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@EchTee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

I want vikrant to get punished soon.

Awesome update

Edited by HUMII10592 - 10 years ago

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Vikrant shud be punished arnav khushi relation growing butifuly

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Fabulous update...

Loved arshi cute scenes...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Superb update
Khushi is being naughty 😉
Hope aman wins this case...

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aazzz

@aazzz

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Amazing update
Waiting for next update

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mayapvj

@mayapvj

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Thanks for update...all women are strong and independent...that's really nice...I empathise with divya raizada but like it that she supports anjali...hope khushi gets all happiness she deserves

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

So Khushi is going to re-decorate the room, looks like maybe after all this she can go back to fulfilling her childhood and original ambitions!!!

Oh Mr. Raizada wants me-time with his beautiful wife!!

Loved how he diverted her mind from those thoughts!!

You are great in writing,

Especially the ease with which you skip from writing about a Husband-Wife or Lovers relation to a Mother-Child relation then to a Brother-Sis one or even a relation between Friends, Fabulous!!!

Also love how you show the different variations of each of them!!

For example, mother-child, there's Arnav-Mom and Akash-Mom, so much difference,

In friends, Khushi-La, Khushi-Aman and Arnav-Shyam,

In Hubby-Wife and lovers relations, Arnav-Khushi, Akash-Payal and Shyam-Anjali!!!
Its amazing the way write and give so many different perspectives,

Great Job!!!

Also thanks for taking so much care of your readers, I would say don't be so bothered and please update as and when you wish!!!

Take Care!!!

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Awesome update!

Like the way Arnav try to distract khushi. .
khushi's laugh made his day..

buut tge way khushi tild Arnav n kissed her was superb. .

Arnav mom is also hurt them..

Aman I hope get success.

Story is goibg superb. .take your time to write n update. .dont hurry to end