ArHi Intense OS:Kaash mai tumse...(Link to its SS on PG-15)

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zohania

@zohania

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome is

Plzz continue it

It was really interesting

It was very intense

Brilliantly written

Plzzz make it a ss

Plzzz

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

thanks for the pm dear
I loved this OS very much...although i was reading the One Shot, I was scared that the next line the os will end. I felt like reading it endless. Loved it ...intense feelings portrayed

Great work dear

I dont know whether i should ask u for a sequel. If at all u have planned will be eager to read

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greshu

@greshu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Superb story hena, hey i want it;s continuation, do write soon...

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

it was so intense. the emotions were at high and each and every scene was written in a beautiful way. good going

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TaujooMadiha

@TaujooMadiha

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

loved it. I love OS which has angst. Please write a second part to this OS

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

It was such a painful and emotional story to read. If only Arnav could left the past behind for the sake of his better half, his beloved wife, his Khushi...

By the way can you translate the parts which start with 'Kaash mai tumhe...' I didn't understand what it means as I don't know Hindi.

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alisonsnape

@alisonsnape

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

nice os.Hope u won't finish it here. A sequel perhaps 4m arnav's pov pls pls pls...

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

ohhh
such a heart wrenching and intense os
poor khushi
arnav is real cruel and rude in it
but don't here plzzz
continue it
don't left it on this cliff hanger
want yo read proper ending
happy or sad
upto u
and
and
plzzz
cobtinue ither storues tooo

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

For those who don't understand hindi/urdu

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"Hum nay apke sath aisa koi pal jiya hi nahi jis ka humein afsos ho balke hum har pal jee uthe"

[I haven't lived any moment with you which i regret instead i have lived through each one of them]

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"Kaash mai tumhe bata paata k kitni takleef hoti hai Khushi..Kaash mai tumhe wo sab de paata jiska maine khud se aur tum se waada kiya tha...Kaash mai tumse mohabbat kar pata..."

[I wish i could tell you that how much it hurts Khushi...I wish i could give you everything which i have promised to you and myself..I wish i could love you...]

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"Kaash mai tumhe utni takleef de paate jitni tumne mujhe di hai.Kaash mai tumhe bata paati k kitni takleef hoti hai Arnav...Kaash mai tumse nafrat kar paati.."

[I wish i could hurt you as much as you give me pain...I wish i could tell you how much it pains Arnav...I wish i could hate you]

Sorry aysemLDG, i forgot to translate the hindi dialogues...I hope it helps 😳😃

Edited by Hina69 - 10 years ago