Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god how did i not see this story before! Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update as usual, Radhika ji. Really love Khushi's character. She is determined to find a way to help herself. She is not let down by her financial situation. Her efforts to give tuition and this part time job at AR designs make me admire her more, she is such a responsible hardworking girl. Hats off to you for coming up with such a strong character, she is quite an inspiration to me.

Love this Akash Malik. He is one friend Khushi can count on. She didn't hesitate to share her financial problems with him. I liked the fact that he helped her find a job, did not offer her money. Would like to know more of Khushi & Akash's friendship.

Loved "Jo Jeeta Wohi sikander" reference, its one of my all time favorites.

Can't help but admire how you give little history for the places and monuments, making them so real. I googled up Alchemy college and Bimal Patnaik library and when my search returned no results, then I realized that they exist only in your imaginative mind. But you made them sound so real.. kudos to you.

That's a shocker at the end.. Did Sr. Raizada have a diabetic shock? (Inn Raizadon ko sugar ki bimari tho hothee hee hai :) .. or did he really pass away.. that would be awful :( Poor khushi blaming herself.

If next update is going to be in the present.. will it be about Lavanya and Khushi reconciliation? Whatever it is, eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 10 years ago
read it on friend's suggestion and Loved it alot...would love to read further...please pm me if you do...its an amamzing story...different and brilliant.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yesterday I asked my friends to suggest me something good to read on ArHi. And I am glad kclovearshi suggested me this. Thanks kavi di 😊
The title is pretty unique and so is the story. I like how you are balancing the past with the present, though I would like to know arnav's thoughts too. And you are too good with writing , like I am able to see it all happen in front of me 👍🏼

Anand Raizada passed out right? And is that the reason of the discord between arnav and khushi? Waiting for the next update!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi folks, just a note to let you guys know that I will be posting the next chapter on Monday. I was hoping to post today but got distracted by a literature festival happening in my city :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Hi folks, just a note to let you guys know that I will be posting the next chapter on Monday. I was hoping to post today but got distracted by a literature festival happening in my city :)



Enjoy the festival, hoe you get to meet some good authors and get hold of some good books. I'm terrible at such places, always end up spending loads of many buying books.😆

Update when you are ready, we will wait.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your story in unfolding at a very interesting pace. I absolutely love your khushi. Desperate to know what happened in the past concerning khushi. To me this ff is mostly about khushi and I like it. Waiting for more, as always
Thank you.
Are you from Delhi ? Its just that you know their schools and the places so well.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for leaving a note.
And sorry for commenting so late..

Anand raizada is alive ...and might have been saved by khushi ..timely help and I am guessing this might have kicked up their friendship...?

Akash has been kind to khushi

Where is Akash now?

This is just like a diary of events from khushi's point of view...would we also get from Arnav's perspective too?

It's intriguing that why the cousins don't share a good bond ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...this is one cool story!
I loved the concept, the storyline, the format and the style!

Have not read such good writing in quite some time :) Bring it on...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Hi folks, just a note to let you guys know that I will be posting the next chapter on Monday. I was hoping to post today but got distracted by a literature festival happening in my city

:)



No problem...will wait .

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