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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9-


Awesome update. .

Arshi can't stay away from each other...😛😛
Finally khushi asked forgivenss fron arnav..😊
For khushi he cancelled his trip..
So sweet of u arnav...
Lovely husband..
Again they confessed their love for each other👏👏


Omg anand killed khuahi's parents..
He didn't even spare his own wife..
Mons😡ter..

Thnx for the pm. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 8
That was really romantic update. .

Khushi was full on mrs.asr mode that day...
She over reacted..
I understand her concern for gunjan..
But still..I am angry
She was not ready to listen anyone..
Even arnav's also...
Poor arnav...

Good that gunjan cleared air
...

Wow finally our shravan babu lost himself for gunjan..
After seeing her in red saree...
Totally flat...
Our gunjanji also not less...
She purposely wore red saree for shravan...
Just loved their passionate dance..
Finally they became one...

Thnx for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
Angels and their daughters (2nd version)Part 11
The amazing edited picture of Arshi holding a baby is not done by me.It was done by Taani.Special thanks for Taani for allowing me to use her merged picture in my update.
I thank all of u who read this SS.Since its the last part plz give me a detailed comment on the last part.plz write ur fav scene n fav character too.

Anand roared and moved towards Khushi and Gunjan.
Khushi was prepared to face him,but Gunjan was scared.
He pulled Khushi's and Gunjan's hair.
They cried in pain.

Devayani shed tears:Khushi ...Gunjan...
Arnav-Shravan roared.
Arn:Leave Khushi...
Shravan:You monster...leave Gunjan...

Anand laughed loudly:Let them feel pain.They deserve pain.
They all wept.
Anand pushed Gunjan and Khushi.Both of them fell down pathetically.
Arnav-Shravan ran toward them and helped them to get up.
Arn:Khushi...
K:I am alright.
Gun:We both are alright.But thesituation is very dangerous.Something has to be done.
Khushi looked at the fire.Only a little fire was left
K:Hey Devi maiyya...

K:Arnav...the wind should not swallow the fire for puja.It's dangerous.Please be careful.
They looked at the fire.
Arnav and Shravan took a wood and brought it close to the fire.The wood caught fire.
They ran towards Anand .
K:Arnav!
A:Khushi...
He looked at Anand:Hey...this is sacred fire.If it touches you,you cannot survive even for a moment,because it kills evil spirits,you are an evil spirit and this sacred fire won't let you do any evil deed.
Anand got scared:No...no...
Arnav:I don't pity you...you killed my mother.Now you are trying to kill my wife and sister in law.
Arnav and Shravan put the wood on him.Anand started getting burnt.He screamed.
The fire for puja brightened which made Arnav,Shravan,GunjanDevayani and Khushi smile.
D:This proves that Anand;the evil spirit is losing his strength.
Slowly Anand's evil spirit got disappeared completely.They all were relieved.
Suddenly Chhanchhan-Manav appeared before Arnav.
M:Thank you Arnav for saving our daughters.Thanks to Shravan too for protecting our Gunjan bitiya.
CC:You don't know what a great thing you did for us Arnav.
A:Because we both love our wives very much.We can't live without them.
They smiled.
Khushi became emotional:Arnav...are you talking to my parents?
A:Yes.
Gunjan also became emotional.
G:Can we see them?
K:We miss them.We want to see them.
Manav-Chhanchhan became very upset.
A:But only if you are true fairy tale lovers you can view Angels.
K:Now we also believe in such supernatural things.Then why can't we see them?
Gunjan-Khushi cried.Seeing them cry Manav-Chhanchhan were helpless and sad.
They prayed to God.A bright light passed through.
Suddenly they became visible to Khushi and Gunjan too.
They all became very emotional.
K:Mom!
G:Dad!
They hugged Manav-Chhanchhan.
G:We missed you both a lot.
CC:We too.But we were helpless.
Gunjan:We are so happy that we got you both back.
Chanchan's heart pained.
K:Will you be there with us forever?
M:Unfortunately today is the last day of our visit.
They were shocked.
Arnav:Why?
Manav:Till now we were allowed to visit world as our wish was unfulfilled.Now all our wishes are fulfilled.Our daughters are settled.Our enemy got destroyed forever.So we cannot visit you people again.

Khushi-Gunjan cried.
Khushi cried hugging Chanchan:Mom..please don't go.We need both you and dad...

Gun:We got you after a long time.Please don't go.
Manav-CC cried.
CC:Don't cry little girls.We will always be alive in your hearts.And we will be watching you all silently from above.So don't worry.
M:And Madhumati didi is there to look after you people.We are sure that she will shower both of ours love on you people.
K:That is true.Buaji loves us a lot.
Khushi-Gunjan,Manav-CC kept crying.
M:Chhanchhan...it's time for us to return.
Chhanchhan looked at him painfully.

Again they hugged their daughters shedding tears and flew upwards.Khushi-Gunjan cried.Arnav and Shravan tried to console their respective partners.


Time passed...

Khushi gave birth to a baby boy.Arnav-Khushi pampered the baby happily.

K:We will name him Aarav.
Devayani:Perfect name to be Chotte's son.Arnav and Aarav.
Everyone smiled.
Angels Manav and Chhanchhan who watched this from the heaven smiled happily.
CC:Aarav I so cute.
M:Ya.He will be a smart boy.
They smiled.
Madhumati:Now I can't wait for my Gunjan's baby.
Gunjan was shy.She touched her big belly.Shravan smiled.Yes,Gunjan is expecting.


Months passed...
Gunjan gave birth to a baby girl.
Shravan couldn't leave the baby alone.
Sh:My Mayuri...
G:Mayuri?
Sh:Yes,she is dancing in my arms like a pea cock.So she is Mayuri.
They all smiled.
Suddenly Mayuri urinated on Shravan's shirt.
Sh:Wht the hell!Why did you urinate on me itself?You had so many options...you could have urinated on your mom or great Nani.

Devayani:What?
Devayani pinched Shravan's ear.
Everybody laughed.
Angels Manav and Chhanchhan who watched this from the heaven laughed.
M:Our grand children are naughty Chanchan.
CC:Yes.Very naughty.

I am happy to see our daughters happy.
M:Me too Chanchan.
He held her closer.They both smiled.

The End
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww am glad they had a happy ending
khushi and gunji are both okay
and they had cute babies
aarav and mayuri
their parents had to leave
well their time was over and their wish fulfilled
how could they stay back right
got rid of anand once and for all
fav scene hmmm gunji and sharvan finally ready to take plunge
and fall for one another and make marriage real
couple would be the angel parents
they were there for their kids
keeping an eye on them
and bringing arnav and shravan in lives of their daughters
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the way you wrote. Nice update.
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending...
loved it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ending
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww... Its lovely...
But it ended...
Going to miss it...
Keep writing more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
thats a really beautiful end. it was so nice to read this version, and the whole update was fabulous. the pictures were cute too. well, my fav scene is manav and chanchan laughing happily seeing their family together being happy. parents want the happiness of their children always. superb story
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb ending👏👏👏👏👏

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