Can Best Friends be Lovers (part 4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

its superb priya...
and no ur way of writing is not boring...
keep it the way it is...
awsume part... :)

an finally riddhima is also on her way :D

waiting for next post soon

bye
tc
cyaaa :)

Originally posted by: palakajenian

it was superb part. loved it . loved shashank nd padma morning romance coz shashank nd that too its beyond imagination hehe anyways ur writing is cool its not boring so don't even think of changing ur style it awsome . thanks for the pm. nd post next part soon

Originally posted by: shishiksg

nice part loved it

loved the way u r makng armaan n riddhima welcme

n 😆 😆 for ur line ki cnt thnk of writng romance on shashank

i can understand

Originally posted by: seyacandyfloss

Hey Priya.. :)

First of all congratulations on your very first story.. 😊 nice try at writing and it's good..

I've got a small suggestion for you..hope you don't mind..!!
I just wanted to tell you that, be a bit more descriptive about a few of the situations of the story..that's it..

rest all ..it's nice.. :) continue soon and thank you for scrapping me..😊

-SeyaCandyfloss

Originally posted by: PriyalovesAR

thank u seya

thank u for ur sugesstion would surely incorporate it in next part