-Shrisha

Edited by ...Shrisha... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 5

"I love you Swayam" Sharon whispered hugging me passionately. This was something i had dreamt for days and months and finally it had come true. She was in my arms. Hugging me like never before. In my protective embrace i wished to keep her forever. And now everything was falling in place. Our proximity made me go insane. She was just perfect for me. And i knew that from the time i had seen her for the first time.

The perfect moment marked its perfection with the cool breeze. Somewhere I could feel a cool breeze flowing on my cheek. Within a few seconds it started getting more. Even nature supported our love. Feeling it was eternity. But the intensity of the nature seems to feel a bit too much. I am choking. Unwontedly I had to leave Sharon. And within seconds I started coughing badly.

What is with this changing weather??? From when did it started getting so rough??? I glanced at the sky which had by now started getting dark. And before I could even imagine it started pouring heavily. I was completely drenched. The next moment I could hear some evil laughs.

"TAANI!!!!!!" I shouted waking up. Making her laugh hard more.

"sorry"said Taani between her laughter

"mera aacha khasa dream barbad kar diya tu ruk teri to..." I said and ran after her. After months we were having fun like this. So be it in any situation lets just have fun. Taking the pillow I ran after her in the entire house. Jumping on the sofas, laughing like idiots, hitting each other with pillows we had real fun. After months it felt light. If this is the aftermath of his return I am happy he is back. My princess is really smiling and even I. both from our own hearts.

"ye sab ho kya raha hai" the strict voice which drained out our happiness. This man can never see us happy.

"ye mera ghar hai you two have no rights to mess it up" he barked like a lion. God this man and his lungs but I really miss the chachu then.

Flashback later!!! Haven't you guys heard present is more important than past? And right now this man is really busy spoiling our present.

"sorry" we muttered.

"ye sab saaf karo and you know what pay for this in college" he said with his world famous smirk.

"what do you mean" we asked looking at each other shocked.

"just wait and watch"

~*~

"if you people lose NDC being the GS Taani is rusticated" Ranveer shot the news shocking everyone. D3 team new nothing just look at him in shock. How can he just spoil someone's future due to a damn competition. Only if they knew how's he was spoiling.

"sir its we who will be participating aap Taani ko kaise rusticate kar sakte ho???" said Sharon after recorvering from her shock. She might not share a good bond with Taani but rustication was far from their small showdowns.

"she is the GS its her duty to make st.louis win and if you all defend her more I will be forced to get her rusticated right now and suspend he 11 of you" he declared with a passion to destroy Taani.

"no don't they will win NDC I will make them win" said Taani shrugging. She couldn't be selfish in risking all their future's for her.

"good lets see"he said and marched out of RH leaving the team in shock.

"this new trustee is dominating"protested Sharon.

"please guys for me just rehearse"begged Taani

"don't worry Taani we won't let you down"said Simmi. Taani just smiled sadly. Somewhere she was happy that with the loss of the entire family and friends she found solace in some strangers who knew nothing but supported her.

Fights, egos all happened in every friendship but if you could stay strong everything seemed perfect. And today she was feeling that. When her own father was busy spoiling her life they were trying to console her. But the fact was that she was scared to lose this friendship. And she knew she would lose everything once that is out.

"par ye trustee paida kidhar se hua?" barked Bharat.

"kal aaye the"said Rey

"tu mila?'asked Bharat

"ya"nodded Rey seeing Taani. She just smiled softly as she remembered the FE scene. That somewhere made her forget the Ranveer and remember that moment. When for the first time in 2 years her happiness knew no bounds.

"so lets rehearse" Swayam's shout gained their attention.

"ya sure chalo guys" Rey said hiding his embarrassment.

~*~

"Varun!!!!" Sanjana shouted on top of her voice frustrated with her flirting best friend

"Sanju chill us idiot ka kuch nahi hone wala" calmed her best friend Rohan. From the time Taayam had left Sanjana Rohan had became besties. And Sanjana was happy getting him but this varun always went over her head.

"ha Sanjana chill uspe chillane a faida nahi"said a voice tapping from her back

"Kria tum" sanjana smiled seeing her another bestie. Kria Ghai. Kria and Sanjana were classmates. While Rohan and Varun were in different class due to their choice of subjects Sanjana and Kria were together. On the first day itself Sanjana and Kria became friends. Why won't they? They were like each other.

"guys I have a news"said Varun finally coming

"oh so Varun Mittal ko flirting se time mil gaya?" Sanjana mocked sarcastically

"shut up Sanjana" Varun rolled his eyes

"ok Varun say what is it?"asked Kria

"we are going to Mumbai" said an excited Varun

"Mumbai???"asked all surprised

"ya student exchange plan dean sir is sending us"said an excited Varun

"Mumbai"asked an excited Kria

"ya totally"said an excited Varun

"Mumbai jana Taanu ka sapna tha"said Rohan remembering her.

"Rohan don't remind us of her"said a boiling Varun

"ye Tannu kon hai?" asked a confused Kria

"classmate thi" Sanjana rolled her eyes in hatered

"oh you know mere bahot sare friends hai Mumbai me"said Kria excited

"ha tum Mumbai se ho na"said Rohan

"bilkul but you know what guys vo sab naraz honge"sighed Kria

"ab mana lena waisi bhi hum st.louis hi ja rahe hai" smirked Varun

"are you serious???" asked Kria excited

"yup" he noded with a smile.

"great"said an excitred Kria

~*~

"stop it mujhe kaam hai"protested Ranveer frustrated of Taani's loud movie sound. She was not letting him complete his project in peace. Taani was a bit too busy in that movie. And Ranveer's work was held up since the time he came to India.

"rule no. 4 no coming between me and my mohobatte" barked Taani watching the movie. She always loved the cute love story of Karan and Kiran and mostly the scene when Karan confesses and now he disturbed her in that scene itself. And Taani Shekhawat is a tigress when someone plays with her movie.

"Chachu coffee" chuckled Swayam seeing Taani's frustration.

"don't call me that" he shot glaring at him. This was his way to gain dominance. Stop every mean of happiness and that worked Swayam looked down scared.

"sir coffee pioge" mocked Taani who was really in no mood to listen to Ranveer's blabbering.

"sure after rusticating you" smirked Ranveer now that gained Taani's attention. She saw his smirk and sighed.

"sir aap coffee lo Taani chal dinner banate hai"Swayam acted mature and dragged Taani.

"yes bhai"she noded and left putting the TV off.

A silent dinner marked the beginning of their silent future

Edited by ...Shrisha... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Swayam's dream was so nice
Hahaha taani put water on him nd woke him up
What ranveer want from them
How can he rusticate taani for something she didn't do
Movie and coffee part was nice.
Ranveer knows how to make them quite
I really want to know what happened in the past that taani's friends hate her
Do update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting
vry vry interesting chapter

update soon

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