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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update!! Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a cute cute update...!!
Oh no... 21 march is too long...!!!
But All the best for the exams... Do well... 😃😃
Dont worry Update when u will be free...!!
We will be waiting...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
so glad you wrote an update after so long!
it was amazing as all your other updates are 😊
best of luck for your exams! and I hope they go well so you'll be in a great mood to give all your readers even more to read!
thanks for the PM ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update!

It was brilliant!

Viren is too sweet! The first thing did was kiss them both!

Loved the Virika scenes they were adorable!

Thanks for the pm!

Please continue soon!

And goodluck for your exams!!


Edited by Love_Family - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Beautifully written😊
It was so sweet...loved it!!
Continue soon n thanks for the pm!!
Sorry for the late comment 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Loved it.
Sorry for late commenting dear.
It was so sweet update.
Beautifully written.
Viren and jeevika r so sweet.
Really viren is very caring husband and would be father.
Loved the part where viren feed jeevika.
So sweet it was.
Now waiting for the next part dear.
All the best for ur exams.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the whole update
loved viren caring towards jeevika
totally
amazing
superb
fantastic
splendid
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys!
I'm back with a long update!
Also, THANK YOU everybody for your best wishes! Must say your wishes really worked and I passed with really good marks!
So here goes a TREAT for you all!!!
Enjoy!!!!!!!!!
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Chapter- 6

Their bike ride was quite romantic and fun filled as jeevika was hugging him tightly from the back while he was riding the bike. Their small moments while the journey like holding hands, whispering love words, slight kissing by jeevika on his neck.
Soon they reached their destination, THE CHURCH. Both prayed silently and thanked god for giving them the blessing in the form of their baby, their bundle of joy. They lit a candle together after the praying was done. After coming out from the church, jeevika asked viren.

J- Virenji what did you prayed?

V- Exactly what YOU prayed.

J- How you know what I prayed?

V- I think i know you inside-out, so don't tell me that i don't know what you prayed.

J- Hmm. I know very well that you know me more than myself.

V- That's like my baby jeevika.

Jeevika didn't responded and kept staring at him with love. To get her attention viren lightly kissed on her lips and then she out of her dream world.

V- What you were thinking?

J- Ahh. Nothing

V- Tell me

J- You remember, few minutes ago there was a man saying that he knows what i think. Huh? *smirking*

V- Uhm. Yaa i know but...

J- But what?

V- I want to hear it from you. *politely*

J- I'm not in a mood to tell, I'll tell you later *cranky*

V- As you say Mrs. Vadhera, Let's go to the beach!

J- Yes!!! *excited*

V- Argh! How am I going to handle my pregnant wife and her MOOD SWINGS! God help me *He murmured*

J- Apne kuch kaha

V- Uhm! Nahi toh, tumne kuch suna kya

J- Nahi

V- Toh phir

J- Hmm. Chale

V- Haan

With this Viren started the bike and they went to the beach! Their favorite place, where they both can enjoy and relive the moments of their first honeymoon. As they reached their destination, Jeevika quickly got off from the bike and ran towards the sea in excitement without even waiting for him. He tried stopping her as she was behaving like a small child specially when she is carrying a baby inside her. He quickly parked the bike and ran after her.

V- Jeevika, STOP!

J- Nahi Virenji!

V- Jeevika, Jeevika please stop running. It's not good for you in this condition.

He ran more faster and finally caught her wrist.

V- Jeevika! Are you mad? *out of breath*

J- Virenji!

V- Don't you know, you should not be running like this in this condition. When will you start taking care of yourself. What if something must have happened to you or the baby? How can you be so careless huh? *Loudly*

He kept on speaking and being angry on her for being careless and jeevika didn't spoke a word but rather started crying. All thanks to her mood swings. As he realized that he had spoken much to her for a small mistake, he felt guilty and when he saw she was crying, he cursed himself for making her cry. Without wasting a second, he pulled her into a bone-crashing hug while jeevika was trying to shrug him but Viren is Viren, he won't let her go. They hugged for a while till viren felt that she was calmer and he broke the hug.

V- Jeevika, I'm sorry baby. I said much to you, I'm really very sorry.

Jeevika didn't spoke but turned around and was about to go but he stood in front of her and said.

V- Jeevika please. I'm sorry. I know I did a mistake, punish me but please don't ignore me like this. Beat me, do anything but please talk to me.

J- I'm not ignoring you.

V- You are ignoring me.

She gave him an angry look and he thought that it would be dangerous to mess up with her more so he changed his words. Poor husband.

V-No no you are not ignoring me. SORRY.

Jeevika stared at him and kept making a puppy face which made her smile.

J- I Love you honey.

V- I Love you more sweety.

J- Bas bas. Now let's go and have a nice walk on the beach.

V- Yup. Let's have it.

They walked hand in hand on the beach with sand kissing their feet and the sea waves tickling their feet. Words are too less to describe the peace one can have while walking with their lover on the beach. The same peace Virika were having with each other. After a couple of fourty-five mins, Viren insisted.

V- Jeevika, we should sit now. You must be tired.

J- Virenji, I'm not tired. I want to stay here only.

V- I'm just saying that you eat something and rest for a while then we'll again have a walk.

J- Promise

V- Pinky promise.

J- Theek hai chaliye.

They went to a nearby mini-restaurant and sat on a table for two people. He ordered two nariyal pani (Coconut water) for them first and then ate some snacks before heading towards the beach again.

Note~ Guys, i'm really disappointed by the response and it makes me feel like this story is crap. Please hit like and comment. I need a good response to continue it further.
Hope that I'll get a good response for this update! Next update after 35 likes and 3 pages of comments!

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Edited by MyKryan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh bale bale
Me first
UnRes
Hayeee, mannu what an
mindblowing,
superb,
loving,
cute,
awesome,
virika,
caring,
splendid,
wonderful,
amazing,
update...
The update was sooo amazing, how cute and loving and caring was viren to jeevika, hayeee seriously i wanna run to GOA now... The way you have describe the romantic moments of virika reminded me the Goa honeymoon of the world's romantic couple virika. Hayee wish to read more and more of your updates, and dare you stop this story.. You Cant !!! Pleasseee for me and for all ur readers..
Cant Wait for more loving,caring of virika
Update soonishh
Thanks for the Update and PM..😊
Mannu I am sorry for unresing so late... 😭




Edited by nishyrelan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
LUVED THE UPDATE! Please don't stop I luv this story. Continue real soon il b waiting 4 an update. 😊

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