SANDHIR FF - 'INNOCENT LOVE' PART 20 (LAST PART) UPDATED - Page 58

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Posted: 10 years ago
oh my! I'm really sorry for not reading and reviewing this wonderful fiction soon cause I was having my exams...
The title of the story seems so intriguing... I just can't wait to read it..
I'm off to read the fiction...

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My, my! This has to be the most romantic fiction, I've ever read, in the most un-romantic way...
Personification of Randhir and Sanyukta is just brilliant while portrayal of their pious friendship bond is par excellence.
From the very beginning of the first chapter till the very end of chapter 13 you've nailed it..! This fiction has kept me hooked so much that I feel addicted.
Although I hate those two 'kabab mein haddis' but their presence in this fiction as cupids of an eternal love saga was worthy enough.
I loved reading both jealous Sanyukta and jealous Randhir although Sanyukta suffered more. The kiss in chapter 13 was spell-bounding! It's description was fantastic making it all the more enthralling..
I loved the overall pace of the story and its flawless flow.
I really can't wait to read the next chapter..
Do update it soonish!!

Regards
Keya
Edited by -foreverhers- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely n fantastic update😳👏
love it 2 d core❤️
Sanyu confess her feelings😃
SanDhir Kiss !!!😳
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yippe..finally confession ho gya
I want from Randhir side too
lovely kiss
continue soon

Khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
AREY Y YOU ARE ENDING IT SO EARLY... ITS GOING GR8...
ONLY 2-3 PARTS??? REALLY??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Param_love

lovely n fantastic update😳👏

love it 2 d core❤️
Sanyu confess her feelings😃
SanDhir Kiss !!!😳
update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm



SHUKRIYA...!!!!

KISS 😳

LOVE

NIDHI ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

Yippe..finally confession ho gya
I want from Randhir side too
lovely kiss
continue soon

Khushi


SHUKRIYA...!!!!

KISS 😳


LOVE

NIDHI ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

first kisss---thats awesome !!!!

SHUKRIYA...!!!!

KISS 😳

LOVE

NIDHI ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anuja78

AREY Y YOU ARE ENDING IT SO EARLY... ITS GOING GR8...
ONLY 2-3 PARTS??? REALLY??




YEAH I'LL END IT SOON...!!! 😊

IT WAS ACTUALLY SUPPOSE TO BE 10 SHOTS.. !!! 😃

I HAVE TONS OF STORIES IN MA MIND...!!! 😃

THANK YOU FOR APPRECIATING DEAR ...!!! 😊

LOVE
NIDHI ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

oh my! I'm really sorry for not reading and reviewing this wonderful fiction soon cause I was having my exams...
The title of the story seems so intriguing... I just can't wait to read it..
I'm off to read the fiction...

RESERVED
UNRESERVED

My, my! This has to be the most romantic fiction, I've ever read, in the most un-romantic way...
Personification of Randhir and Sanyukta is just brilliant while portrayal of their pious friendship bond is par excellence.
From the very beginning of the first chapter till the very end of chapter 13 you've nailed it..! This fiction has kept me hooked so much that I feel addicted.
Although I hate those two 'kabab mein haddis' but their presence in this fiction as cupids of an eternal love saga was worthy enough.
I loved reading both jealous Sanyukta and jealous Randhir although Sanyukta suffered more. The kiss in chapter 13 was spell-bounding! It's description was fantastic making it all the more enthralling..
I loved the overall pace of the story and its flawless flow.
I really can't wait to read the next chapter..
Do update it soonish!!

Regards
Keya








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AM SO OVER WHELMED... 😳

THANKEWWW SO MUCH FOR APPRECIATING MY WORK...👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

INNOCENT LOVE


Part -14

"Leave me randhir... Lemme go..." She said controlling her tears

"I won't leave you... Why you wanna go... Please don't go to sameer.. " He pleaded

"He's waiting for me... And I can't leave him alone... " she said freeing herself from his grip

"You still love me?? " he asked

"Doesn't matters... Cause you don't love me... Infact this kiss must be a mistake for you... " she taunted

"I don't know what is love.. How love feels like... But I only know that when sameer touches you I feel like breaking his hands... When he calls you baby I feel like shutting his mouth forever... I can't bare when he hugs you... I can't bare when you uses his shoulder while laughing on some jokes.. I can't bare when he gives you roses and teddies... I kissed you cause its my right... Your lips belongs to only my lips... Your soul is mine... Your body is mine... Your laughter is mine... I CAN'T SHARE YOU WITH ANYONE... Since childhood it was me who had all rights on you... And on me only you have rights... AM YOURS... AND YOU'RE MINE... " randhir confessed all this with tears in his eyes.
Sanyu was looking at him in disbelief... She was unable to believe her ears... She wanted to hug him...kiss him again.. But she couldn't risk her heart again.. What if he's just insecure for sometime and will be normal again when sameer leaves... As he said he don't know what's love... He didn't said that he loves her still...

"Say something... I won't say sorry for this kiss... It was bliss.. It was my first kiss..." He said while blushing

"Don't lie.. You have kissed Alisha before... . you only said that on day of our exam.." She said

"I lied... Cause I thought if I'll say I didn't kissed her than you guys would tease me and would called me fattu again..." He made puppy face

"Oh please.. Am not blind OK... Alisha must have kissed you like hundred times..." She disgusted

"Yeah she TRIED hundred times... But I never felt right so I disappointed her every time..." He chuckle

"Hmmm.. I think we should go inside the hall... Cake cutting will start in sometime... " she said while leaving

"So you'll break up with sameer na..." He asked stopping her in way

"No... I'm going to marry him soon... Next week engagement hai most probably cause after that even am going with him to USA..." She said and left

"No... How can she do that... How can she marry him... I agree I have hurt her so much... But I can't see her with sameer... In USA they'll live together... I don't trust sameer... Meri veeru ko dekh kar to kisi ki bhi niyat fisal sakti h... Wait I won't let her get engaged to sameer... Why am getting restless...Do i love her?? No.. Arre... What's the feeling of love yaar..." He was frustrated

Soon he sensed someone hugging him from behind... And nibbling his earlobe to seduce him... But he felt it wrong so wrong and he jerked that person... Yea it was Alisha...

"What the hell you're doing..." He yelled

"Baby...don't shout... I was just loving you..." He locked her hands around his neck..

Randhir was distancing himself from her but he was too late... Sanyukta saw that she came back to call him for cake cutting ...she left from there with a sad smile... Randhir jerked Alisha away and ran behind sanyukta...

To be continued... ❤️

Edited by njal - 10 years ago

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