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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: kreyafan

It would be very interesting to know what happens nxt.
Btw kya Rey Kriya ko bhul chooka hain?
awesome concept 👍🏼
Continue asap
and pm me


yeh to prhne k baad hi pta chale ga 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Gis...Arsha

plz..continue soon..
IF mein update karna...
awesome concept


IF mein ni krun gi to aur kahan krun gi ??? 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
So here goes part 1 because i dont want to waste ur precious time😉😛😆

A Long Time...

Part 1...

In the rehearsal hall...

Everyone was doing warm up when suddenly nillesh and vicky came in the hall shouting "nooo" and every1's attention get towards them

Swayam: kya hua ? Aise cheekh q rae ho?

Nil:yr bht bari prblm hogai hai...

vick: han yr

Neha: babu kia hua?(walking towards vicky)

Nil:yr humare college ko kisi ameer zadi ne khareed lia hai...

Every1:WHAT!!!

rey:ye kia keh rae ho..

Vicky: nil sahi keh raha hai...abi hum dono princi k office k paas se guzar rahe the to humne suna k : (flashback starts)

P(princi): so mrs.khurrana aj se college apka hua..mjhe to samaj ni aaraha k mein students ko ye baat kaise btaoun ga k ye clg kisi ne khareed lia hai...(flashback ends)

Sharon: to guyz isme prblm ki kia baat hai???

amar:ploblm ki daat ye hai k dia data new plinci dumein danth klne de dya nai(problm ki baat ye hai k kia pta new princi hmein dance krne dein ya nai)...

bharat:aisa nai hoskta hm abi princi se jaa kr baat krte hain...

Neha:bharat sahi boling chlo chlte hain...

Every1 went to princi's office,before they could Enter the office they heard a lady say:

L:sir meri bhi majburi hai apni beti ki wajah se kia hai meine ye sab uski protection k liye...uske mamle main mein kisi pr b trust ni krskti...

P:mein apki baat smjh skta hn.

L:and mein is college mein kch changes nai chahti jaisa ye college hai waisa hi rahe...

P:sure aur hm b yehi chahein ge k ap is college mein kkch changes na laein ...

L:aur haan mein ye b chahun gi k aap hi is college k principal rahein.

P:thank you mrs.khurrana mein yehi soch rha tha k apse ye baat kaise kahun mgr apne hi bol dia thank u very much

L:dekhiye meine apko pehle hi kaha i want no changes in this college so y would i change u?

And she comes outside...as she comes out the gang quickly hides...

Precap:khurrana's entrance in the college


i hope u like it sorry for any mistakes as i donot like to proof read😛 if u think that its short then sorry but i will give short but quick updates😃 and please someone make me the banner as i am very bad at it😊 and next update will be after 5 likes 😛
Edited by siddiqah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
interesting update 😊
i guess kriya mrs. khurrana ki daughter...
update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
starting to supab he
love the update
gang ke kuch kiye bina hi unka kaam ho gaya
n does that lady was talking about kria
means next update me uski entry
plz update next part soon
n do pm me too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
suspense suspense
woh lady kaun hain?
kya wo dance ban nahi karegi?
daughter ki protection matlab?
Iske baad kya hua?
sawal bahut hain 😊
so jaldi update karna
thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
nice update...
Update soon...
N pm me...
meghzzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
5 likes demand completed so now give the update...
meghzzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
for banner contact diya.
Her user ID is diyaswaronholic
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
interesting and nice concept 👏
eager to read.😃
update soon.

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