Can Best Friends be Lovers (part 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsumm start
cont. soon
if possible pm me when u update..! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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And yeah...like aayushi di nd megha di..!! m too sharing ur ff's page on my Fanfictions page on fb...!! Hope u will not mind me doing that..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: megha_kajen


don't worry priya once it is shared on fb na...
more comments n llikes will come dekhna 😊

thank u megha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne

It's a good start. Sorry just found it searching through the forum. 😳

I guess the main leads of your story are not born yet? 😕
Lol she wanted chaat at three in the morning. 😆
Keep going, it sounds interesting.
See you around - I'll try to pop in from time to time.
😊
Arya

thank u but y sorry
lolzz yes they are not born yet
thank u again
will love to see u around
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: shishiksg

Nice stry so interesting

Pm me wenever u update
Continue soon

thank u sure will pm u whenever i ll update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Awsumm start

cont. soon
if possible pm me when u update..! :)

thank u
and yes i don't mind u sharing my ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriyalovesAR

thank u but y sorry
lolzz yes they are not born yet
thank u again
will love to see u around

Felt like I was intruding 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
half is written
may be tomorrow or day after tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne

Felt like I was intruding 😊

no u were not intruding😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Thank u guys for liking and commenting on previous part😊😊

Part 2

Gupta house

In morning, padma wakes up and see shashank sleeping peacefully. She smiles looking at him and says sorry shashank m raat ko tumhe or angel ko kitna pareshan karti hun bus 1 month ki aur baat hai and kisses his forehead. Just as she was about to get up shashank holds her hand and says tum mujhe kabhi pareshan nai kar sakti mujhe pata hai tum humari is princess ke liye kitna pain bear karte ho to yeh to kuch bhi ni.

Padma: acha shashank chodo mera hath mujhe angel ko bhi uthana hai.

Shashank leaves her hand (thought to write something romantic but couldn't imagine shashank doing romance hehe)

Padma gets up and goes to another room. As she enters the room we see room coloured in pink with various cartoon characters painted on wall. In the middle we see small bed with a small girl sleeping with a teddy with a smile on her face. Padma looks around the room and sees toys scattered everywhere padma shakes her head and goes towards the bed she sits beside her and looks at her angel urf garima and says garima beta get up... garu beta utho

Garima: no mom mujhe abhi thodi der or sona hai.

Padma: garu beta aapne school bhi jana hai chalo utho beta

Angel gets up and hug her mom wishing her good morning

Angel then gets up and go to get ready and padma move to kitchen to see whether the breakfast is ready or not.

In Mallik mansion

Billy gets up and sees his wife sleeping peacefully. He gets up and get ready to go to his office where he works with shashank. As he gets ready in the meanwhile ananya also gets up she also gets ready as she has to go to gupta house. Both lives in same building.

In this way their days passed.

After one month one day in gupta house

Shashank and billy had taken off from their offices so that they can be with their wives. All four were sitting together and were talking about the kids. Suddenly ananya started getting labour pains so shashank and billy went with her to hospital.

In hospital ananya was taken to operation

After some time nurse comes out and says congratulatons it's a baby boy.

Shashank hugged billy and congratulated him.

Billy: can i meet her

Nurse: yes in sometime we are shifting her to private room then you can meet her.

In the meanwhile shashank called padma and told ger the good news since she could not come to hospital.

After ananya was shifted into the private room billy went to meet her wife and son. When he went to the room he saw his wife tired face but still a satisfactory smile playing on her lips. Billy went forward and kissed her forehead. Feeling his lips on her she opened her eyes and saw billy looking at her wth all the love in her eyes. When they both were looking into each other eyes, nurse bought their son after cleaning and gave to billy. Billy just couldn't say anything but just kept looking at his cute son who has his eyes closed but still there was small smile on his lips. He was just looking like an angel. Ananya broke his trance by calling him.

Billy went near her and said

Billy: ananya, finally after wait of nine months our son is with us. Look at him he is looking so cute.

Ananya just kept lloking at him blaberring with a smile on her face. Ananya said billy tumne apne bte ka naam socha

Billy: han iska naam hoga sab ladkiyon ke dil ka armaan. Par hum yeh sabko padma bhabhi or shashank ke baby ke sath bataenge.

Ananya: kya tum bhi billy bacha abhi hua hai r tumne abhi se isse ladkiyon ke sath jod diya

Billy: dekhna tum mere bte ke piche kitni ladkiyan pagal hogi

Ananya: billy tum na pure pagal ho

In the evening ananya was to get discharged and come home

Billy and ananya came home to see their drawing room decorated shashank was with them. They see smiling faces of padma and angel and on the wall their was a big poster on which it was written welcome home prince. Looking at this annaya got tears and she handed her son to billy and hugged padma.

Ananya: when did you do this and why did u take so much stress in this condition now angry

Padma: relax i didn't do anything poster was made by angel and decoration was done by servants i just guided them

Billy: then it's fine. Thank u bhabhi for such a wonderful surprise

Angel: mom mujhe bhi prince ko dekhna hai

Billy: han angel idhar aao. Wo bed par baithta hai r angel usko dekh kar boht khush ho jati hai.

Angel:wow kitna cute hai.

And then the elders start discussing about various things.

In this way few days passed and now its time for princess to come

One day padma and shashank were sitting and talking about something. Suddenly padma started feeling dizzy she holded shashank hand tightly. Shashank saw her and shouted padma

Hello guys this was part 2. Hope u will like it. Guys just one request if at any moment u find the story boring do tell so that i can either change the story or my writing style please

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