SATON JANAM TRE SANG..!!! (an AR ss) part 2 updated 16/6/2015 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

osome part diks... luved it totally...
the best was armaan never go in her house intill she is sleep and just to put medicien on her forehead and after that didn't stay for sec too...



thank u soo much aayyuuu.. !!! 😳 😊

I just tried to show pure selfles love..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: sybarite1989

wow...this story is so good...so different. ...
really loved the first part...
AR scenes were awesome...
cont super soon...



Thank you sooo much dear...!!! 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: palakajenian

nice nd interesting start 😊
but at the same time sad too. poor ridhima she suffered lot nd armaan hw tried so much to save her but. at the end both died sad really sad
this so much emotional.
awsome work diks. it is wonderful. after reading it i know u work hard on this. gud job. i just loved it




thank u soo much bunny...!!! 😊 😳 😳
Sad toh hoga hi na... 7 births jo dikhane hai...!! 😛

Yuppp.. Bahut mehnat lgi boss...!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: megha_kajen




superb part dikss...mujhe ni pata tha...tujhe itni hindi aati hai... ;)
*loved it whole yaar...it was awsume...
plzzz next jaldi upd8 kario...
its too good yaar
fabulous :D



thank u sooo much meghsss.. !!
Abhi apme humare sabhi talent dekhi hi kahan hai... Lol 😆 😆

ill update in new year now ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
The concept was quite amazing...
From the start to end i was just thinking wht gonna happened next...
But can't make it right any of my guesses
well now coes to the part...
Starting me riddhima crying dekhke i thought its coz of armaan
Then u disclose the reason & name to i was shocked
Phir i like this MIL of riddhima
She cares a lot for her
Even when she send her out of house tab bhi i have a feeling that there is something else...
Coz she was the oly one supporting her till now...
then baad me jab pata chala to i ws like chalo kuch to meri guesses se match ho gayi...
Then armaan's entry...
I was like awww...
He is so caring... i mean he kind of hiding himself do care for riddhima
how i hope riddhima would take that medi tooo
phir armaan bhi...
Thats so hear touching...
is it their 7 lifes in 7 part...??????????
Then plz kisi janam me to dono ko ek karwa dena...
Continue soon
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Lovely part but both ar r dead this part is so so emotional
Thenx for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Hey really liked you oart pleaseee upsade soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
i know i am very late...loads of apologies...my studies kept me busy.!!
About the first part,...then it is way too awsumm...
awww riddhima died..!! i really wanted to see them together..!!
Will be waiting to see them as one in their next life..!!
Lovely..!! Continue soon,,!!
Thanx for pm..!! Plz continuing pm me for all ur updates..!!
may be late but i will comment for sure...!!
take care..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART ~ 2 SATON JANAM TRE SANG..!!!


2014..!!
Present

A girl around in mid 20's is siting in her room...
n talking to someone on call..

Other side. : kl subha 7 bje ready rehna... Its a surprise...

girl : neal pr vahan kyu jna hai btao toh..

Neal : are baba.. Kidnap nahi kr raha hn tumhe.. Its a surprise priti... Gud nite baby love u..

N he cuts the cal

Preti : hate u monster..!!

another girl in late 20's enters the room...!!!

other girl : aj dubara ldai hui kya tum dono ki..!!

Preti : nahi simi di.. Vo idiot mujhe kuch btata hi nahi hai.. Bs order dedia be ready by 7 jna hai kahin.. Or toh or usne mom dad se permision le bhi li.. Had hai yaar mere mom dad se mujh se bina puch baat kaise krsakta hai vo..

Simi : chill yaar.. U both are engaged.. ye bta jna kahan hai..

Preti : pta nahi koi jagah hai some panver palace ka garden..!!! itna kam pda hua hai or ise ghumne ki pdi hai.. Usko itni akal nahi hai.. Aj hi shadi ki date fix hue 1 wk bad hai shadi itna kam pda hai.. Main apni family ke sath time spend na krun..

N makes a sad face..

Priti : di ap kyu itna khush ho rahe ho...

Simi : tre jij ko na neal se sikhna chahie... He loves u sooo much...

Simi gives her lil sis a hug..

Simi : chal ab soja.. Subha jldi uthna hai.. N its a long jurney... Gud nite...

Simi leaves towards her rim..

Priti : ab di ko kya hogya... Chado.. Ill also sleap..

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Next morning..

a boy in mid 20's come out of his black audi.. n rings the bell..
an elderly man (mr aluwali - father of priti n simi) opens the door..
boy bends down to touch that man's feet..

boy : gud morning dad..

mr aluwali : gud morning neal..

an elderly lady (mrs aluwali ) comes from kitchen cleaning her hands with a towel...

mrs aluwali : aap bhi na ghar ke damad ko aise darwaze pr kon khada rekta hai.. aoo beta neal..

neal moves towars his mother in law.. n bends down to touch her feet..

neal : gud morning mom..

mrs aluwali : good morning beta..

mr aluwali : ready to go all set..

Neal : yes dad..

After 5 mins preti cums n both leaves...

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Preti is still angry on him n ignores neal the entire jurney pretending to be asleep

After the journey og 2&1/2 hr They reached their destiny..
Neal parks the car.. N comes out of the car..
Preti does nt even move an inch n she sits folding her arms to her chest...

Neal walks to the pasnger side n after opening the door he forwards his hand..
Preti gets of car without holding his hand..

Preti : yahim khada rakhna hai ab sara din..

Neal : nahi nahi.. Chalooo

Neal leads her to the centre of garden..

Neal bends down on his one knee forwards his hands towards her..

Priti : neal ye kya kr rahe ho.. Get upp..

Neal : listem to me once plz..
Ms preti aluwali.. I really love u alot i promise u to love u n to be ur side till my last breath.. I know its late to propose for mariage coz date is already fixed.. Bt still ms aluwalia will do the honours to be my life partnerr in all phases of live..

Preti : neal ye sab..

Neal : kitni bhulkd ho abhi 2 days pehle complain kr rahi thi i didnt propse u oficialy ab jldi kro my knes are paining..

Preti : ofcource yes stupid...

Neal stand up n takes preti in a tight rib crashing hug..

Neal : love u lots babyy..

Preti : love u too my donkey..

After about 5 mins they come out of the hug..
N sit on a near by bench..

Preti puts her head on neals shoulder n he hugs her with one arm..

Preti : ek baat btao.. Tumne propose hi krna tha toh yahan 200 kms dur kyu laye. Kahin bhi krdete..

Neal was about to ans bt was intrupted by baba ji..

Baba ji : purti lgta hai tumhe is jagah ki ehmiat nahi pta.. Kehte hai jo premi joda yahan aa ke jindi bahar sath nibhane ka vachan le vo sadev sach hota hai.. Koi takat unhe juda nahi kr sakti.. Undono ka ashirvad sadev sabhi jodon pr rehta hai..

Preti : kina aahirvad baba ji..

Babaji : bahut purani kahani hai tha ek premi joda jo is smaj ki rudi wadi prathaon ke bali chad gya..

Many other couples have now gather around baba ji..

Preti : baba ji plz hume btaiye na.. Kya hua tha...

All other : plz baba ji..

Baba : aao bachon aj main tumhe btata hn.. San 1880 ki baat hai..
panver ye gujrat ka ek kafi jna mana gao tha.. vahan ke sarpanch khandani rahees the.. kafi sadio se unka parevar yahi bsa hua tha.. ye alishan kila bn vane wale is khandan ki akhri pidi thi.. us ke bad vo log kahan gye kisi ko nahi pta.. bahut charche hai panveer ke itihas main is khandan ke shurviron ke.. pidi dar pidi unka rutba or haisiat bdhti rahi.. or isi ke sath unka ehankar.. pr vo sab do pyar krne walon ke age choor choor hogya.. bahut koshish ki logon ne unhone jida krne ki.. pr kehte hai jb bhagwan ka ashirwad ho toh kudrat bhi unhe juda na kr sakti..


** flashback

A boy around 6 runing behind a girl of almost same age..

Armaan : ridhu ruk ja na.. Bhag mt.. Mai thak gya...

Ridhima stops runing..

Ridhima : kya armaan tu bhi hamesha ldkion jaise thak jta hai..

Armaan : main ldkion jaise thakta nahi hn.. Tu ldkon jaise bhagti hai..

Ridhima holds armaan's hand

Ridjima : chal ab mera hath pakad tujhe ghar tk chod dun nahi toh dai ma se dnt pd jayegi unke ladle ko drd hua..

Armaan's legs' muscles were weak.. He could not run like normal kids.. Nt even like kids younger to him..

AR reached hand in hand to armaan's house..

Dai maa -- armaan's granny..Dai maa took care of ridhima's dad after his birth.. N wen ridhima's mom was expecting she was given charge as caretaker of new born..

Dai maa : agye dono..

ridhima : ji dai maa le ayi main apke ladle koi waqt pr.. main haveli chalti hn ap jldi ana..

Saying this ridhima ran towards her home..

dai maa : armaan chal ja beta hath muh dho le tujhe khana de kr mujhe haveli bhi jna hai..

Dai maa took armaan inside their small house..

armaan n ridhima very best frnds.. ridhima always stood for armaan wen ever anyone made fun of him coz of his ilness... She fought with her frnds n even her cousins for armaan.. Ridhima was armaan's one n only frnd.. N for ridhima also only armaan was her frnd.. As no other child of thier vilage was left whom ridhima did nt fight..!!

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Time pased now they were 18 years old..

Dai maa : ridhima beti jldi se dudh pio or main tumhe sulake ghar jati hn

Ridhima : dai maa yahi sojayena na mere pas aj

Dai maa : nahi beti aj nahi...

Ridhima : kyu dai maa.. Pkaa main raat ko hilungi nahi... Bilkul cone main soungi.. Pka vada..!!

Dai maa : betiya mujhe tre hilne se biklul taklef nahi hoti vo kya kl pure 4 sal armaan vapis araha hai.. Toh kl subha jldi uthkr.. Ghar thik krna hai.. Uska kmra saf krna hai or usle lie khana bnake fir aungi na apni bitiya ko jagane...

(armaam's parents worked in a city near thier vilage.. Armaan had gone to city to learn some busines skils so that he could open his small busines in vilage with all the savings by armaan's parents n granny as armaan could not do farming like other villagers )

Ridhima : kya kl armaan vapis araha hai... Apne pehle kyi nahi btaya.. Chalie ja ie app..

Dai maa : pr beta pehle tum sojao main fir chali jaungai.

Ridhima : are dai maa.. Ye lo main dudh pila..(she drank the gls of milk.. N hoped in her bed n took the quilt over her head..) main soo bhi gyi ab ap jaiee..!!

Dai maa : acha baba ja rahi hn..

Ridhima was on top of world finally her best frnd was cuming back after 4 yrs.. Finally she will meet him after soo long.. His monthly leters to dai ma were only source by which she came to know about his ware abouts.. N in leter armaan just asked how dai ma was.. N others.. Wat was he doing.. N.about his training.. N every time ridhima read n wrote rplies to armaan's leter.. Dai maa n ridhima waited for entire month for armaan's leter..

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Next morning..
ridhima got up early without making any fuss... got ready n had her breakfast without dai maa.. as armaan was arriving early in the morning so dai maa could nt come to wake her up n hadke ridhima's tantrums...

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Armaan n ridhina were siting under the same tree where they had spend most of thier times n childhood...
There was a akward silince between then they had a lot to share bt both didnt knew from where to begin..!!

Finally after 15 mins of silince both decided to break the silence..

Both together : kaise ho..?? Kya kia itni sal..??

N both stareted to laugh their lungs out..

Armaan : acha chalo tum pehle bolo..

Ridhima : main kya bolon.. Tum hi btao kuch..

Armaan : pta hai ridhima in char salon main maine tumne or dadi ko bahut yaad kia...

Ridhima : maine bhi armaan.. Mujhe kisi ko dntne ka moka hi mahi milta tha..!! :-P
Or na kisi se ldai ki..

Armaan : bach gya pura gao tre atyachar se...

Ridhima : ek toh main.tumhare kie sabko dnti thi.. Or tum unki sab ki vkalat kr rahe ho...

Armaan : ridhima tum naraz mt ho.. agar tum naraz hogi main baat kise krumga..
(to himself..: mujhe pta hai tum kaise mnogi..)

Armaan stood up n moved towards ridhima's feet..
Armaan takes out a packet from his pocket which had smal yet beautiful payal..
Armaan tied those payal on ridimas ankles...

Ridhima : armaan ye..??

Armaan : apni pehli kamai se sab ke lie tofe lie the.. Toh hmahare lie kyu na leta kuch... Psnd aya..??

Ridhima: bahut... Ye ajtk ka mera sabse khas tofa hai...

Armaan : tum btao itne sal kya kia.. Kuch kam bhi kia ya sirf meri dadi ko staya..

Ridhima : vo sirf tumhari dadi nahi meri dai maa bhi hai.. Or main inhe stati nahi hn..

Armaan : pta hai pta hai...

Armaan ridhima sat under the tree till evening n talked about every thing about wat they have done in those 4 yrs.. It was eveing time.. Bt still they had a lot more to share...

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Days pased.. Now most of the time both spent siting under the tree n talking anything n everyting..!!

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Ridhima's house..
ridhima,s father kishor goswami, sarpanch of village n the most richest man in village.. he is landlord by profession. Was siting on sofa n dai maa standing infront of him..

kishor : dai maa tayarian kijie.. Agle hfte hmari gudia ko ldke wale dekhne arahe hai..

Dai maa : sach kishor.. Aise tayari krungi ldke wakon ko ek moka nahi milega shikayat krne ka..

kishor : main jnta hn dai maa apne mere gudia ka dhyan bahut achese rakha hai...

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4 days pased with blink of an eye everyone was bsy in preparation.. Bt two souls were lost in their own thoughts...

**Armaan**
Aj mujhe dai maa ne btaya ridhima ko dekhne ldke wale arahe hai.. Bahut ameer khamdan hai.. Kafi nam hai unka.. Ridhima raj kregi.. Pr main kaise rahunga yahan akela tumhare bina.. Bachpan se sirf tum hi ho jis ke sath main baat krta hn.. 4 sal shehar maim kaise biaye hai tmhare bina maine.. Main hi jnta hn.. Har din bs din ginta tha kb main vapis a sakun tumhare pas..
Nahi jee paunga tunhare bina main...!!

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Ridhima,s room..

Ridhima : dai maa Pitaji aisa kaise kr sakte hai meri shadi buna mujhe btaye.. Main is gao ko chod kr nahi j sakti...

Dai ma : betiya har ldki ko ek din apne babul ka ghar chodkr jna jota hai... Or tumhara sasural bahut acha hai.. Kafi amer log hai.. Bahut achese rahogi tum vahan..

Ridhima : pr ap nahi hoge vahan..??

Dai maa : pr bitia ab kya sasural is budhia ko leke jayegi.. Ab tumhari shadi ke bad main armaan ke lie ek ldki dekhlun.. Usle bad or is jewan or kuch nahi chahie..

Ridhima : dai maa ap aise kyu bolte hoo..?? Ap jao mujhe apse baat nahi krni.. Shub ratri..!!

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Later at nite.. Ridhima was siting on her bed n lost in her thoughts...

Ridhima : main yahan se chali jaungi or armaan ki bhi shadi kisi or see.. Nahi ye nahi hosakta armaan ki jindagi main koi or..!!

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ridhima's mother kalyani kishor goswami.. she was a ideal housewife, a mother, bahu and wife of sarpanch..

kalyani : ridhima..

Ridhima : ji maa

kalyani : tayar hogyi..??

Ridhima : kyu maa

kalyani : ldke wale jo kl ane wale the vo aj hi arahe hai..

Ridhima : kya..??
(thinking ye jldi kyu arahe hai.. Main kaise baat krun piyaji se )

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The guest had arived bt ridhima instead of coming in front of them.. Ran from her house..

Whole day everyone was bsy finding ridhima bt no one was able to find her..!!

In the evening wen armaan came home he got woried listening to ridhima's dis appear..!!

dai maa : armaan beta ab tum hi kuch kro sabhi kabse koshish kr rahe hai ridhima betia kp khojne ki..

armaan goes towards kishor goswami.

armman : baba sa ap chinta na kre main jld se jld ridhima ko khojke launga..

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Armman searches for ridhima at every possible place where they both used go n play in childhood wenever ridhima fought with village kids... bt he was nt able to find ridhima..

armaan : kaha ho tum ridhima.. jldi haveli lout aao.. sab tumhara itejar kr rahe hai.. bhagwan ji kahan khojun main ridhima ko...

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armaan moved from one corner to the other of the village.. he was physically exhausted.. bt still kept on moving in search of ridhima.. n finally he found her in a small cottage on top of a hill.. this was their fav place bt they rarely came here coz of armaan's wk muscles.. n arman had almost forgotten about this place..

Armaan : ridhima tum yahan kya kr rahi ho.. Sab tumhe subha se dhund rahe hai...

R : tumhe yaad hai armaan hm yahan kai bar aya krte the bachpan main.. pr fir hmne chod dia kunki tumse jda unchain pr chada nahi jta tha..pr pichle 4 salon main jb tum yahan nahi the.. main aksar aya krti thi yahan.. waqt bitane...

a : ridhima ye kya bol rahi hoo.. chalo haveli chalo..

Ridhima : mujhe haveli nahi jna..

Armaan : kya hua ridhima.. Tumhe pta hai baba sa kitna pareshan hai.. Ldke wale aye hai.. Chalo haveli vapis..

Ridhima : main nahi jaungi.. Nahi krungi kisi or se vivah..

Armaan : ridhima yr kya bachpana hai..

Ridhima : tumhe dukh nahi higa jb main kisi or se sath chali jaungi..

Armaan : ridhima tu ye..

Ridhima : main or nahi reh paungi tumhare bina armaan.. Mujhe ghar leke nt chalo.. Vo mujhe kisi or ke sath bhej demge..

Armaan was now confused wat should he say.. He loved ridhima alot.. More than his life bt he wanted her to live a happy life.. N just like her family he wanted to get married to some one who could take care of all the needs n demands.. Armaan's family status was just opposite to that of ridhima's..

Armaan : ridhima meri baat mno.. Tum is rishte main bahut khush rahogi...

Ridhima : armaan tum ab tk mujhe nahi jan paye.. Meri sachi kushi tumhare sath hai...

Armaan in his mind(main jnta hn ridhima pr main vo sukh suvitaye tumhe nahi de paunga..)

Armaan : ridhima ye sab khene ki baaten hai.. Asl jindagi baton se nahi chalti.. Chalo ghar sab tumhari rah dekh rahe hai..

Ridhima : main nahi jaungi.. Us ghar main vapis..

Ridhima started to move in oposite direction..

Armaan : ridhima kahan ja rahi ho..

Ridhima : jahan bhi jaun tumhe kya..

Armaan : ridhima haveli chalo.. Maine baba sa ko kehkr aya tha tumhe le kr launtunga jld se jld..

Ridhima : Jake kehdena apne baba sa se.. Mar gyi ridhima..

This line crosed all boreders.. Armaam's anger reached hights..

Armaan : ye kya bkwas lga rakhi hai..

Ridhima : tumhe kya frk pdta hau.. Ye vivah krke us narak main jene se toh acha hai main mr jaun... armaan jne do mujhe..

Armaan : ridhima ruko..

Ridhima : armaan hath chodo mera.. Tumhe toh frk pdta nahi.. Toh main jahan bhi jaun..

Armaan : frk pdta hai ridhima..

Ridhima : toh kyu chate ho main ye vivah krun.. Nahi je paumgi tumhare bina..

Armaan : mere lie bhi asan nahi hai ridhima.. Bachpan se dadi ke bad agar koi mere dil ke kreb hai vo tim ho...

Ridhima : toh kyu bjej rahe ho mujhe atmaan...

Armaan : kunki main tumhari khushi chata hn..

Ridhima : mere khuahi tumhare sath.. Kyu nahi smjhte tum...

Saying this ridhima huged armaan.. Armaan to wraped his arms around her waist.. Both stayed in the same position for god knows how long...

Bt a suden pul brought them back to the world..

kishor : tumhari himat kaise hmare ghar ki beti ko chune ki..

Ridhima : pita ji ismajn armaan ki koi glti nahi hai.. Main armaan se prem krti hn..

kishor : ye kya bkwqs kr rahi ho tum.. Jntj bhi ho kon hai ye.. Ek nokar hmare tukdon pr palne wala.. Or tum is jile ke sapanch ke ekloti beti..

Ridhima : pyaar paisa nahi dekhta..

Mahesh (ridhima's elder brother) : bhaut hue tumhari bkwas.. Ye tareka hai pita ji se baat krne ka.. Is ldke ke sath tum tamez bhi bhul gui..

mahesh ordered his men to hit armaan.. Armaan was injured badly.. He was nt able to stand on his feet..

Ridhima ran towards armaan..

Ridhima : pita ji chod do armaan ko.. Bhagwan ke lie chod do..

kishor : le jao ise yahan se..

N pushed ridhima towards ramesh ( ridhima's elder brother)

Dai maa : (sat on her knees n folded her hands n begged )chod do mere pote ko main vada krtnd i hn.. Ye kabhi ridhima betia se nahi milega..

kishor : aj agar main ise chod raha hn toh sirf islie ki main apki bahut izat krta hn..dai maa Ap mere lie maa sman hai.. Smjha dijiega aone ladle poti ko dur rahe vo meri beti se..

Ridhima : pita ji main apse vada krti hm main nahi milingi armaan se pr ap use or mt maro.. Vo chal nahi payr ga...

kishor : chalo yaha se..

He puled ridhima towards their house n locked her in the rum..

kishor : ab tum apne shadi ke din hi yahan se bahar niklogi..

Ridhima : agar main kisi se shadi krungi toh sirf armaan se nahi toh kisi se bhi nahi..

kishor : batamezzz ldki... Do din yahan bnd rakhegi apne ap alak titkhane ajayegi..

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Few days passed.. Still no body was ready to accept marriage proposal send by ridhima' family...

if some one accepted the proposal something or the other bad hapened in that family..

Ridhima was still locked in the room.. She was nt alowed to meet any one.. She was just alowed to go out to get fresh.. That too with a stict secutity.. She was given food twise a day n the same room only..!!

Armaan's condition.was worst.. Now he was nt able to take a step without using walking stick..

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Ridhima's houseliving rum..

kishor : is ldki ne toh khandan ka name badnam krdia hai.. 2 pushton bad ldki ne jnm lia.. sabh kush the.. isko itna bda islie nahi kia ki humara mane badnam kre..

mahesh : aise ise sari umar kuvara toh nahi betha sakte..

ramesh : na jane kaisi kismat leke paida hue hai.. log toh ise shapit kehne lge hai..

kishor : vo bhi sirf us mamuli ldke ki vja se..

mahesh : kehti hai use bina kisi se shadi nahi krungi.. bhagwan ne hume ek kia hai..

kishor : agar vo ldka hi na rahe toh..??

ramesh : ap ekdm sahi kehrahe ho papa ji.. vo ldka hi nahi rahega toh ridhima ki shadi kisi or se ho payegi..

all three of them smike evily..n makes plan to kill armaan..

bt their eveil plan was heard by some one standing behind the curtains...

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Late at nite...
kalyani unbolts ridhima's rum..

Ridhima : maaa...

N hugs her mother..

kalyani : ro mt meri bachi.. Main jnti hn agar tre jiwan main kisi ka sath hai toh vo sirf armaan ka hai... Ja meri bachi.. Chali ja apne armaan ke pas.. Or tum dono.yahan se bahut dur chalen jana.. Jahan koi bhi paise-jati ke name pr kisi ki khushi na chine..

Ridhima : pr maa.. Kaise.. Maine toh vachan dia hai papa ji ko..

kalyani : jb vo tujhe dia hua vacham tod sakte hai toh tu ku nahi... Ja meri bachiii

Ridhima : kaise.. Agar papa ji ya bhai ne dekhlia toh vo armaan ko..

kalyani : uski chinta mt kr.. Maine sab intzam krdia hai.. Armaan tre intazar kr raha hoga.. Subha hone tk main tre baba sa or bhahio ko rok ke rakhungi...
Ja beti chali ja.. Nikl ja is kaid se..

Ridhima had tears in her eyes n huged her mom even tighter..

kalyani: ye le lep or parshad.. Armaab ko khiladena or kudh bhi khalena ise khake tumhe takat milegi yahan bahut jane ki.. Or hann ismain khana hai.. Tune kl se kuch nahi khaya.. Or armaan ne bhi kahan khaya hoga kuch...( n gave her a packet..)

Ridhima jumped out of window n ran rowards her armaan..!!!

kalyani : he mata rani mujhe maf krna.. Maine jo bhi kia hai apni beti ko har dukh taklef se mukti dilvane ke lie kia hai.. Armaan bahut buri tarah se zakhmi hai.. Vo kahi jana toh dur thik se chal bhi nahi payega.. In sab ne toh use marme ki than li thi.. Armaan ko tadapte hue marta dekh ridhima bardash nahi krpati.. Or na hi main apne bachon ko aise tadapne de sakti thi...!!!

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Ridhima reaches the same spot where armaan n ridhima used meet each other.. Ridhima heart cried seing armaan's condition.. His condition was worst.. So many wounds on his body... Without waiting a single sec.. Ridhima rused towards armaan n hugges him as tidghtly she could..

Ridhima : armaan...

Armaan : ridhima...

N both cried in each others armaan...

Armaan : ridhima plz rona bnd kro tumhe pta hai main tumhe aisa nahi delh sakta..
Cuming out of hug.. Armaan remove tears that were flowing down from her eyes..
Ridhima took out the ointment her mother gave n aplied on every his every wound.. N blew air on his wounds to sothen the pain..!!

Ridhima : armaan tum bahut bure ho...apna bilkul khayal nahi rakhte...

Armaan : tum jaise bahut achi ho.. Shakal dekhi hai aoni.. Bhut lg rahi ho..

Ridhima : armaan tum.. !!

N points finger towards him..
Armaan holds her from her waist n puls her towards himself adjusting his face on her shoulder..
Both sat in the same position for some time... Ridhima comes out the hug..
Ridhima takes out the food given by her mother..

Armaan : kitni achi khusbo arhi hai...

Ridhima :ma ne dia hai... Tumhari mnpsnd sabji or kher bhi...

Both fed each other n enjoyed the taste of food n their love...

Ridhima opens up bowl of kheer..

ridhima : iski mehak aj thodi alag nahi hai...
Jarur maa ne koi jadi butian milayi hongi... Vo keh rahi thi ise kha kr hmne tatak milegi yahan se dur jne ki...

Ridhima feeds armaan
Armaaan felt something wrong wrong.. was about to eat arman stoped her..

Armaan : ridhima nahi.. Tum mt khana...

He started coughing badly... N a white liquid started flowing from his mouth...

Her mothers words statred rining in her mind again.. N she understood wat her mother meant... Y her mother was hesitaing giving her food.. Coz she has intentionally aded poisin in the food...

Ridhima : nahi armaan aj main tumhari baat nahi sungi...

N she eat khere...

Ridhima : shayad is jmn main bhi humara bichadna hi likha tha..

Armaan : mgr is bar main tumhe mujhe chod kr jme nahi dunga...

N he holds her hand tightly...

Armaan : ridhima mujhe wada kro tum kabhi mujhe jhod kr nagi jaogi.. Isjm main na sahi agle jmn main tum sirf or sirf mere hogi.

Ridhima : sirf agle jmn nahi ane wale sabhi jnmo main is dunia ke ant tk ridhima sirf armaan ki rahegi...

Both looked at each other with teary eyes n smile at each other...

N died peaceful holding each otjers hands n hoping for a bright future n their next birth..

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End of flashback..

Baba :is jagah ko tab se do pyaar krme walon ka pratek mana jta hai..
Bhagwan tum sab ke jewan main sada...

Priti : baba ji ek baat puch sakti hn..

Baba : haan beti jarur..

Peeti : yahan armaan or ridhima ki kabar pr sabhi ral or safed ful hi ku chadte hai..

Baba : aisa kehte hai ki armaan ka pasandidar rang tha lal or ridhima ka safed.. Unse unka ashirwad lene ke lie unka unka manpasnd ful.. Or mujhe jda toh tumhe pta hoga.. Ral ko pyaar ka pratek or safed ko aman shanti ka... Ye bhi manyata hai ki ye ful chadhane ke bad jevam main sada pyaar or shanti bni rehti hai...

Neal : shukriya baba hume pyaar ke bare main btane ke lie..

Baba : nahi beta mera toh frz hai jo sach hai vo sabko btane ka..

Neal n preti took flowers n went towards ar grave..!!

Neal : ms aluwli will u be mine till the end of eternity. ??

Preti stood there quitly tears runimg down her eyes.

Neal : baby y are u crying...!!

Preti : im sorry..

Neal cups preti'a face in his palms..

Neal : sorry kyu bol rahi..

Preti : tum mujhe itno spl jagah pr laye or maine tumnhe itna sunaya... I love u sooo much..

Neal : i love u tooo... Ab mere q ka jwab bhi do..

Without wasting another second preti sealed her lips with his .



Finally i finised this part... mera ab tk ka longest update.. hope u guys enjoy reading.. n jda bore na hoo...


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