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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Yaar me so late
Third 😭

Mannnuuu

What an

Mindblowing

Superb

Cute

Loving

Caring

Lovely

Awesome

Splendid

Mindblasting

Sweet

Humble

Update !!!!!

Mannu ur an amazing writer which i always tell you !!! This update was just so sweet...

Eeeks Virika in Goa !!!! Too much romance going to happen i wish !!!

The wake up scene of Viren was so cute, thinking of jeevika will be sad if he goes to the beach so he went n stare the beautiful view.. How lovely !!! and the way jeevika and viren talked in the morning so cute and lovely...

Just wishing for more of this romance...

Cant wait too see and read more of Virika romance in Goa...

Update soonish

Waiting Eagerly !!!!!!

P. S Mannu u remember, in march its There's a lot of birthdays and you have to give us one.. Or i will spammm 🤣 But firstly, Best Of Luck for Your Examsss... 😊

Edited by nishyrelan - 10 years ago

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

I know u r smart and u can change the story line as u and viren are unpredictable..
Let's see what happen next.. But plz put jeevika mode swing scene..will cmnt later :D

Originally posted by: MyKryan

Must say you are very smart maliha but I'm double smart you know😉😆
Won't reveal anything now. You have to wait until next update😛

😆

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Awesome update!!! 😃
love how viren fed jeevs
"Im feeding my baby" aww
they're so sweet how they take care of each other
I just wish I could have a quicker update...
but thats ok take ur time
im sure the next update will be just as brilliant <3

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.

LOVED IT.

AFTER A LONG TIME U UPDATED BUT I CAN UNDERSTAND U HAVE TO STUDY TOO.

MORNING IS SO BEAUTIFUL AS NATURE IS VERY GOOD DESCRIBED BY U.

VIRIKA MOMENTS R AWESOME AND ROMANTIC.

WOW LOVED HOW VIREN FED JEEVIKA. SO SWEET.

LAST PART WAS TOO GUD.

NOW WAITING FOR JEEVIKA MOOD SWINGS IN NEXT UPDATE.

TAKE UR TIME DEAR.

ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS.

TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊

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wal43

@wal43

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Thanks for the update
And pm
Loved the update
Viren is so caring
Loved how you described everything
Great update
Continue soon

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Priya

@Priya_ashvik

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Wow...Loved the update..❤️
It was a lovely morning described...
And the update was awsome...😊

Adore their romance..
Waiting for the next update..😉

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Massive amouts of adrenaline was coursing through my veins as I savoured this romantic moment! Thumps up from me!

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sumayyah

@sumayyah1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

wooww!
beta its superb!
loving the chaps!
made me happy! :)
awww!
well viren and jeevike!
aww!
cute!
superbb!
cont soon!
gud luck beta for ur exams!! <3