SATON JANAM TRE SANG..!!! (an AR ss) part 2 updated 16/6/2015

Heloo peple.. Im again with another idea..

I dont know ye naturaly hai.. Wen ever i have my examz.. My mind gives me a new idea... I guess my mind needs a big wala sped breaker in order to focus on examz...

I stil remeber posting fought for soul in my collage campus after wring my examz..

Enough of my bak bak..

Here is my new idea..

It will be a ss.. Aprox 7-8 parts only...
As the name suggest "saton janam tre sang".. So it will have 7 births.. But with a little twist in it.. Our hero will have only 3 births.. But our heroine will have 7...!!
N finaly they wil meet in the 7 th life...!!!

If u guys like my idea.. Do let me know so that i can work on it..!!

One thing in advance its festive season+ my examz cuming up.. Life too hectik these days.. Ill be a bit lazy in updating it..!!

-- dik

Interesting but u always have these kind of ideas?

Year 1887

A girl in early 20's wearing a simple salwar suit is siting on fresh grass under the open sky...
Only source of lite is the full moon lite..
Her face is dull.. N her eyes are red n it seems she has cried alot.. Even the tear gland is out of stock..!!

Girl : Sidhant ji apne aisa kyu kr rahe ho mere sath.. 3 sal hoge apka chera dekhe.. Ek bar bhi ap ghar nahi ayi na kiso tej tuahar (festival) par na hi kisi ki bhi salgira ( aneversy) pr.. Bs har bar tofe bhej dete ho.. Har mahine apka khat(leter).. Jismain main thik hn.. Ap sab kaise hai.. Kam bahut hai.. Paise bhijvaraha jaise kuch chan shabad.. Sidhant ji main apki patni hn.. 12 sal ki thi jb main is ghar main ayi thi apki patni bnkr.. Pehle apko pdhai ke lie jna tha.. 3 sal bad jb apki pdhai puri hue.. Sab kitne gush the.. Mujhe lga tha ye teen salon ka intezar kjatam hoga or humari nai zindagi shuru hogi.. Kheton (farms) main apka mn nahi lga or ap chale gye hm sab se dur.. Mujhse dur shihar (town) kam krne.. Shuru main toh tum har mahine ate the.. Pr ab toh 3 sal hogye sidhant ji .. Ajao vapis.. Mere lie apne parivar ke lie.. Humare ane wale kl le lie..

She again started crying n fel aslep on the grass..

**

Next morning..
A lady around in early 40's roming inside a house near by..
Nt roaming finding some one..

Damini : ridhima bahu.. Ridhima bahu.. Are o mena.. Ridhima bahu ko dekha kya kahin.. Subha aj chai lekr bhi nahi ayi..

Mena : nahi maji.. Main dekhti hn..

Damini : ruk zra.. Ye rupa kahan gyi subha subha masa ke uthne ka wqt hogya hai..
Mena : je vo aj savere(early morening) kafi tufan aya.. Rupa angan(lawn) ki safai kr rahi hai...

Damini : acha thik hai ja.. Or ridhima bahu mele toh use mere kmre main bhejna..

Mena : je ma ji..

Some one from out side screams..: maji.. Maji...

Damini : ye rupa kyu chila rahi hai.. Ja mena dekh toh..

Rupa comes runing..

Rupa : maji vo..
Damini : vo vo hi krti rahe gi ya age bhi bole gi..
Rupa : maji vo ridhima bahu..
Damini : kya hua ridhima bahu ko..
Rupa : vo angan main bahar behosh pdi hai or unke kpre bhi buri tarah gile hai or unka sharir tap raha hai..(her body is buring hot)

Damini : kya.. Tu khadi khadi mera muh kya dekh rahi hai.. Jake vedji ko bulake la..
Mena tu chal mere sath ridhima bahu ko kamre main lna hai..

**

An hr later..

Ved ji : dekhiye ise bahut tex bukjar hai.. Or ise dekh ke lgta hai jaise koi chiz hai jo ise ander hi ander khaye jari hai..
Damini : ap toh jnti hi hai.. Ved hone ke sath sath ap humari reshtedar bhi hai.. Kitne baras(years) hogye inke shadi ko pr aj bhi ridhima bahu or sidhant kitne dur hai.. 3 sal kam ni hote.. Main bhi taras gyi hn apne bete ka chehra dekhe hue..
Ved : smbhalie apne apko.. Ye lep(ointment) har ghnte iske mathe pr lgte rahiya jb tk bukhar km na ho.. Main sham ko fir aungi dekhne..
Damini : dhanyavad..(thank u)

**

In the evening..

Damini : na jne kya hogya hai ridhima bahu ko subha se hosh hi nahi aya..
Ja mena vedji ko bula la

A girl almost the same age of ridhima enters the rum..

Girl : maasa mujhe jra apse baat krni hai bahar ayenge..

Damini : mohini Main thodi der tk ati hn tu ja jake aram kr..

(girl (mohini) Ridhima's sister in law.. Damini's daughter..)

Mohini : ma kl meri godh bhari (baby shower) hai..

Damini : mujhe pta hai dikh nahi raha hai ridhima bahu ko subha se hosh nahi aya ek bar use hosh ajaye main ajaungi...

Mohini : Apko apni beti ki khushion se jda is ldki ki pdi hai..

Damini : vo tumhari bhabhi hai..

Mohini : vo bhabhi jiske humare bhai ko hm se chin lia...

Damini :(shouts ) kya bkwas kr rahi ho.. Jao apne kmre main..

An elderly Lady enteres..

( ridhima's badi ma sa.. Grand mother of sidhant.. Every one in the vilage respects her.. Her desion are final n no body dares to dis obey them.. She is called as bdi masa by all the vilagers..)

Badi masa : Bahu chilao mt meri gudia pr.. Jo vo bol rahi hai sab sach hai..

Damini : pr masa.. Ridhima bahu ki kya glti hai...

Badi masa : glti.. Tumhe ismain koi glti nahi dikhti... ankon pr pati bndhi hue hai tumhare.. Choti bahu ko dekhlo.. 3 sal choti hai ridhima bahu se pr kitni kush hai apne ghar sansar main.. Ek bachi hai usko jo ki ek baras ki hone ko ayi hai.. Or tumhari beti bhi toh Ridhima ki umar ki hai. dono ki shadi ek hi waqt pr hue the.. Dusri bar ma bne wali hai..

Damini : ps masa ismain ridhima bahu ki kya glti hai.. Apka pota (grnd son) jb ghar hi nahi araha.. Or na hi ridhima bahu ko ap sehar(town) jane deti hai.. Ab vo bechari kya kre..

Bdi masa : ise min koi kami hogi jo iska pati ise dur rehta..

Damini : maf kijia ga masa.. Glti ismain apki bhi hai.. Ek toh jabardasti sidhant ki shadi krvadi.. Jbki vo pdhma chahta tha.. Or jb vo pdhai krke vapis aya.. Apne jne kb dia ridhima bahu ko sidhant ke pas.. Apki hi zid tgi na apki bemari main apki seva vo kre.. Uske elava kisi ke haton khana tk ni leti thi ap.. Din raat usne apni jan lgadi apko thik krne main..

Bdi masa : frz hai vo uska..

Damini : toh fir aj ap uski bahu jiski taref krte nahi thakte the aj use hi doshi keh rahe hai..

Ridhima : ahh..

Badi masa : lo hosh agya tumhari ladli bahu ko.. Jb ise fursat mile tayarian bhi dekh lena..

N badi masa leaves the rum in anger..

Damini : ridhima bahu kaisi tabiat hai tumhari.. Or tum bahar angan main kya krrahi thi.. Kitna tufan ayq..or tumhe ehsas tk ni hua..

Ridhima : mujhe maf krdejie masa meri vja se apko kitni pareshani hue.. Main ab thik hn..ap jaio or bahar tayari dekhe lijie.. Agar kl thodi bhi gadbad hue toh jiji naraj.hojayenge..

Damini : mena ati hi hogi vedji ko leke tu aram kr...

By saying so Damini left the rum..!!

**

10 days pased ridhima's condition did not improved a bit.. Rather it was geting worst...

Damini : vedji.. Kya hua hai ridhima bahu ko.. 10 din hogye hai iski tabiat main koi sudhar nahi hai...
Vedji : mere hath main jo kuch tha maine kia.. Mujhe dr hai kahi ise haija (Cholera) na hogya ho..
Damini : nahi aisa nahi ho sakta..
Vedji.. : mujhe sirf dr hai.. Main ek lep bhejvati hn.. Use iske pure sharir pr lga dijiga.. Agar sham tk iska sharir lal hogya toh mera shak sahi hoga..!!

**

In the evening..
Ved ji's ashram..
Mena : ved ji ved ji..
Ved ji : kya hua mena aise bhag kr kyu arahi hai ridhima bahu thik hai na..??
Mena : vedji.jldi chahie ridhima bhaji ki tabiat jda kharab horahi hai.. Unhe sans lene main dikat arahi hai or unka pura shari lal pd gua hai...
Vedji : hey bhagwan.. Mena ye pudia leja or ridhima bahu ko kjila de.. Main aushadi tayar krke lati hn..

**

Late at nite..
Ridhima's condition was now a bit stable..

Damini : sach sach btayiga kya ye thik toh hojayegi na..??
Vedji : mere bs main jo bhi hoga main krumgi.. Pr ap toh jnti hai is bimari ka koi ilaj nahi hai...

**

A wk later..
Ridhima's condition has now improved a bit.. She was able to move on her own.. Bt was nt able to much of househlod work coz of her wknes..

Damini : (in ful anger) ridhima bahu..
R : kya hua masa..
Damini : apna sman bandho or nikl jao mere ghar se..
R : pr masa..
Badi masa : bahu ye kya bol rahi ho tum..
Damini : thik hi toh keh rahi hn masa.. Jb iska pati ise koi rishta hi nahi rakhna chahta toh kis hak se rahegi ye is ghar main.. Or hm rakhe bhi kyu is bhoj ko apne ghar.. Humari seva kya kregi.. Iski dekhbhal hume krni pd rahi hai...

Damini packs someof ridhima's stuff n a piece of cloth n thows her out of her house...

Ridhima was totaly shatered her only suport her masa threw her out of her house coz she was nt wel.. Was her position of only a maid in that family.. Just to look after them.. Rum behind them day n nite.. N now wen she needed their suport she was thrown of the house... N the house where she spent her 10 yrs.. For her the world was that house.. Bt now she was thrown out like a tisue paper...

Masa's words were echoing in her brain...

She walked almost for an hr.. Wandering where she will go..
She sat under a tree she was completely exausted.. She felt as if is walking since ages.. N she fainted..

**

After 2 hrs..

R : ahh..
Vedji : kaisi tabiat hai ridhima bahu..
R : mim thik hn vedji.. Main kahan hn..?? Main toh us ped ke niche..
Vedji : mera beta tumhe yahan laya.. Tum us ped ke niche behosh pdi thi.. Tumhari tabiat thik nahi hai tum vahan akele kya krri thi...

Ridhima narates the complete story...

Vedji : tum chinta mt kro aj se tum mere sath mere ashram main rahogi..
R : pr vedji main kaise.. Main ap pr bhoj nahi bnna chahti.. N she started crying..
Vedji : chinta mt kro vahan rehne ke lie tumhe kam bhi krna pdega.. Vahan hm sab jadi putian ugate hai.. Sab milke kam krtr hai jitma jiske bas main hota hai.. Ab rona bnd kro.. Chalo ao main tumhe sab se milvati hn...

Ridhima's face lite up hearing that..
R : shukria vedji..
Vedji : ajse tum bhi mujhe baki sabhi ki tarah ved didi kehna..
R : ji..

Vedji moved out of the cotage with ridhima besides her...

Vedji : suno sab.. Ye ridhima hai aj se ye yahi rahegi.. Piche wali kutia main.. Resham tum ridhima ko ashram dikha do or ise sab kuch smjha dena..

Resham : aoo ridhima main..
Resham gave ridhima a tour of entire ashram..
Resham : ye rasoi ghar hai.. 50 logon ka khana yahan ek sath bnta hai.. Or yahan bahar khana kate hai..
In sabhi kutia yahan rehne wale logon ki hai..
(Poiting towards small huts..)
Ye yahan ka puja sthan..
Or uske picha vo bdi wali kutia vahan sabhi aushdian (medicines) tyar ki jti hai.. Uske bgl main jo khet hai vahan aushdhiya ugai jti hai...
Ek baat ka dhayan rakhna jb tk tumhe aushdion ke bare main ota na chal jaye kisi ko bhi hath mt lgana .. Vo jan leva ho sakta hai..

Resham n ridhima talked for an hr.. Siting in the arsharam's garden.. Talking about there past..
Resham : ridhima jao tum aram kro abhi bhi tumhe bahut kamjori hai...

***

A wk pased ridhima has now acpeted the fact that she now belongs to this asharam...ridhima has started smiling with kids of asharam works.. Knowing ridhima's health condition vedji did not want ridhima to do stresful work... So her duty was to take care of those kids n asist ashram workers in taking care of sick persons wen ever neded. !!!

**

Every evening.. Ridhima used to play with the kids in garden.. N 2 pair of eyes used to watch ridhima from a distance...

Vedji : ap yahan kya kr rahi hai.. Dekhne ayi hai ridhima thik hai nahi...Main ved hi nahi timhari dost bhi hn.. Aisa kya hua jo tum ne ridhima ko nikal dia.. Jbki tum achese se jnti ho ki uski tabiat kitni kharab hai..

Damini : ye sab maine ridhima ki bhali ke lie kia.. Jis din main ridhima ko nikala use 3 din pehle sidhant ka khat aya tha.. Jis mn likha tha usne vahan shadi krli hai.. Or vo bap bnne wala hai..age mahine vo ghar araha hai use leke.. Main nahi chahti ridhoma ko is bat ka pta chale.. Agar use pta chal gya vo jete ji mar jayegi.. Or uski halat aisi nahi hai.. Gharwale uska jina mushkil krdenge.. Usi haisiat nokar se bhi bhatar ho jayegi.. Islie maine ye kadam uthaya..
Or jb apne mujhe btya ki ridhima apke ashram main hai mujhe kuch tasali mili.. Islie apse kaha tha ki ridhima ko ap apne sath rakh le..

N she started crying...

Vedji : agar apko mere pr itna hi bharosa tha toh roz yaha ridhima ko dekhne kyu ate ho.. Ab se ridhima meri zimedari hai.. Abhi toh usne apko nahi dekha agar kabhi delhlia toh vo apse swal zarir kregi.. Main apse wada krti hn main ridjima ki khabar ap tk pahunchati rahungi...

Damini hugs vedji n leaves from there...

**

A few days later..

Vedji : kl se mera beta ap sabko kuch naye nuskhe btayega.. Vo apni pdhai puri krchuka hai or ab vo is ashram main kam krega..

**

Late nite...
Boy : masa ap aise kaise kr sakti hai mujhse bina puche bol dia ki main kl se km krumga..

Vedji : armaan toh is main glt kya hai 2 mahine hogye tumhe vapis aye.. Sab se aise chup kr rrh rahe ho.. Krte kya rehte ho tum pura din.. Ya toh kmte main bethe kam nahi toh gyab.. Ab bahut hua..

Armaan : thik hai masa jaise ap kahen..!!

**
Days pased n now armaan has taken over most of his mother's responsibility..

Armaan 's point of view..

Ye ldki kon hai jitna main ise jna chata hn utna hi hairan teh jata hn.. Jb use pehle bar ped ke niche behosh pdi dekha.. Pta nahi kyu iski or khichta chala gya.. Is halat main dekhke mujhe itna drd kyu hua..!!
(remebring wen he 1st ridhima n brought her to ashram..)
Itna sahant sabka dhayan rakhti hai..
( remeber all those moments wen she assist his masa n other ved)
Pr jb bhi bachon ke sath hoti hai na jane kya ho jata hai.. Uske chehre pr alag hi muskan hoti hai.. (remembers ridhima's masti with kids..)
Din bhar shant or bachon ke sath masti.. Masa bolte hai main kahan rehta hn ab unhe kaise btaun.. Mera sara waqt use dekhne main nikl jta hai...
Masa na jne apke is bete ko kya hogya... Or ab toh main use delh bhi paunga... Masa ap bhi na..

Pov ends..

**

Next day..
Dining area..

Ridhima bumps into some one..she was about to fall bt she felt some strong arms around her waist..
R : maf kijie ga..
A : are ismain apki kli glti nahi..
Vedji : ridhima betia.. Ise milo ye hai armaan.. Mera beta.. Jo tumhe yahan laya tga..
Or armaan ue hai ridhima..
R : namaste armaan ji..
A : namaste..

Armaan pov
Aj jb ridhima mere se takri.. Pta nahi apne ap hi mere hath uski taraf bade usko bachame ke lie..
Aj jb vo mere itni karib thi ek alag hi ehsas hua dil main.. Jaise dhakadn tham gyi ho..!! Uska chehra jaise meri ankho ke samne sara wqt ghumta rehta hai..

Pov ends..

days pased.. armaan has now taken charge of ashram.. bt still he always find time to secretly watch ridhima..

**
A few days later..

Resham enters with a an elderly women...
Vedji : resham ye kon hai..
Rrsham : ved didi ye pas maji pas wale gaon main rehti hai.. Inhe pichle mahine se kafi bukhar hai.. Main hi inka ilaj kr rahi thi.. Aj subha ek ldki btakr gyi ki inki tabiat jda kharab hai.. Inka beta or bahu.. Gaon se bahar gye hai.. Toh main inhe ashram le ayi..

Vedji : acha kia resham.. Ridhima tum inhe smne wali kutia main letado..
Resham tum ao mere sath..

Ridhima spent her day n nite taking care of that elderly lady...
elderly Lady was very fun loving treated ridhima as her daughter.. Vedji gave armaan rerponsibilty of that lady.. N armaan without wasting any sec took charge..!!

elderly Lady : are betia kyu apna wqt is budhia pr barbad krti ho.. Mera wqt agya hai jne ka...
Ridhima : maji apse kitni bar kaha hai aise nahi bolte... Or mujhe bhi toh kuch punya kamane ka moka milna chahie na...
elderly Lady : trese behas main nahi jet sakti..

Armaan n ridhima spent days together taking care of that elderly lady..

For armaan it was an golden oporrunity to spend quality tume with ridhima.. For armaan every second with ridhima around felt as if on cloud nine..!!

Night time..
Ridhima was resting besides that lady... She started to cough badly.. Her breaths got heavier.. Ridhima moved to take a glas of water bt glas sliped from her hand.. Causing a loud sound...

Hearing that sound armaan entered the cottage..!!

His heart cried seeing ridhima in that condition...
Leaving behind his thoughys armaan went near ridhima holding her into his arms.. Armaan made her sit n gave her glas of water.. Bt ridhima 's condition did not improve...
Armaan was unable to do anything.. As he was nt aware of ridhima's disease..

Hearing ridhima's cough resham also came inside..

Resham : ridhima.. Ridhima..
Chalo mere sath..
Resham held ridhima from her shouder n tried to move.. Bt ridhima was unable to walk.. N she fainted.. Armaan came forward n held ridhima..
A : ridhima ji..!!
Resham : bhaiya ji.. Ap inhe inki kutia tk chod denge.. Main ved didi ko lekr ati hn..

Resham left.. N Armaan picked up ridhima in his arms n took her to her cotatge..

Vedji : resham ja jldi islie lie lape lekr aa..

After two hrs ridhima 's state became normal..
Armaan was standing on the door watching others treating ridhima..!!

3 hrs Later..
vedji : resham tum ridhima ke sath rehna.. agar jarurat pde mujhe bula lena..

seeing vedji.cuming out of cottage armaan hide himself behing the door..

In vedji's cotage..

Armaan : masa..
Vedji : aoo armaan..
Armaan : masa apse kuch puchma tha..
Vedji : pucho na..
Armaan : ridhima ji ke bare main..use kya hua hai..
Vedji : ridhima ko haija hai..

Armaan ' s heart sank hearing this..
Vedji told armaan about her mariage.. How her husband left her.. Y she was thrown out of her inlaws house..

Hearing this armaan was unavle to control his tears n left the cotage.. He just ran.. Ran until his legs gave up..!!

A : riddhhiimmaaa...!!!
Bhagvanji ap mere sath aisa nahi krskte.. Main apne jevan ki nayi shuruvat krna chata tha ridhima ke sath.. Pr mera sapna toh pura hone se pehle tut gya..!! Jb pehli bar use dekha tha bs dekhta hi rehgya tha.. Pyaar krne lga hn ridhima se main.. Beintehan pyaar..!! Vo kisi or ki patni hai.. Kya vo mujhe apnayegi.. Ridhima ko os halat main tadapte hue nahi dekh sakta.. Khans (cough) vo rahi thi drd mujhe ho raha tha.. Mujhe hi kuch krna hoga.. Mere ved hone ka kya fyda agar main apne pyaar ko apni ankhon ke smne tadpta hua dekhun.. Main kuch nahi hone dunga ridhima ko...

From that day Armaan spent his nights preparing medicines that could cure ridhima.. He performed many experiments.. Bt no medicine gave rishima much of relief...
After that incident.. Armaan dis not let ridhima work.. He made sure some one or the other was always with her during day n even night.. Every time he himself made sure ridhima take her medicines on time.. Armaan never went inside her cotage.. Until it was an emergwncy.. He used to watch ridhima from the window.. N at nites wen all others were asleep.. He used to go in her cotage.. Aply lep.. N came back..

As the time pased armaan ridhima started sharing a bond of friendship..!! They used to play with kids in the evening and often talk to each other for 5-10 mins.. About various patients.. Kids.. Or ridhima's health..

Armaan was siting under a tree n talking to himself..

A : pta nahi main aise koi dvai bna paunga bhi ya nahi.. Jis se tum thik ho sako... Jb bhi tumhari tabiat kharab hoti hai mn krta hai tumhe apni bahon main le lun.. Tumhare sare drd dur krdun.. Pr main humesha tumse dur rehta hn.. Tumhe tumhari kutia ki khidki se hi dekhta hn.. Kunki agar kabhi tumhare kareb gya.. Apne ap ko rok nahi paunga.. Or main jnta hn tumhe ye sb acha nahi lggega..!! Tum aj bhi dil se sidhant ji ko apna pati mnti ho.. Pr main kya krun ridhima ji main apne dil ko tumse pyar krne ko nahi rok pata..!!

Ridima heard this armaan's converstion with himself..
Ridhima ran inside her cotage..

Ridhima : ye glt hai.. Ap aisa kaise kr sakte hai.. Mujh se pyaar.. Meri zindagi bs kuchi palon ki hai.. Or main sidhant ji ki patni hn..

N she slept on ground..

As always armaan came to chek ridhima late at nite.. He did not sleep until he was satisfied ridhima was fine..

He was schocked to see ridhima on.floor.. Her face was even more pale... n dry tears were clearly visible on her face..

armaan quickly took a thik blanket n covered ridhima...

ridhima woke up coz of the slight moment bt remain quite..

days pased.. ridhima started liking armaan's care.. she used to pretend that she was sleeping.. coz armaan never enteded her cotage wen she was awake.. armaan... very carefully aplied lep on ridhima's forehead n her feet...!! without giving a second look he left her cotage.. n soon she realised her felings for armaan...

one nite ridhima decided to confront armaan..!!!

armaan after applying lep was about to go.. ridhima called his name..

ridhima : armaan ji..
armaan was shocked to see ridhima awake..
armaan : ri.. ridhima ji.. app..ap aram kijie main chalta hn..
ridhima : meri baat sunlijie..
armaan : nahi ridhima ji bahut raat hogi hai.. aise mai apki kutia main ye glt hai...
ridhima : toh kya apka mujhe pyar krna glt nahi hai.. ye jnte hue main shadi shuda hn...
armaan : ridhima ye tum..
ridhima : us raat maine apki baat sunli thi.. armaan ji aise apni zindagi kharab mt kijie.. apko pura hak hai apni zindagi jene ka.. Meri jindai toh bs kuchi dino ki hai..
Armaan : aisa kuch nahi hoga main apko kuch nahi hone dunga..

By saying so armaan left her cotage..

a wk later armaan was siting under a tree n reading a leter..

Leter

^^^^

Armaan ji.. Ap soch rahen honge ki apki dwa ka mujhe pr asar kyu nahi hua.. Ap apne kabiliat (potential) pr shak mt kijie.. Maine hi vo dva leni.chod.di thi... Armaan ji main ja rahi hn.. Main nahi chati ap meri vja se apna jewan barbad kren.. Main nahi dekh sakti koi bhi apse kahe ki ap ek shadi shuda ldki se pyar krte hai.. Main humare is rishte ko bdnam nahi hone desakti.. Main nahi chati koi bhi ap pr ungli uthai.. Humare pyar ko glt nzar se dekhe.. Haan armaan ji main apse pyaar krne lgi thi.. apko mujhse wada krna hoga ap pna jevn khushi khusji btiayenge...
is jnm main toh hm nahi mil paye.. pr agle jnm main main apka intzar krungi...

^^^^

armaan was confued reading this leter.. should he be happy sad or angry.. happy that ridhima tooo loved him.. sad coz ridhima left him n angry on himself he could not take care of her properly..!!

amaan was shatered after suden death of ridhima bt only for her sake he lived his life.. He did wat ever he could do to save lives of people.His medice that he made to save ridhima saved many lives..

1 yr later

Mohan( armaan' colegue)

Vedji : are mohan agya tu.. Armaan kahan hai 4 din hoge 2 din bolke tum log.. Pta hai kitni jitna thi mujhe..
Vo mariz (patent) thik hai na an
Jao.jath muh do lo main khana lgvati hn..
Mohan tu kuch bol kyu nahi raha kya hua..

Mohan : (had tears in his eyes..)
ved didi vo. Armaan dada nahi aye.. Ab kabhi nahi ayenge vo

Vedjk : kya bkwas krra hai..
Mohan : ye sach hai ved didi armaan dada nahi rahe... Jn hm vapis arahe the.. Achan unke ghode ko najane kya hua.. Vo pgla sa gya.. Armaan dada ne bahut koshish ki.use pdke rakhne ki.. Pr vo smbhal na paye or ghode ka pair fisal gya.. Or dono khai main gir gye...

Vedji was shattered she was completely numb.. His only.son left her..

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Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-

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too quick baby
mere edting bhi khtam nahi hue thi abhi..!!!

:-* :-*

wow...this story is so good...so different. ...
really loved the first part...
AR scenes were awesome...
cont super soon...

nice nd interesting start 😊
but at the same time sad too. poor ridhima she suffered lot nd armaan hw tried so much to save her but. at the end both died sad really sad
this so much emotional.
awsome work diks. it is wonderful. after reading it i know u work hard on this. gud job. i just loved it