Virika ff: You are Mine

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyy guys,
You all must be thinking what am i doing here.So i should tell you that this is my first ever story and on my favourite couple VIRIKA and no day can be better than today i.e 3rd October, The day when our EHMMBH started...
Now enough of my talks here is the story:-
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Chapter-1

Virika has been married now for almost 3 years and with each passing second their love their trust and their bond grew more stronger and stronger...In short words virika are inseparable and they both can't live without each other for even a second.They are complete only when they are together,they are incomplete without each other.They are two bodies but one soul and before marriage jeevika loved manvi the most ,truely with her heart and for whom she can give away her life or actually manvi was her life but slowly after marriage viren became her life,its not that now she does not love manvi but viren has became the most precious thing in her life and same was with viren before marriage his badi maa was his life but now jeevika is his life,his soul,his heartbeat,his princess.
Today,the whole vadhera family is going out on a family picnic to mussorie and virika are getting ready.Viren is standing in front of the mirror combing his hair and jeevika was getting ready in the bathroom when viren saw the time and realized that they were getting late.He called jeevika.
V-jeevika jaldi karo hum late ho rahe hai
J-Haan virenji bus abhi 2 min mein aayi
Soon she came out of the washroom wearing a pink saree with her hair wet and water was dropping from her wet hair on her beautiful face .Viren turned around and saw her, he was mesmerised by the beauty of the world's most beautiful lady who only belongs to him.He came towards her and hold her from her waist and stared into her deep eyes and got lost in those pretty eyes jeevika also looked into her man's deep black eyes which were filled with pure love for her.
J-virenji
V-Hmm
J-Aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho,pehle kabhi dekha nhi hai kya
V-ab kya karun jab meri biwi hai hi itni khubsoorat ki kitni baar bhi dekhlo nazre hatti hi nahi
Jeevika blushed really hard.
J-virenji subah subah kyu itni tarif kar raho ho meri
V-kyu bhai subah subah apni biwi ki taarif nahi kar sakte kya
J-kar sakte h par abhi chup chap chalea hum late ho rahe hai
V-kya yaar mere ache khase romantic mood pe paani pher dia tumne
He said getting angry on her(fake anger) and removing his hands from her waist and stood with folded arms looking away.Jeevika put her hand on his face and brings hs face near to her lips and kissed on his cheek but he didn't react so she kissed on other cheek still no reation so finally gave a soft kiss on his lips and with this a big smile crept on his lips and he hugged her and jeevika also hugged him back they were lost in each other touch.After some time they broke the hug and jeevika said.
J-Waise Mr.vadhera apko lawyer nahi actor hona chahiye kaafi achi acting kar lete ho aaap
V-acting????? meine kab acting ki..ye tum kya keh rahi ho
He said acting like innocent as if he don't know anything but jeevika knew everything...LOL she knew him in and out and knew him more than himself.
J-virenji mujhe sab pata hai aapka jo ye "so called anger" tha na sab fake tha
V- ab kya karun apni biwi ke saath romance karne ke liye itna toh karna hi padhta hai..kyun???? He said in a husky voice
Jeevika blushed and hit him on his chest
V- "Ouuch kitna zor se maara tumne mere dil ko hurt hua" He said putting his hand on his heart and pretended to be hurt...
J-Virenji bas ho gaya aapka drama ab chaliye
V- okay teacher ji jaisa aap kahe
J-Chaliye lawyer ji
They both went out hand in hand where the family was waiting for them.As they reached they saw manvi and virat standing and smiling towards them and as jeevika saw them smiling towards them she tried to pull away her hand from viren's grip but he didn't loose his grip on her hand but he holds her hand more tightly and jeevika got shy by this as manvi and virat was seeing them. They reached towards them.
M- wow kya baat hai di and jiju hand in hand hmm irada kya hai
Vi-"Manvi tum mere bhai aur bhabhi ko dekhke itna jealous kyo ho rahi ho,ab vo dono hain hi love birds toh roamance toh karenge hi" Virat said teasing the trio and the trio gave him a glare. Then all foursome burst into fits of laughter.
V- ab chalo varna dadaji hum sabse hassi nikal denge
Vi-Haan bhai sahi keh rahe ho chalo jaldi
Virat and manvi got inside the bus and then viren got into the bus and helped jeevika to come on the bus by giving his hand and she readily and shyly holded his hand and came on the bus and went to sit and viren got busy in putting the luggage in the bus with virat .Everybody got settled on their seats with dadaji and shlok sitting in the front reading newspaper and playing game in mobile respectively.Sb and vanshika maa sat behind dadaji chatting with each other and inder chachu and kadambari chachi sat behind vanshika maa and sb and behind them sat virat and jeevika behind him.Both jeevika and virat were waiting for Viren and manvi respectively.After sometime manvi came and Virat said
Vi-Manvi kahan chali gayi thi tum
M-Vo kuch nahi bus kuch saman reh gaya tha vo lene gayi thi
J-Mannu virenji kahan reh gaye??
M-di vo driver ko raasta samjha rahe hai bus aate honge
Just then viren comes and manvi said "lo aa gaye"
V- kya baate ho rahi hai
M- kuch nahi jiju bas di ko aapki chinta ho rahi thi
Then manvi was about to sit with jeevika when jeevika said "Mannu ab teri shaadi ho chuki hai tujhe virat ke saath baithna chahiye vo tera pati hai"
M- Di kisne kaha ki shaadi ke baad pati ke saath baithna zaruri hai mein aapke saath bhi toh baith sakti hun aur agar aapko jiju ke saath baithna hai toh mujhe koi problem nahi hai.
Manvi teased her sister as she knew her sister wants to sit with her jiju and then she made viren to sit besides jeevika and while all this jeevika was blushing and was looking downwards.
M-hayee bechari meri di sharma rahi hai
Saying this they all settled down and was ready to began their trip when viren said
V-Kya baat hai Mrs. Vadhera lagta hai ki iss trip ka asar ho raha hai aap par kaafi romantic ho rahi ho
J- virenji mein kaha romantic ho rahi hun
V-acha toh abhi abhi tumne manvi ko tumhara saath baithne se mana kyu kar dia
J-vo toh..
V-haan vo kya...waise sahi kia tumne
J-Matlab??
V-arre ab dekho hum ek toh last seat par baithe hai aur ab hume koi dekh bhi nahi raha toh befikar hoke romance kar sakte hai koi hume disturb bhi nahi karega.
J-virenji kya aap bhi
Viren smiled and jeevika blushed and they began their journey to mussorie happily.

So how was it??? i know it was crap but do hit the like button and comment

❤️ FEEDBACK WELCOME❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter-1 pg1
Chapter-2 pg5
Chapter-3 pg10
Note- pg15
Chapter-4 pg16
Chapter-5 pg30
Chapter-6 pg33
Chapter-7 pg35




Edited by MyKryan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres

Loved the update!

It was sweet!

Didn't expect you to write a story!

Sorry for editing my comment late!

I totally forgot!

Thanks for the pm!

Please continue soon!
Edited by Love_Family - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story Mansi...
Nice start.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute start !
Loved the picnic track !!!!
Ahhh ! Virika !!! <3
Cont soon !!! Jaldi se ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am I wondering or it's true????
mannu writing story????
OMG! I love u mannu
i will comment when I will be back
this was BEST SURPRISE EVER :*:*

honestly when i first saw i was like WHAT???😲
and then i was like this 😃🥳
i love u mannu ❤️
hhaaayyyeee virika ❤️
i LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS ❤️
and aww i love viren ☺️😳
bhut hi romantic virenji hain jeevika ke ;)😳
i love him to core🤗
and awwiness is when viren was anger on her 😆
ekkksss... ☺️🤗than that kiss on cheeks ☺️😳
and then on lips ☺️🤗
aayyeee haaayyeee😳😊
*faints*
i want an update now :)😉
I NEED UPDATE RIGHT NOW!😃
plz update my mannu 😊😊

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sooo cute!!!! :* :* :* :*
Love it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That is so very sweet,,,!!
I love it..!!
Amazingly written...!!
Plz continue soon..!
ANd do pm me..!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb
absolutely brilliant
cannot wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww lovely update and really a nice start
love virika n their teasing session with little romance
update next part soon
thanks for the pm

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