SOJI FF ~ '30 days to make you stay' part 33-34-35!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
wow.. loved it.. its getting interesting with every update..
I guess u were right.. this story is surely surprising me with every part.. and I am loving it ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
so now soham remembered everything abt that night.. very excited to know wat will be his next step...
and how will he come to know about his morning jaap which rajji had told him in 6th jan epi ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.
binder's thought of rajji marriage is great to shake soham from within ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
great work.. ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: soji123


your update is so nice ..i was just clearing my doubt..thanks๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


i genuinely appreciate that thank you very much !!

do continue to share you thoughts with me, i love to hear them !

thank you again !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nami9j

wow.. loved it.. its getting interesting with every update..

I guess u were right.. this story is surely surprising me with every part.. and I am loving it ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ...
so now soham remembered everything abt that night.. very excited to know wat will be his next step...
and how will he come to know about his morning jaap which rajji had told him in 6th jan epi ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.
binder's thought of rajji marriage is great to shake soham from within ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
great work.. ๐Ÿ‘



thank you !! glad you're liking the tension being built up !

Yep he FINALLY remembers!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

his next step??? well i don't want to spoil it to you ... but the title says it all !๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

ohhh snap... i think i didn't put the 6th jan talk in my story...

binder is such a nice mom. she is very understanding. more about her in the next part !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

PART 4


At Rajji's house. Everything is quite quiet. Suddenly beeji sees Angad and Simreen at the door. She calls everyone's attention.

Nirvail gets immediately angry "Yeh lo! Now what are you all coming here for? Don't you have enough of tormenting my poor daughter yet? It's better for you to leave! Now!"

Sarab puts his hand on Nirvail's shoulder. "Wait. Let's listen to what they have to say".

Angad puts his hands together and thanks him for giving him an opportunity to explain himself. They all sit down and angad starts to speak "I want to apologize for everything that happened to Rajji. It was never in our intentions to make her suffer. She suddenly left yesterday morning and we're trying to figure out what happened between her and sohum just as much as you."

Rajji's brother gets angry too "What? You live with her but you don't know what happened? Well isn't that funny?!"

Sirmeen starts crying "Please, let me just see her one more time. Let me talk to her one more time. Everything can't end just like that..."

Nirval smirks and shakes his head "This is not going to happen! You have done enough damage already."

At this moment rajji's comes out of the house and she is surprised to see Angad and sirmen. Angad and simren get up when they see her. Rajji comes close and gives her greetings.

Nirvail says "Beti, you don't have to say one word to them if you don't want to".

She looks at him then says "It's okay dad."

"How can it be okay when these people..."

"Baas karo dad! These people didn't do or say anything wrong. I'll say it one more time. It was my decision to leave their house so if you want to put the blame on anyone, you can only put it on me!"

Nirvail hearing this calms down.

Rajji gets closer to sirmen who falls into her arms, crying. "Rajji... You can't leave us like that! Think about it one more time. Think about Sohum!"

"It's because I'm thinking about him that I left. You know how much I tried to make my place into his life. But it only made him angry. And it made myself miserable. I can't take it anymore."

Angad gets closer "Rajji. I know my brother can be a bit harsh sometimes and maybe he told you something hurtful but if you could give him just another chance to make everything alright..."

"Veer ji. Nothing is going to change. There is no point in giving this situation more time. I really tried, you have to believe me..." she starts crying but angad comfort her and tells her that they all respect her decision and they will support her in every way they can.

Sarab says that even if it's a very sad news, it's rajji's decision and they all have to agree. Anyway, they were ready to bring her home a month ago so it doesn't change anything at the situation. He adds that he have full trust on god that soon he'll bring someone worthy of his Rajji and that everything will be alright, especially since it has been clear that Sohum didn't consider her as his wife from the very beginning, so it's safe to assume that her honor isn't damaged. Hearing this rajji flinches and her mother notices that her daughter is not feeling well she turns to angad and sirmen and says "I don't think that we should keep discussing this subject, especially since the person the most concerned didn't even come to see if our Rajji was alright. Thank you for coming and explaining yourself, this is all we could ask from you. This marriage shouldn't have happened in the first place and today we're paying the price for it. You have our words that there is no tension between both of our families but please... do not come again. We shall let Raji heal her wounds in peace and get use to this new life." Saying that she joins her hands and angad and sarmreen take it as a hint to leave.

Rajji goes to her room and starts crying but her mother soon follow in. "Beti..."

"Yes mummy jee?"

"You... you are happy with your decision?"

"This is not a matter of happiness. This is about what will make me and other parties suffer less".

"But... You won't regret it later right?"

"I can't answer this question as I don't know what life have in store for me mummy jee but I know that there was no use in staying in this unwanted wedding. At no point I felt like my kismet was linked to sohum's kismet and me coming back to this house is the result of it."

~~

When angad and simran reaches their house, it's getting late. Simreen goes in the kitchen to prepare the dinner while angad goes into sohum's room to tell him that they're back but there is no one here. He calls out his name to see if he is in the bathroom but no one is here either. He gets out and goes into the living room, worried that Sohum isn't here but at this moment, sohum enter by the front door, he is back from the machchan. He looks extremely tired and confused. Angad goes to him, worried, and asks him what is wrong. He looks up and down Sohum and he sees that sohum is holding a pair of female shoes in his hands. He asks what is that but soham doesn't answer and goes straight to his room. Simreen comes out of the kitchen with some food and asks where is sohum. Angad says that he just came from the front door and went directly to his room, they both go to see what is wrong. When they enter the room, they find sohum sitting on the floor near the bed, he is crying. Angad and simren are really worried so they kneel down by his side, asking what is wrong. He doesn't talk at first, he just keeps crying. But eventually he blurts out "rajji... what did I do to you..." Simren is extremely worried and starts tearing up. Angad helps sohum to get up and he helps him sit on the bed.

"What is going on Sohum?! Stop crying and tell me what is wrong?"

"Rajji... rajji... she shouldn't have left..." he keeps sobbing and angad push him lightly on his side so that he's lying on the bed, sirmeen puts his feet out and put the blanket on him. Sohum rapidly falls asleep as the shock of his realization has tired him out completely and took all of his energy out of him.

Simreen and angad get out his room worried. Sirmeen asks angad what is going on but angad says that whatever happened they only need to let him rest for now. He decides that they should all rest since it has been a long day for everyone.

~~

At rajji's house at night, she thinks again about what her mother told her "You won't regret your decision?" then she thinks about sohum when he said "I don't want anything from you!! ... I can't stand you anymore!". She closes her eyes and breathes deeply to calm herself. There is no regrets to have, she was no meant to be sohum's wife.

Edited by rajji-cutest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
fantastic part
love it soo much
it is getting more intersting as before
thanx for the update
u r really good

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
I am really very sorry that I couldn't comment on your 3rd part, I was bit busy. I love all the parts and your story line really make much more sense and genuine than all the crap they have shown. I am really enjoying it and can't wait for your updates. I really wish they have shown exactly what you have written than all the stuppid things they have shown.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: pinki123

fantastic part

love it soo much
it is getting more intersting as before
thanx for the update
u r really good


thank you so much ! i appreciate it ! ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rajji.soham

I am really very sorry that I couldn't comment on your 3rd part, I was bit busy. I love all the parts and your story line really make much more sense and genuine than all the crap they have shown. I am really enjoying it and can't wait for your updates. I really wish they have shown exactly what you have written than all the stuppid things they have shown.


awww you shouldn't be sorry ! The updates aren't going anywhere, you can reply whenever you want darling, and only if you want to.

Hahaha yes, when i started the story, i knew that rajji would leave sohum and so i wrote my own track, and i was glad when part of my story matched the episode but then BIDK started becoming really weird with the pregnancy track/ divorce and all... it was not pretty.

thank you for your comment, i appreciate you taking the time to do so ! much love !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
awesome update dear.. loved it.. waiting for soji confrontation ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.. but liking this all build up... feeling bad to see soham in such a condition.. he is guilty...
please update next part soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest



thank you !! glad you're liking the tension being built up !

Yep he FINALLY remembers!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

his next step??? well i don't want to spoil it to you ... but the title says it all !๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰

ohhh snap... i think i didn't put the 6th jan talk in my story...

binder is such a nice mom. she is very understanding. more about her in the next part !

@ bold...ya the morning thing was the main thing which had hurted rajji and made her angry towards soham .. she had never repented over what happened at night... in 16th dec epi wen soham tells rajji that he has remembered everything wat happened then rajji was happy for a sec .. but then wen she found that he still doesn't remember wat he murmured in morning rajji was again hurt and told him that she hates him.. so I am eager to see how will that morning thing come in front of soham in ur story ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ... well if u have already planed something diferent than go with it .. I am sure it will be interesting.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

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