SANDHIR FF: MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK+MATURE)LINK TO THREAD 2!! - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Oh

Chill yr don't spoil ur mood
It hppns
N madam second b kaam ni hota
R rhi bt uss gorilla ki toh next tym dikha dena ki asli boss kon h

ha ha ab toh uss gurrilla ko dikhana hia padega...ugghhh...😆😆😆

So smile n enjoy

N don't b sorry for update we all can wait
U just make ur mood gud


thankiee...😳😳😳

Luv u yr
Keep smiling


thankiee dear for undertsanding...keep smiling...😃😃😳😳...love u sooo much...😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hiii Preety

its ok Dear will be waiting!!



thankiee dear for undertsanding...keep smiling...😃😃😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Naz.Karam-

Will u update today ???


yeah just wait for 5 mins updating...🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: preety..bhumi.s


yeah just wait for 5 mins updating...🥱

yayyy... :D
My mood was soo off today.. but finally u made me smile :D love u loads ... and ab update karo.. i will res :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

hey guyz m up with the next part of

MY EQUATION OF TRUST


MY EQUATION OF TRUST (DARK + MATURE)


and i wanna dedicate this to newmoon thankiee rashi for your support and love...

PART:5


JINGLES OF HER BANGLES


Precap: sandhir encounter...sarth talks...parth real face and randhir asked parth to buy up sanyukta...


Rd replied still looking at her "pure 50,000 me khareedne ke liye taiiyar hu me use..."..everyone was in shock...ofcourse at that time 50,000 were just equal to the 2 crore of today's time...but someone was not at all shock yeah it was sanyukta because she was still irrecoverable from the pain..pain of broken trust...she was just numb...looking at the ground...soon parth came out of his daze and confirmed in his shock and lil chocked voice... "sir kya aap ise sach me 50,000 me kharidna chahte hai...she is very new to all this..infact you are the first one to have her in this world..." rd whose gaze was still fixed on her became silent for few minutes...he also got confused to whether to buy her or not...but soon her voice ranged up in his mind... "me bohot kuch karr sakkti hu tummhare saath..." "its again a 26TH JANUARY... AGAIN A NIGHTMARE..." yeah now he was able to register the things which happened in the last night and then he said while analyzing something up in his mind... "yeah I want her...just pack her stuffs and send her to my car...I will take her up with me...and yeah your money right... (he took out the check from his pocket which were hardly noticeable at that time and gave it to him by signing the amount...)..ye lo tumhara check...now just send her..." And then rd left from there to his car... Parth was still shocked ...means he was confused that why anyone was ready to spend this much on a inexperienced girl... for a second he was doubting his choice but in next second he brushed up all the thoughts and smirked by fixing his gaze on her...he moved to her and said while cupping her face in his cheap sweet voice... "hey sandy why are you so quiet baby...u know I really love you...(she looked up at him with teary eyes..)..tumhari wajah se aaj me sach me ameer ho gya...(her eyes questioned her destiny)...achha btw m sorry ab tum mere saath nahi reh sakti becuz me ab tumhe rent pe nahi de sakta becuz now mr. shikhawat owns you...(he scratched his head in confusion) btw ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki tumme esa hai kya jo vo tumhe jaane hi nahi dena chahte...(he hitted at his head)...oh shit lagta hai mene kuch miss kardiya...damn...but let it be now I have lot many to spend on someone like you...(he turned to his gang and ordered one of the girl to pack her stuffs which he had brought from her old residual.. the bar...and other girl to drop sanyu to the car...) ...bye sandy..." soon the girls took her to his car along with her stuff while she was just numb..just like a robot...they reached near his car and he came out from his car with a blank expression on his face...he ordered girls to leave...and the girls left from there leaving blank sandhir all alone...he moved to her and was about to say something but just he witnessed her falling down..and within a second he rushed to her and took her in his arms...yeah now she was not in her senses...he got tensed but was irritated and frustrated too by looking at her...but he calmed himself for a unknown reason and took her to his car..and made her lie down at the back seat...soon he turned himself on the driving seat and dashed up from the place... He was driving quietly...THE JINGLES OF HER BANGLES were just distracting him..he became aggressive and just then the things again rang up in his mind... he hated the girls most in the world...and this presence of her was just making him impulsive...he drove up the car at its highest and reached his mansion within next 15 minutes which was out of the city...he took her to one of the guest room of the mansion and made her lie down over there and left from there without even looking at her face...


In evening...

She woke up with lil headache while rubbing her palm on her head...and then said in her dreamy voice... "nazia baaji aap plz sardard ki davayi dedijiye na..." she waited for few seconds while rubbing her palm on her head but nothing came back so she opened her eyes while murmuring in the air... "are ab ye baaji kaha chali gayi..." But after looking at the different surrounding reality stuck her..tears made their way from her eyes...she cried up silently in the room for sometime... while looking at the ceiling cursing god for the day...but then something popped up in her mind and she woke up with jerk and started checking up her dress in fear...while panicking...she was roaming her palms on her dress, neck, nape whole body to check up that was everything alright...was she still virgin or not...she sighed by getting to know that till now she was virgin...but in the next moment she dugged her head in her palm and started crying bitterly...may be she was crying on the fact that she was a girl...she was a person who has to even think before going to sleep...she was crying continuously..suddenly a shiver went through her body...by listening to a voice...yeah it was his voice frightening her with his simple but ironic words... "hey...drama company...ye sab kahi aur karna..." She lifted her head up from her palm with a jerk and then stood up from the bed while panicking and shivering by looking at him..yeah she was scared by him...by a man who can take up her most precious thing..her dignity... He smirked at this and then said in his victorious voice while leaving from the room... "jaao jaa kar pure mansion ki safaayi karo bohot din se saaf nahi hua hai..." She relaxed a bit at this... And then started cleaning the room...while making a JINGLES OF HER BANGLES...and after listening to the voice of jingles of bangles he stopped at the door...something came up in his mid...he closed his eyes to witness the JINGLES OF HER' BANGLES given by him...he smiled dreamingly...but in the next moment the smile faded and ire took over his face...he became red in anger...he turned with a thud and went up to her and turned her... the poor unaware soul.. by her elbow... And pinned her to the nearby wall leaving her in huge shock...she was breathing heavily while shivering lil at his touch...his eyes were red...he took her one of the wrist full with bangles in his palm and banged it to the back wall while looking at her with rage...she cried out in pain...yeah the bangles were of glass they broke up in her wrist...tearing her skin with its sharp edges...causing her blood and tears to come out of her...he smirked to this...with a devilish smile on his face while she was looking at her red wrist with tears in her eyes...he took her other wrist in his palm and started moving it upwards to bang it on the back wall...she got frightened but don't know wat but something let her to do so...she looked at him with her teary eyes pleading him while moving her head in no...he smirked to this and was about to bang her other hand too on the wall but their eyes got latched...his eyes met with her innocent eyes...filled with tears...pleading him to not to hurt her...his eyes witnessed something mutual in it...he felt a lump in his throat...and next he left her wrist with a thud and turned his back to her while closing his eyes tight...said in his commanding harsh voice suppressing something in himself... "hey you...ye chudiya abhi ke abhi utaar ke pheko..(she was still in her place looking at her red wrist with pain...weeping silently..and then he said in his raised voice after not getting the response...sending a shrill though her spine...)...mene kaha utaar ke pheko...(she stirred at this and started taking out the bangles from her hand...while panicking and making sound of bangles in the room...irritating him...he got frustrated...he made a fist in anger...but controlled his rage and left from there while saying in his ironic commanding voice...)... Pura ghar saaf karna mat bhulna..." As soon as he left from there she sighed a lil and started removing by her injured hand the bangles of other hand while crying silently...she took out the bangles..dumped them in the dustbin..and started looking up for the first aid..but unfortunately nothing was there...she moved towards the washroom and washed off the blood from her hand while wincing at the pain...cursing her fate...


Recap: storm to come up guyz...

Btw how was it...?????


guyz btw kal mera test hai toh mere liye thodi prayer kar dena

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Posted: 10 years ago
Resshhh :D
Hahahaha moi first :D

Unresss :DD

Lovely update dear ! And wow.. I soo loved parths dialouge : he owns u now.. something like that 😆

The update was amazing. Randhir is feeling angry on her but something stops him..
Now sanyukta is in his house yippiieee :DDD

Awesome written dear !..sorry cant write longer now :( have a bad headache :'(

And all the best dear... take care muahhzzz :PPP
Edited by -Naz.Karam- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: preety..bhumi.s

INDEX

PROLOGUE : PAGE NO.1
PART 5 : JINGLES OF HER BANGLES

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Naz.Karam-

yayyy... :D

My mood was soo off today.. but finally u made me smile :D love u loads ... and ab update karo.. i will res :D


LOL WOW SO I MADE SOMEONE SMILE M SO HAPPY NOW...🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress


Unresss
Moi firse second yr 😭 😭


Bt koi ni the chapter is dedicated to me 😃
I m super happy yr
Luv uuu
Really ur sweet gesture means a lot

The update was amzng yr
Sachi u r hell talented

Try hand in writing a novel for sure
R pehli copy mje chahiye 😉
With autograph 😉


Really darloo u penned it so beautifully
This topic is really very sensitive n very much needed to be enlighten

N u r expressing it flawlessly
Really u r one of my favourite writers over here
U write superb


Feeling extremely bad for sanyu
She's broken beyond repair she's not in her senses
The pain of parth betrayal is untolerable for her


Rd he brought her
He's sum where feeling sympathy for her

There's sum connection in 26 January
Her words ringing in his ears

I so wanna kill dat b****** parth
He's so cheap
😡 😡 😡


Rd concerned bt his anger overpowering it

It feels he hates girls

Sanyu poor soul
It seems its just starting of hell


Rd treating her lyk servants he wants her to clean his house

The sound of her bangles soothing at the same tym it triggered the monster
He was so evil
He was hurting her so much

Bt there's little humanity in him
He left her
Precap hell scary

Cnt wait
Update asap


Luv u sweeto
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amzng updaye.why rd hate grls so much? m waiting for his back story. sanyukta is suffrng alot wd out any reason. but its a dark story. awsome part.thnk u so much for pm. update nxt prt soon as ur precap scars me. keep smiling
btw all d bst for ur xms. rock ur xms 😛
Edited by parsh-lover - 10 years ago

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