Arhi FF - Pocket Change - Chapter 13- 26 January - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
You know, on some strange, skewed level, I understand and empathise with Arnav's completely irrational action of barging into Khushi's book signing and disrupting it. The loss of control he feels around her, he has never been in charge of their journey.
She approached him first as a 9 year old.
She broke through his emotional wall as a child.
She wanted the marriage.
She abandoned them.
She divorced him.
She drunk called him.
She came back.
She made the decision to be friends.

He had no choice but to reciprocate. He always eagerly took everything she threw his way. And it's not fair. He's not a dog. I believe his little attempt at regaining his place in her life, even as a book character is an attempt to get back the control.

Khushi better realize his worth before she loses him forever. Their love seems surreal.

He'd always loved the way her hands moved, whether they were playing the guitar, smoothing over his skin, or simply signing a book.

I loved this line. I love how you make their emotional connection so strong, only hinting at the physical intimacy. Tragically beautiful. I wonder if the pain of the present mars the wonderful memories...how can you look at a face who was once your everything and now...nothing.
Reminds me of this six word story -

"Wrong number," says a familiar voice.



Edited by .Pegasus. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry sorry sorry for not commenting. I was so busy the whole of Dec and early Jan, that this just slipped out of my mind :(
I sat down today (!!!) to read the 4 chapters I missed.

Chapter 10: Khushi talks about Arnav and memories going farther and farther away. Am I thinking too much when I say that I feel she has something like a brain tumor, or Alzheimer's...? And NK is a doctor plus that conversation between Payal-Akash, talking about Khushi going there for some kind of sessions. That does, sort of, cement my assumptions.

Chapter 11: La is such a good friend; hidden in the mockery in her voice, you can clearly understand how much she understands (and loves?) Arnav. And is willing to do anything for him. Atleast Arnav has got the idea of getting NK's background checked. He'll find something for sure. I loved the conversation he had with Manorama. And his nervous conversation with Khushi's voicemail 😛

Chapter 12: Beautifully written chapter. A chapter harsh on Khushi. But she needs to be pushed. It's understandable that each word of La's (especially) must be piercing her, but they need to be said. She has been taking steps to ease her conscience, which is not helping Arnav in any way. He's still very hurt in trying to put he pieces of puzzle together, And what Payal said was true. Khushi's underestimating their love. She's not trusting their love which is their saviour.

Chapter 13: Arnav's quick and hasty analysis of the 'ending' was just that - hasty. But I don't blame him and put it off as a rash action. He's right when he says that he can't let Khushi inconvenience him this way. Leaving and entering his life whenever she wants, however she likes. That's not done. She should repair things before she loses Arnav completely.


Loved all the chapters! Looking forward to the next one :) x

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Posted: 10 years ago
Khushi was certainly afraid that arnav had come to know about her disease, wasn't she?
How painful if would've been for arnav to know that khushi remembers most of the things about him and yet says that she isn't in 'love' with him?! Oh god khushi, I don't know how many more blows from him will it take you to tell him the truth. Please girl, do it before its too late.

My comment doesn't makes sense? I am sorry. Just too many things up at this moment!

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Posted: 10 years ago

My feelings are so reflected in this quote from the update...

"She was a victim of her own self-loathing atomic bomb and Arnav was the shadow and silence etched, the neural pathways trafficking the heroin of agony, day after day of pain until there was nearly nothing left."


You convey such a great love between this couple in the past and on Arnav's side, such pain and agony that in simplistic terms I am beginning to dislike Khushi intensely as a person and I really really am only staying with the story to see what is her excuse for killing him in this slow tortured manner.
Her having some horrendous disease etc is not going to sway me...but then again, I am a very emotional being and I will wait to be surprised.
Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey this story is really awesome nd more importantly different. I didn't stop to think for evn a minute abt wat cud b the reasons tht forced khushi to leave him.
I wonder why she thinks Arnav wid hv left her. For some reason..one of the many guesses tht I made to myself..brought me to think...she's suffering frm a grave diseease. Mayb..evn ALZHEIMER -_-
U knw...why else wid she talk abt memories slipping off everyday. And I refuse to believe that the memories of a love as strong as thiers..can let her forget even those minute details such as colour of cap. But I also knw my guess here could b totally out of context. Hihi.
However..u shyd knw u r a born writer dear. The smoothness wid wch we keep floating on ur words is superb.
Loving the story very much. Wid love to read more :)
Thanx.
Meg
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Posted: 10 years ago
AAHHH
This is amazing!!
I absolutely love your writing style!
It's so obvious they're still in love. They're so cute together!
I really want Khushi to tell him the truth
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is such a unique and refreshing story. I'm so glad I've started reading this. But why is khushi basing her character and story on arnav and herself? I think the general consensus here is that she is losing her memory, due to some disease, and this is the only means for her to hold on to them.
Yet killing off Rehan shows her need for closure?? Possibly??

Looking forward to how story progresses! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
read all the parts in one go
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago



Devastatingly beautiful...and you say this is your first story on the forum...truly hard to believe. Let me first say congratulations for crafting a plot that puts the readers' sympathies squarely with Arnav. A romance-fiction reading, desperately in love, yearning Arnav is just so irresistible.And why is Khushi so cold to him?whatever on earth made her take the decision to break their lives up like that? Such a marvelous story. Please update soon.

Best,
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Posted: 10 years ago


So beautiful...so devastating...will you please hurry up and update and break the suspense already?!

Best

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