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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a heart wriching it was.
poor arshi.
tf pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Thanks for the pm.

I don't want to see Arnav being the cause of Khushi's tears/pain... I have always believed that they are soulmates. I do hope there will be light at the end of this dark dark tunnel.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
that was painful.
but i guess or ratrher wud say..wish we have a continuation to this part.

Not that i want her to be back but wanna see him suffer a bit more n maybe then a happy-shappy ending😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Heart breaking
Please continue
Looking forward to reading the next part

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Post. Next art with Arshi n their baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
emotional one
liked it
plz continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
So painful to read. Not only did she lose her baby but she can never be a mother again. What a beast he is??? Loved the OS. Incredible job.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Seems Khushi has to always deal with crap from everybody

Because of her bubbly attitude everyone takes her for granted

They do and say things and expect her forgive them all the time

Nobody takes her feelings into consideration especially Arnav

She deserves a better husband than him

Please do add some more parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
This is so damn painful and depressing ...U brought back so many painful memories in my real life...

But I have to give you a 👍🏼 for this flawless writing..Good OS though sad..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
very well written. loved it.. pls do add a 2nd part to it..

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