'Misunderstanding never END' [ PART 14 UPDATED ] [ COMPLETED - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

The update was awsme
I so luved it

Sandhir both r too much
Ek dusre ko jealous krne me tym waste krte h

Both cnt stay away from each other

They luv each other
Sanyu wants to confess
She's so excited to meet rd
She's imagining him everywhere

Rd ignoring sanyu
What hppnd to him
Sum thing to related with that fone call

Another misunderstanding disaster on its way

Cnt wait
Updte soon

Luv u
Keep smiling


I WILL POST SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja78

kya hua hoga???
m very eager to know...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shivika838

i must say it was a musical update , omg so many songs !! nice work 👏

Sandhir so passionate and now Randhir ignoring Sanyukta , wat can be d reason , hmmm ???
update soon , waiting 😊


SURE I WILL POST SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

itne sare soings ek hi update mein

mai toh loved it alot
sandhir shared a moment
ron ko kiska call aaya hain?
aur woh sanyu call kyun cut
kar raha hain??
eagerly waiting for next part
keep writing
update soon
with love
RIDDHIMA


THNKU...

I WILL POST SOON...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Its awsome dr ...
lovely update
Nccc one
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr


THNKS K NO PBLM...
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Posted: 10 years ago

"Misunderstanding never END" - PART 6 :


Rd in his home. .wo sanyu k msg ko padhta he bt reply ni deta uski aakho me ajib si kasis he..wo yad krta he aj jo ku6 bhi hua..

****Flashback*****

Rd k dad use call krte he n ghar bulate he...rd reach his home...vaha Vardhan sir n usk papa uska intezar kr rhe he...

rd' dad- rd me ye kya sun rha hu tere marks itne kam tera result itna kam

Rd- bt dad me isbar bhi first aya hu

Vsir- rd tum apna dhyan baki chizo me jyada dete ho or kam pe ni..n he left..

Rd dad- jarur Vsir us ladki ki bat kr rhe he

Rd- no dad ap ye kya bol rhe ho.. Usk dad ushse bahot naraz he bcoz Vsir ne unko bahot sunaya n sari sandhir k fight k bare me bataya...

Rd dad- rd ab tum muje ek promise kro

R- ha dad boliye

Dad- tum us ladki se dur rhoge

R(bt dad me ushse pyar krta hu dur kese reh sakta hu)- bt dad

Dad- tumhe meri kasam agar tum ni mane to me direct us ladki se milke bat kruga N rd k pas koi or option ni hota bcoz uski mom ki vajhse wo apne dad ki ye halat ni dekh sakta to sanyu se to wo or bhi affect ho jate he...

R- stop dad I promise me ushse dur rhuga..rd himself bt wo mere samne aayegi to kese ushse dur reh pauga...

Next day..rd class me betha he sanyu use dekh usk pass jati he..

S- rat ko reply ni diya me puri rat wait kr rhi thi Rd ku6 ni bol rha...even wo sanyu ko dekh bhi ni rha...fir PKC aajata he sanyu apni jagah pe beth jati he...


rd puri class k doran use dekhta he..usk balo ko jab wo kan k pi6e le jati he...n jab ku6 samj ni ata to Confused face banati he..rd love that n he smile bt ku6 keh ni sakta wo😉...


after class sanyu use bar bar rokti he n rd use ignor krta he...jab rd se rha ni jata to wo gusse me aak sanyu ko kas k pakad k...kehta he

R- I m sorry kal rat jo hua bt iska matlab ye ni he k tum mere pi6e hi pad jao...gale pad gai ho mere..

plz leave me alone Sanyu puri tarah se tut jati he ye sun k. Rd chala jata he...uski aakho me tears he jo wo sanyu se 6upa rha he

Rd k word sanyu ko tod dete he wo sochne lagti he k us rat jo ku6 bhi hua kya rd ko koi fark ni padta..

S(sanyu tu pagal he rd k aankho me dekha kitna dard tha jarur wo mujse ku6 6upa rha he bcoz agar use yehi kehna tha to us subha muje msg ni deta..)

S- is rd ka ego na use bolne ni dega bt me janti hu k wo mujse pyar krta he...is bar me apna pura dam laga dungi mr.shekhavat bt tumhare muhse niklvak rhugi k tum bhi muje pyar krte ho...

Sanyu has plan.."Mission RD Patao Start"..

Next day..sab log lab me kam kr rhe he...bt sanyu missing he...rd bar bar door pe dekh rha he.

He is worried k sanyu kal k bad khud ko taklif na de...bt fir payal ki aawaz aati he everyone looking at door...sanyu enter...

she wearing white n red anarkali dress...karli hair...bindi...payal n all..rd ki dream girl bank aati hr...sare boys...rd,jiggi,parth,sahil..n even Vsir sanyu ko dekh k dang reh jate he...sanyu kostu k pas jak khadi ho jati he...first time..Vsir sanyu ko compliment dete he..

Vsir- u looking beautyful..rd use dekh rha he n fir nazar dusri taraf kr deta he...sanyu thank u sir...sab firse kam strt krte he...sanyu rd k pass jati he...rd muje ye samjni aarha..

Rd- (usko dekhe bina samja rha he..) ishe ye kehte he ise wo n all...

Sanyu suddenly drop her dupatta...rd pakad leta he n sanyu ko pehnata he...sandir eye lock...hawa chalne lagti he..

rd k aankho me clearly sanyu k liye love dikh rha he..bt firse ego bichme aajata he..n

rd turn his face n say- agr samj liya hoto jao yaha se muje disturb mat kro...


Sanyu to herself.- rd pehli jung to me jit gai ab next plan ki bari he...


Sanyu has a another plan to seduce rd...sab lab se chale jate he bt sanyu rd ka cell apne pass chupa deti he...n rd rat ko use dhundhte hue lab me pahochta he..vaha sanyu...uska intezar kar rhi he...rd cell dhundh rha he .

S- ise dhundh rhe ho...rd apna cell sanyu k hath me dekhta he..rd gusse se usk hathse cell leta he n vaha se ja rha hota he k sanyu hold his hand n come close to her...


wo ek dam usk karib jati he..usk lips n rd k lips k bich hardly 1ench ka distance hota he.eye lock..n then sanyu touch his lips...

rd close his eyes...ek dusre k garam saanse mehsus kr rhe hote he n kiss hone vali hoti he k.. Vsir vahase ja rhe hote he unk kadamo ki awaz se rd open his eyes n sanyu ko dhakka deke chala jata he...sanyu smiles n she also left..

Next day Vsir new task dete he...ek engine repair krne k liye jisme girls mese ek n boys mese ek winner hoga n use 1lakh rs milege..its a money task...

vidusi ku6 bhi kark jitna chahti he...

Vsir- bt pehle tum logo ko wo engine dhundhna he jo clg me kahi bhi ho sakta he so run farzies ...best luck..n he left...

Sanyu engine dhundhte dhundhte ek room me pahochti he jaha koi ni jata vidusi uska pi6a kr rhi hoti he n she locked sanyu...

sanyu scared bcoz waha bahot andhera hota he...rat...bat..sab ki awaz k darse sanyu bahot dar jati he...wo bar bar door kholne ki kosis krti he bt ku6 ni hota..wo Rona start kr deti he...

she cry hard. ( 😉 )

Sanyu bahot roti he help k liye chillati he..

4 baje se wo gayab he...n ab rat k 9 baj gye he kostuki paresan he q k sanyu use kahi ni mil rhi wo parth ko call krti he...vidusi ko engine mil jata he wo use repair kar rhi he..

Kostu parth se milti he Kostu- parth tumne snyu ko dekha mene har jagah use dhundha bt wo ni mil rhi or nahi mera fon utha rhi he..


Parth use call krta he..uska fon switched off hota he...

P- sanyukta ka fon bandh he...ese kese ho sakta he kaha ja sakti he wo...dono ki bat rd sun leta he usw bhi engine mil jata he..wo sanyu k liye paresan hota he..

P- tum tension mat lo me use dhundhta hu n parth nikal jata he sanyu ko dhundhne...rd bhi sanyu ko dhundhne nikal jata he.. Dusri taraf sanyu ki tabyat kharab hoti he...qk wo kabse ro rhi thi n chilla rhi thi...ab use pyas bhi lagi he...

Rat ke 12 baj gye he abhi tak kisi ko sanyu ka pata ni chala...

rd to himself- agr sanyu ko ku6 hua to iska zimmedar sirf me hu...plz god meri sanyu ko thik rkhna...me aa rha hu sanyu plz apna khayal rkhna... Parth n rd ek dusre se takrate he..

R- andhe ho dikhta ni he

P- sorry rd wo me sanyu ko dhundh rha tha..

R- pura campus dekh liya bt sanyu ka koi pata ni ...I hope she is fine.. Parth rd ko consol krta he n kehta he wo thik hogi.un dono ki nazar sabse upr vale flor pe jati he...

R- vahape to koi ni jata bt is ladki ka koi bharosa ni sayad wo waha hogi.. Dono bhagk jate he parth left jata he n rd right side...parth ek door kholta he vaha sanyu ni hoti...

Rd bhi ek room ka door kholta he..dusri taraf sanyu k room ka door bhi khulta he...

Rd open a door...sanyu door k taraf dekhti he dhire se door khulta he..

sanyu thik se ni dekh pati bt koi boy he jo uski taraf aarha he...kya wo rd he?

Sanyu- randhir??? Wo boy uski karib jata he n she is shocked..wo rd ni he... Dusri taraf rd door kholta he vaha sanyu use ni milti...

Sanyu - sir ap? Yes the boy is none other than vardhan sir... Wo cctv camera me sanyu ko vaha jate dekh lete he jab kostu ki vajhse unhe sanyu missing he pata chalta he to wo use bachane vaha pahoch jate he...sanyu feel safe n she faint..

Vsir- sanyukta aakhein kholo...wo dar jate he or unhe niharika ki yad aati he..

****Flashback****

Niharika k sath bhi esa hota he..wo bhi room me bandh ho jati he tab Vsir use bachate he..


****flaahback END****

Sanyu me unhe niharika nazar aati he wo sanyu ko hug krte he rote he V- me tumhe ku6 ni hone dunga my love...plz aakhein kholo...wo sanyu ko tightly hug krte he n forhead pe kiss krte he Wo sanyu ko uthak leke jate he...

parth n rd dono unhe dekhk unk sath jate he P- sir sanyukta thik to he na

Rd- wo behosh q he wo ku6 bol q ni rhi?

V- shutup u both.. jaldi se medical room me chalo...in medical room..

sanyu ko doc dawai dete he n wo so rhi he...

Vsir parth n rd tino use dekh k relax feel krte he...Vsir chale jate he... P- rd tum jao or apna task pura kro me sanyukta k sath hu..

Rd- no me sambhal lunga...rd apna sara task ka kam room me le aata he taki wo sanyu pe nazar rakh sake...

Parth smile n left.. Medical room me rd kam kr rha he..

Rd medical room me apna task pura kr rha he...sanyu silently so rhi he..rd bar bar use dekh rha he...tabhi uski nazar sanyu k hath pe padti he... door ko bar bar kholne ki kosis k vajahse choti si chot lag jati he use...rd usk hath pe patti krta he...

sanyu dar k vajhse rd ka hath pakad leti he sanyu nind me bol rhi he...

S- rd muje chod k mat jao muje dar lag rha he...plz rd mat jao..

Rd( usk aakhe num pad jati he)- sanyukta daro mat me yahi hu bilkul tumhare pass..me tumhe kabhi akela ni choduga..plz daro mat n he hugged her...

sanyu firse so jati he..rd ki baho me use sukun milta he...rd bhi ese hi so jata he..dusri taraf Vsir apne ap ko maf ni kr pate qk unhone sanyu ko niharika samj k forhead pe kiss kiya..

Vsir to himself- ye kya kiya mene itne shal apne apko sambhla tha mene khudko kabhi tutne ni diya or aj...sanyukta??? Usme muje niharika kese dikh sakti he...he shouted kese?? wo as pass ki sari chize bikher dete he...

Vidusi engine thik kr rhi he parth usk pass jata he n uski help karta he...or sanyu k bare me batata he...vidusi feeling guilty n wo parth ko batati he k sanyu ko usne bandh kiya tha...parth uspe gussa hoke chala jata he...

Morning...

Sanyu ki aankh khulti he wo khudko rd ki baho me dekhk khush hoti he n firse so jati he use hug krk...ku6 der bad rd uth ta he..n apna adhura kam pura krta he...

sanyu uth ti he n rd ko dekhk smile deti he ...n eye lock...hawa chalti he n song bajta he... Dil aj kal meri sunta nahi... Dil aj kal pass rehta nahi ...

Ye tujse hi milne ko chahe... Ye teri hi krta he baatein Kya tum ho kya tum ho wahi... Dil aj kal..

Rd- sanyukta tum thik ho na?? tumhe ku6 chahye kya??muje batao me le aata hu..


To be continue...


SO HER IS THE LINK AND IF U WANT ANOTHER ANOTHER SS LINKS SO HER U GO LINKS...


SS : YEH HAI AASHIQUI

SS : TOO GOOD TO SHARE

SS : MISUNDERSTANDG NEVER END

FF : SLIP N FALL

SS : FINALLY ITS OVER


Edited by purni143 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Loved rd's Care for sanyu😊
The story is so different
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome lovely superb
fab lovely lovely lovely
very very nice
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar ye randhir ke dad i tel you...
I hate dat man...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update

So rd k dad ne naya siyaapa kia h
Bcz of him rd ignoring sanyu

Bt sanyu b kam ni h
She wants to make rd confess his luv

Sanyu locked in store room
Rd searching her lyk maniacs

Vd sir thought sanyu to be niharika

Rd taking care of sanyu

Wtng for next
Update soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

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