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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

That was heartwrenching. ..

I had boosebumbs while reading and though I knew Lavanya's fate but still I was praying for her safety... She was a brave girl and the best ever friend. . I can truly understand the guilt khushi is carrying... Afterall it was supposed to be her instead of La..

Like Khushi I too think that that bas***** have got very easy death... God I want to kill them again and again...

Loved the update. .

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Sarah Sherwani

@smileysarah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

You are right even I am shivering while reading it no punishment is enough for animals like that. Now that Khushi has open up to him it will be big step forward in their relationship.

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

How do you word kartik and his friends' cruelty? Evilness personified or destruction redefined. I agree with Khushi about them not getting the right punishment. Those low lives deserved to be punished and cut into pieces. They deserve no mercy and should have been made to endure more pain than they had inflicted up Lavanya.

I have no words for the sacrifices Lavanya and Khushi had to made. Those girls had to sacrifice their friendship, their families, their careers, their dreams and their lives because after Lavanya's death even Khushi wasn't living, she was struggling to breathe in that guilt filled environment and all because of those power hungry and pathetic souls.

Khushi will not have to worry about falling down this time because she has someone to break her fall. Together they deserve to find their hapiness and fall in love with each other.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

This is definitely one of the most well written chapters of this FF!

I have tears in my eyes, the scene seemed so damn realistic!

Sorry for the late comment, I have exams going on, so I hardly have any time to read!

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Amazing!!!

This was the most Heart wrenching update..

Continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

waiting for the next update eagerly...please do continue soon...

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

I wish I could hug you for the mind blowing update.

I felt helpless and was angry. Khushi was right, they shouldn't died like this... you made me cry, man!

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Note:

Hi everyone,

Yeah I know what most of you are thinking😆 That where the hell is this girl? Why is she not updating her story? Why did she disappear suddenly?

Hold on to your horses and let me explain.😉

Well, nowadays I am giving my semester exams so I have switched into my student mode, choosing to forget my story till the last exam. It's been crazy rush since past few months and I know that I have been such a horrible writer that I am not even answering to any message of my readers at all...no scraps and pms. I am so sorry !!!!

Just give me this week when i will give my rest of the exams and then I will be back. After this week, I promise you all that this story will be my priority. I will update it after every 3 days so that I can make up for my irregular updates till now...

So that next update will be on 7th or 8th December...that's five pr six days from now on...

Please wait and don't go anywhere...Okay?

Love you all 🤗,

Aditi