*Silent Emotions: UPD pg 58 'whhhooo'

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hey guys im starting this f-f hope u guys like it here's the first part😛 if u guys dont like it then i wont continue but if u do like it then i will😊

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"Mom I cant find todays newspaper!" kripa screamed on the top of her voice. Minutes later her mom came walking into her room she reached to kripas study table and waved the news paper in the air. Kripa hit her head. "sorry" she said in an innocent voice. "kripa u cant do anything without me then how will u live in NY all alone"? " Mom..Mishty is there rite?..so why worry soo much?" said kripa in a annoyed voice she had had this conversation with her mom to many times . her mom didn't want her little baby to go into the huge city of NY but she didn't have to worry since her elder daughter mishty was there she was a student of a medical skool it was her last year. And she was damn excited about not having to go through those huge books of human biology which tottaly scared her. Where as kripa dint mind huge books because she believed that to suceed in life u have to go through some difficulty. She was going to NY to study law which had been her drem since child hood.

"So mom when is dad returning from his trip in new Zealand? He was supposed to come back 2 days ago rite"? questioned kripa " Yes beta but some work has come up so he wont be able to make I till the end of September to bad u will have to leave without meeting him" said in a low voice. "im really gonna miss dad and mum plzz send over all the chocolates he brings 4 me ok"? kripa said cheerfully "yes don't worry" gayarti was interrupted by a phone ring on kripa's mobile her phone stated it was pritvi kripa's fianc they had dated for two years when finally he decided to propose to her. Pritvi was a OK kind of guy at times sweet and cool but when he has his mood swings he could turn aggressive..but all this didn't matter to kripa because what mattered to kripa was that she loved him.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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souds great jaan
hope to raed more soon
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nice part post the next part soon
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sounds coool.........continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part
sounds really intresting
hope kripa meets angad in NY
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks alot guys 😃
im glad u all liked it 😊
i will continue soon and kripa does meet a suprise in new york but it doesnt have to be angad 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 part.
cont soon
i hope angad & kripa meet in NY
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: tangina r

thanks alot guys 😃
im glad u all liked it 😊
i will continue soon and kripa does meet a suprise in new york but it doesnt have to be angad 😉



gr8 job.. u no it doesnt have to be angad but im sure it iss.. lolzz..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heres the next part hope u guys like it😛

Kripa gave a sweet smile "Mom I'll just be back" she took her phone and made her way towards her balcony. "Hey pritvi whats up"? asked kripa on the phone. "Naa nothing much I just wanted to remind u that were meeting today remember"? kripa gave a huge smile "missing me already"? questioned kripa. "kind off hey so have ur tickets arrived coz ur leaving on Sunday rite"? asked pritvi "yep! I donno how I'll be able to live with out u guys im gonna miss u soo much pritvi" said kripa with now water in her eyes "hey krips got to go now I have a meeting ok?..take care bye" before kripa could reply he cut the line… kripa sighed

That evening kripa was getting dressed for her date she put on a Pink kurta, nice blue jeans a over large belt which mishty had got for her from her trip in goa when she had gone to India 2 months back that was kripas style simple yet sweet .kripa heard a horn from the window in her room she didn't have to think much to figure out it was pritvi "Mom im going"! kripa screamed as she went running down the stairs. "Take care beta and be back by 11.30 ok"? said gayatri in the normal way moms would say when there daughter is going out on a date. "yes mom" kripa said as she closed the front door and made her way towards the new jeep pritvi had brought.

Kripa put her head through the window of his car "hey nice car pritvi" praised kripa it wasn't her type of car the red sports car in front of kripas house said it all she preferred nice and cool cars where as pritvi liked jeeps. "wanna get in"? said pritvi waiting for her to get inside the car. kripa sat next to him he gave a kiss on kripas forehead "so where are we going"? kripa demanded to know " well how about the movies"? pritvi asked he had already made plans to watch a boring guys movie he didn't care if kripa like it or not. "oh no"!!! kripa screamed inside her mind "not those boring football movies again" she screamed under her breath. At that point of time she just wanted to kick pritvi he knew how much she hated those movies but still he would wanna watch them with her. "did u say anything krips"? pritvi asked as he made his way towards the cinema "ermm…. no nothing but..pritvi I was wondering can we not go anywhere else?..I mean u know walk on the beach or.." kripa was interrupted by pritvi "krips pleazeeeeee I dont have time to waste just so that I could walk on sand" said pritvi "yeah I forgot ur feat are to precious to step on sand rite" a annoyed kripa said. " I don't understand whats ur problem kripa" screamed pritvi "you..you just …you can never look at the bright side of me the only thing u can see are my bad qualities" screamed pritvi . "Pritvi your such a…urgh…I…" kripa couldn't finish her sentence as she was interrupted by pritvi again " go on say it why don't u?..huh angad is better then me that's what u want to say rite?..angad.." kripa interrupted him " I don't know why you always bring him in between us!…everyday you…just forget it im leaving"! screamed kripa she felt like giving him a few kicks kripa walked home. She had dated angad about 3 yrs ago if she thought about it now she would think of it as such a big mistake..3yrs ago he had long hair, was skinney as ever and would eat like a donkey..but he was caring that was the quality that kripa like of his he was much more caring then pritvi .

Edited by tangina r - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww

awesome part!!!! 👏 👏

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