ArHi Intense OS:Kaash mai tumse...(Link to its SS on PG-15) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Hina69

For those who don't understand hindi/urdu

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"Hum nay apke sath aisa koi pal jiya hi nahi jis ka humein afsos ho balke hum har pal jee uthe"

[I haven't lived any moment with you which i regret instead i lived through each of them]

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"Kaash mai tumhe bata paata k kitni takleef hoti hai Khushi..Kaash mai tumhe wo sab de paata jiska maine khud se aur tum se waada kiya tha...Kaash mai tumse mohabbat kar pata..."

[I wish i could tell you that how much it hurts Khushi...I wish i could give you everything which i have promised to you and myself..I wish i could love you...]

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"Kaash mai tumhe utni takleef de paate jitni tumne mujhe di hai.Kaash mai tumhe bata paati k kitni takleef hoti hai Arnav...Kaash mai tumse nafrat kar paati.."

[I wish i could hurt you as much as you give me pain...I wish i could tell you how much it pains Arnav...I wish i could hate you]

Sorry aysemLDG, i forgot to translate the hindi dialogues...I hope it helps 😳😃


Thank you so much for the quick response and translation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Awesome and emotionally filled OS
Love how you wrote it Hina👏👍🏼
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Awsum os but plzzz its a humble request convert it into ts or plzzz give another part of it
Very intense truly goes with the title
Every emotion beautifully described the agomy the pain the hurt the anger their miserable condition everything could be felt
The povs of both arnav n khushi beautifully written
Its impossible to blame any of them
When arnav mocked their love it was heart wrenching situation n togh to read further but it was more tough to leave in middle
N then khushis reaction to it ghosh it scared me for a sec
Its paining both of them to see each others pain
N it hurt us imagining our fav couple in pain
Plzzz diii continue it further take it as ur new fans wish we all want them to be happy
Lots of love
Ur new fan
Pritha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
oh god too heart wrenching. Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
that was quit intense as well painfull...u made me cry..
Rimi_BS thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Awsum os but plzzz its a humble request convert it into ts or plzzz give another part of it</font>

<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Very intense truly goes with the title</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Every emotion beautifully described the agomy the pain the hurt the anger their miserable condition everything could be felt</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">The povs of both arnav n khushi beautifully written</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Its impossible to blame any of them</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">When arnav mocked their love it was heart wrenching situation n togh to read further but it was more tough to leave in middle</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">N then khushis reaction to it ghosh it scared me for a sec</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Its paining both of them to see each others pain</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">N it hurt us imagining our fav couple in pain</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Plzzz diii continue it further take it as ur new fans wish we all want them to be happy</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Lots of love</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Ur new fan</font>
<font face="'Courier New', Courier, mono" size="3" color="#996699">Pritha</font>



i really agree with you...wish to see one more part of this OS..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
cant describe so instense could really feel khyshi's pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Wow interesting and very different concept
liked it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
very emotional..
really Arnav needs a good lesson..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
freaking awesome man
if u got time continue it ...
w8ng ur other ff also
continue soon

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