Arhi FF - Pocket Change - Chapter 13- 26 January - Page 40

Originally posted by: the_breeze

There you go again! Being absolutely awesome with words! if you ever do write some thing (OS/Drabble/SS/FF) anything at all, PLEASE do let me know! 👏

Originally posted by: the_breeze

You know what, after writing a 742 word comment on your OS: Blood Ties. I'm gonna wrap up this one with a short one. 😛

Let me begin by reiterating that I absolutely LOVE Lavanya in your FF!!! Oh please do give us more of her snarly shirts! I love good word play and puns and am always on the lookout for new ones! 😎

For this "Lavanya watched him helplessly. She knew then that her harsh words to Khushi were completely vindicated. It was as though Arnav was...eroding, liveliness seeping out of him, an edge to his shadow, weariness in his bones. No selfish, convoluted reason could justify the turmoil her friend was going through for three years." just 👏 👏 👏

Arnav's reaction and the subsequent chaos on the killing of Rehan was well described. I can totally imagine the fans of the series strangling him for revealing something that huge. 😆

Sigh, whenever Arnav & Khushi are in the same frame, it makes me wanna just tie them together and force Khushi to blurt out her reasons for leaving him like that. Khushi's jealousy was so palpable but the line that stole my heart all over again was "It's always been you Khushi. Then and now."

Why is the woman hell bent on hurting herself and others?? Can I just shake her till she spits out whatever the earth shattering reason there is to have put so many people through so much pain???? 😡

Coming to Blood Ties, as Petrichorlove said you took out all your bhadaas on Khushi from PC on the Khushi in the OS. Truer words haven't been spoken 😉. And just to remind you, I challenge you to write a happy story, no matter when, but you owe it to us. A light hearted rom-com is what I ask, it may be an OS/drabble/SS or even an FF. But I demand it. 😈

Originally posted by: Petrichorlove

I read and internalize every comment of yours too. Replicates the crazy whirlwind of emotions thrown at me every time Niya writes. And the ease with with she does it...ah the envy.

Originally posted by: ..FallAndFly..

I think she has Huntington's disease...Ppl suffering from this Disease lose control of their Body,Brain and Their Memory Fades...Maybe thats why she's writing stories about them before she actually forgets it all 😭

Originally posted by: Vibranthues

Aditi and Alisha, thank you so much. (x123456789) Really. I'm actually out of words and exhausted.

Aditi, about your challenge. I'm sort of a lover of pain, I like putting and seeing characters put through hell and back. Like Alisha said, the happily ever after is so much shinierr.

Maybe I should try, give me some time :) Once again, thank you for your kind words.

Originally posted by: the_breeze

Dear Niya, please do take your time and I don't want to really force you to do something ok? I hope you didn't mind me demanding that light hearted story.

Oh you are a lover of pain?? Then I hope you have read Lyraa99's works. She, in my humble opinion, is the Queen of Angst/Pain/Emotional trauma. I am still in awe of her

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Niya, when do we get the next update?

I thought we'll get a V day treat.

But no such luck.

And I join hands with the readers before me in asking for a fun story.

Please!