THE JADED PRINCE [MG] PART 206-207 Page 25 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

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You are most welcome..
Haan wo tou hai aakhr ko wo Maan Singh Khurana aur Geet Maan Singh Khurana hain 😉

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

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Originally posted by: NilzStorywriter

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PART 182

Shekhar was sitting next to Geet... jab Maan distracted tha he asked ki

Shekhar- What is Sheetal spewing about? Maan ke past mein koi problem hai kya?

G-Problem? Bhaiya...ap Sheetal ko jaante ho naa

Shekhar-Jaanta hoon par...tune maa ko bhi kuch nahi bataya jab maa ne tujse poocha...Sheetal even said he's a murderer...Geet... what is going on? He may be a big man but he can't force you to go back with him if he is harassing you...tum yahin ruk jao agar koi bhi problem hai

Bhai whispers to Geet and wahan Maan has started dumping food from his plate to aas paas ki saaliyon ki plate mein...mil baantke khane se pyaar badhta hai...

G-Aisa hota to main aap logon se kyun chupati. Aap dekh rahe hain naa...Maan kitna acha hai

Shekhar gives frown not ready to let it rest.

Shekhar-Khane ke baad mujhe milna room mein

Wahan saaliyaan have finally stopped dumping more food aur maa bhi sabki daant laga rahi hai ki kya gand macha rakhi hai...Maan ki bhi daant pad gayi.. ki

Ma-Aap bhi inke sath shaamil ho liye... ye hai hi aise aap ko bhi bigaad denge

Maan bechara saaliyoon ke beech fasa hua hai

Ab finally dinner khatam hota hai

Saaliyaan were organizing some kind of game aur Geet ko alag team mein kar diya

Wahan Sheetal comment maar rahi thi

Sheetal-Meri to koi sunn hi nahi raha hai. Aap logon ko baat samajh kyon nahi aati. How could you all leave your daughters around him like that?

Tab Geet kae father raises his voice-

Father-Sheetal! Bohot ho gaya. Kuch kehna hai to saaf saaf kaho warna chali jao sone, tum bohot thak gai ho

Geet looks at Sheetal then at Maan

Maan looks as if nothing can touch him or bother him

Sheetal gives a a poisonous triumphant look and sab ugal deti hai ki Maan killed his father in fit of rage then got into juvi, wahan kisi ne isse adopt nahi kiya aur ab jab ye 16 ka hua...

G-BASSS!!!! BASSS KARO SHEETAL

Sheetal- Maine koi jhoot nahi kaha hai. Agar kaha hota to ye khooni chup nahi hota

She says pointing to Maan

Sheetal-Am I right or not?

She asks Maan

G-MAAN KOI KHOONI NAHI HAI. JO USNE KIYA ...SELF DEFENCE KIA

Maan goes and keeps his hand on Geet's back

M-Shhh

He whispers in her ear then aloud he says

M-I was quiet coz no one asked me anything...unlike you, I don't speak until people want to listen to me

Shekhar looks at Maan and Geet and how Maan is touching Geet. They can see he is trying to comfort her lekin usne defend bhi nahi kiya ki usne murder kiya hai and Geet to nadaan hai sab badon ki opinion mein

Geet is shaking with anger...looking at Sheetal

Maa is standing mouth open then she closes it and says

Ma-Bas Sheetal chup! Tumhe kuch nai pata hai, ye sab koi galat fehmi hai. Maan can't harm a soul. Aur kuch nahi sunna hai humein

Geet's father-self defense?

Geet looks at dad

Dad is looking at Geet and then at Maan switching his questioning eyes between two of them

Shekhar- Maan...tum...ye log jo keh rahe hain... is there any truth in it?

Maan looks once more at Geet for confirmation. He had said he would lie and he had meant it

Geet looks at Maan

G-Main bataungi ya tum bataoge?

Maan smiles at Geet ki jaise usne koi joke mara ho and then shakes his head...at the absurdity of the situation. He never thought his father could haunt him from his grave but apparently he can

G- My father was an alcoholic and he had several sessions of rage when the alcohol wasn't enough or something irritated him...say a shoe lying in his path. My mother suffered a lot .By the time I was 10 he was very violent during his rages. One night he was about to kill my mother... coz she wouldn't do something he demanded...he had belted her already...he was down to smacking her head. So I decided it was up to me to save her

Geet holds his hand lovingly

M-Earlier if I did anything he would come back with double anger... I decided that double of that would be hell so I ended it. There was a stick; I hit him till...till he never got up. The judge had some sympathy. But my other became very sick, she couldn't account for me. So I got sent temporarily to juvenile detention centre. But she died few months later due to those injuries and they had no option but to keep me there permanently.

Geet's eyes are brimming with tears

M- I got out when I was 16 with no police records and became...

She holds his hand tight

M-Became self-employed...

She looks at him and he squeezes her hand back

M-That's all. If you want more details...

He smiles...me up here you down there... wali... Prince style full of arrogance...make Geet happy if they want to know.. warna bhaad mein jao kyun bataye wo uske lagte kaun hain

M-If you all want more details...you'll have to earn them

G-Sunn liya aap logon ne? Pata nahi log mere Maan ke peeche kyun pade hue hain [she glares at Sheetal]

Sheetal looks away disgusted

Maa too has some tears in her eyes and on her cheek. She walks up to them and puts hand on Maan's shoulder. She doesn't have words but her eyes are brimming with tears. She heard the longing in Maan's voice whenever he said 'my mother'. Finally she manages to say-

Ma-Iss ghar mein... nahi... mere liye... mere liye tum aur Geet hamesha mere bachche ho...iss ghar mein...

Maa looks sad

Ma-Iss ghar mein meri chalti nahi hai...par tum mere liye mere bete se kam nahi ho

Geet looks at Maa, holds her arm

Maan swallows...he wasn't really expecting ki Ma bhi ab usse accept karegi

G-Maa...you are the best...

Maaa smiles at both of them

Ma-Tumhari jodi bhi best hai

Geet gives a big ear to ear grin

Maan also manages smile

Ab Maa dono ko bhaga deti hai ki

Ma- Jao bohot ho gaya, so jao

Maan and Geet head towards their room

Sheetal Maan ke jaane ke baad kit kit karti hai ki...

Sheetal-That's just Maan's version. Who would believe him?

But Geet ki party wale log give her a cold disapproving stare and leave

As Maan and Geet reach the room

Geet shuts the door

Maan walks in the room and stands near the window looking out

G-Cough*

To get his attention

M-How did you manage to get a sore throat?

He says not turning around

She walks to him and hugs him from back

He keeps his hands over hers which are knotted on his stomach

M -No sore throat then huh?

She smiles

M-You think your family is ok? They all looked badly shocked. Should we call some ambulance in advance?

She giggles

G-I am sorry about Sheetal's behavior

M-She is just jealous...her type of women... they don't...I don't really see them... they don't exist enough to bother me...

She nods

G-Kya hum mumma se chupayein?

M-Tumhari marzi

G-Khair chodo, main aai

M-Kahan jaa rahi ho?

G-Bhaag rahi hoon

She chuckles

M-Mujhe yahin chodke? Apni behno ke saath?!

He says with a little tiny pout

G-Ruko naa

She goes

Maan goes and bars the door with a chair

There is a knock after 5 minutes

M-Who is it?

G-Ghost

Geet awaaz badal ke bol rahi thi in a heavy voice

M-Go haunt someone else

Maan nahi kholta gate

G-Open the door...ha ha ha

Maan jhat se uthkar gate kholta hai when he recognizes her voice

He pulls her in and closes the door again

She is chuckling

G-Kya tum bhi, darwaza nhi kholte

M- Tumhe kya pata tumhari behne kaisi hain...monsters

G-Pleaseee!!! Aisa kuch nahi hai they are sweet. Khair ye lo

She hands over a glass full of milk

G-Maa ne kaha tumhe dene ko

M-Why am I supposed to drink that?

G-Hota hai kuch rivaaz, jamai and all that. Pii lo

M-Tum pii lo. You will like it

He says turning and going to lie down on the bed

G-Main kyun piyun? Tumhare liye hai. Waise maa keh rahi thi, ki hum dusre room mein so jaye, mera bed chotta hai naa

His hand is under his head and eyes are closed now

G-Pii lo naa! Zeher thode milaake laayi hoon

M-Main yahin so raha hoon tumhe jana hai to batao; aur uthke gate thik se band karo and I don't like milk

G-You don't like milk?

M-No

G-That's so weird

M-What's so weird about it?

G-Nothing...jao kitchen mein jaake rakh ke aao. Main nahi jaa rahi. Baar baar kaam karaate ho

M-Main akela is kamre se bahar nahi nikal raha.. subah wapas rakh denge

G-Waise kaun khaa raha hai tumhe bahar?

M-Tumhari sweet behenein

G-Kharab ho jayega dudh

M-To pii lo

G-Maine pii liya

M-Aur pii lo. I am sure it's good for health and stuff

PART 183

G-Maine pii liya

M-Aur pii lo I am sure it's good for health and stuff

G-tum pii lo. Maa said, taakat milegi

M-I just broke a door aur kya tudwana hai?

G-Andar se taakat...something like that

M-I have plenty of stamina

G-Thik hai, khaa lena maa ki daant kal. Mujhe kuch nahi pata

M-I'll tell her it was your fault

G-I'll throttle you

M-We'll see about that. Remember who broke the door?

Maan says opening one eye to look at her so it looks like he is winking at her

G-Khair...dusre room main chalna hai to bolo. Bhaiya bhabhi ke room mein. Yahan bed chota hai

M-No, I don't wanna disturb any one

G-Wo soye nahi abhi tak. jaldi bolooo

M-It's big enough if you want more space... I'll sleep on the floor

She raises an eyebrow

G-Naatak

Maan closes both his eyes managing a straight face despite an urge to smile

Geet goes out

G-Maaa Maan dudh nahi pii raha aur kahin aur sone mein bhi natak kar raha hai. Aap log sooo jaooo. Good nighttt

M-It would take a heck lot more to embarrass me... I mean people would wonder why I don't want to sleep anywhere else... it will be quite obvious...

Maa dusri side se

Ma- Achcha thik hhhai so jaaa

Bhabhi-Yahan sooo jaateee

G-Koi nahiii so jaooo bhabhiii

Saare apne room se chilla rahe hain

Bhabhi-Acchaaa good nighttt

G-Good nighttt

M-You people should have intercom

Maan utters pulling pillow over his ear

Geet door band kar deti hai aur light off kar deti hai

G-Arre ye night lamp kharab ho gaya. Uff andhera!!!

Geet adhi cheezein ger guraake pohonchti hai

G-Uuufff...ouchhh

She lands on top of him

G-ohhh ufff...tum ho kya

M-Who else?

G-Ufff hato naaa

He puts his hands on her waist lifting her easily and puts her by his side

M-ok now?

G-Haan haan

Her room has stars on the ceiling...which glow in the dark

M-Why do you have that glowy thing on your roof?

G-Isn't it pretty??? Like the night sky

M-Hm...

G-Don't you like it???????

M-It's ok...

Andhere mein ek paer maarti hai Maan ko

G-You don't have any choice

M-Stop that!

She does it again

G- Geet stop it, I mean it

Ab to Geet apna paer rakh hi deti haai Maan pe

He doesn't even mind it... he is enjoying the weight

Hawa se wo door awaaz karte huye thoda khul jaata hai

M-You didn't close it properly... jao theek se atkake aao

G-Thik se hi atkaya hai. Main nahi jaa rahi

M-To khul kaise gaya? You should correct your mistakes.

G-Khul jaane do. Thodi light aayegi

M-No way, tumhari behenein bahar hain

G-Khair, pata hai Maa keh rahi thi ki kyun naa hum Purna jaayein

M-Kahan jayein?

He asks getting up and looking around for a light switch

G-Purna, wahan hamre kull devi ka mandir hai. Unka ashirvaad lene, shaadi ke baad. Bohot achchi jagah hai

M-uhhuh...

He makes some non-committal noises aur light jalaata hai

G-it's so close to nature

Maan gate dhang se atkake band karta hai... chair ke sath ek table bhi khiska deta hai

G-Maan andhera mat karo naa. Koi nahi hai bahar , sab so gaye

M-Mujhe gate kholkar neend nahi aati. It's too unsafe. Hum light jalake so jaenge

G-Haan jaise wo tumhare upar kund jayengi

Maan shrugs

M-Should I leave the lights on?

G-No. tum naa...sunte nahi ho meri baat. Achi hawa aa rahi thi

M-I am listening to you

G-Garmi mein marr jaungi main

Maan light band kar deta hai

M-Kal tumhare kamre mein AC lagwa dunga

G-Chup raho

M- AC mein aadat bigad gai hai tumhari

G-Marr to main aaj hi jaungi naa

M-Haah..

G-Maan please gate kholo

He gives small laugh and settles down next to her again

G-Suffocation ho raha hai

Maan take a deep calming breath

M-Tum nahi soyogi na aise

G-Maan you know...I have a breathing problem. Jao tum jo marzi karo. Main jaa rahi hoon. Good night

Geet grabs her pillow

M-Fine fine!

Maan jaake gate khol deta hai

M-Lo ab so lo

G-Nahi tum so jao. Mera mood waise hi off ho gaya hai

M-You need a mood to sleep next to me?

Geet takes the pillow and goes

M- Jo karna hai karo

He picks up the quilt and settles on the floor in her room next to the window leaning his head against the wall. He can't sleep with open gates knowing there are other people around especially those whom he doesn't know and doesn't trust

Geet goes to Maa

G-Maa hato, jagah do

Maa-Geet yahan kya kar rahi hai?

G-Sone aayi hoon aur kya

Ma-Tere kamre mein kya hua?

G-Kuch nahi. Kya hona hai?

Ma-Mujhe kya pata beta... aayi to tu hai...

G-Kuch nahi hua. So jao

Ma-To phir apne kamre mein kuch nahi hua to bachchi hai kya jo ab bhi apni Maa ke sath soyegi? You should sleep with your husband like a proper wife

G-Maaa!! Mere kamre mein wo saandh[bull] so raha hai naa

Ma-Chup!!! Aise nahi bolte hain!!!

Itne mein Geet ki khusur-phusur mein Geet ke papa jag jaate hain

Dad-Ye kya ho raha hai? Geet? Koi kaam hai? Itni raat ho gai hai, tum dono kal baat karna

G-Main sone aayi hoon papa

Dad-Tu yahan nahi soegi. Jao apne kamre mein. Bachchon jaisi baatein mat karo. Aur agar tumhe Maan se hi problem hai to hum phir usse abhi ghar se hi bahar nikaal dete hain

G-Kyunnn???? Papa aisa kyun keh rahe ho uske baare mein? Uss bechare ne kya kiya?

Dad-To problem kya hai Geet? Why are you here instead of your room? Kya natak hai ye naya , raat mein tumhara?

Maa- Aap bhi datton mat. Beta baat kya hai? Agar Maan se problem nahi hai to kamre mein kya hua?

G-Maaa aap log naa ! Jaa rahi hoon main

Dad-Good . Jao aur so aur raat mei chillana band karo tum sab

Geet chuckles and leaves

Maa-Good night beta

Geet enters her room

Wahan Maan khidki ke paas ek pillow diwaar ke against laga kar baitha hai...knees drawn up...eye closed and hands are clasped around his legs

Geet light jala deti hai looks at him

Thoda sa paani leke ger rahi hai Maan pe

Maan aankhe kholta hai par chup hai

She chuckles

G-Yahan kyun pade ho?

She sprinkles some more water on him

He wipes it off

M-I didn't want to fall asleep

G-Why?

M- Coz the door was open

She pours the water on him...jug sar pe udhel deti hai

G-Barishhh

She starts laughing

Maan looks at her and then at the empty jug in her hands thinking this is how mad person laughs like

Maan ki shirt bhi giili ho gayi...he takes it off and wipes his hair and face and shoulders with it and sits back on the floor...gili shirt kone mei phek kar

G-Chalooo

She pulls his hand

M- I am not sleeping with that door open. You go ahead and sleep

G-Ufff!!

She goes and shuts the door

G-Happy?

M-Open the door. You won't be able to sleep otherwise

G-I will. You can give me CPR if I fall short of breath [she has a mischief laden smile]

M-I would call on your dear sisters to do that

She frowns and he gives her a tight lipped smile

She puts her arms around his neck

G-Nahi I want it from you

M-You won't be in any condition to demand your rescuer. Jao gate khol lo... your health is more important than a night's sleep for me

G-Nahi kholungi, [whispers moving her face really close to his]

Maan holds her shoulders and holds her back a little

M-Main khol doon?

G-Nahiii

M-What do you want then?

G-I wanna sleep

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan

Tujhe Online dekha islye 'Waiting"l chipka dya 😆
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Awesome Updates.. Me loving ur long wale chapters 😃
aww so sweet Geet keliye Maan opens the door jabke khud usko open gate karke neend nhi ati 😊
now is Geet in romantic mood 😳
haaye Waiting for next already 😆

half of the truth is out
sheetal witch

Hahahaha
Maan n Geet fighting like kids.