RaBir FF -A Cast of Characters chapter 97/98 & Epilogue pg121/2 (4 - Page 51

What happend to Noami? I hope she is ok She act weird.

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That was an amazing update
Update soon
Thanks 4 pm

Update coming soon? 😊

Nivi no giving update please Kelly ji you at least give. Rabir withdrawal happen now. No new chapter read since last 4 days!

Originally posted by: hailly

wow nice update continue soon . Thanks for pm

Thanks for your comment. I hope you enjoy the next update!

Originally posted by: hangok

wow wow what was this,
have i read the last part right???
what did kt say???

awww rachna what a sweetheart, but i dont have a good feeling about it...
hope nothing goes wrong...

Our characters are not perfect as you can see😊

Originally posted by: nividances

I can completely relate. I write a lot of Rabir scenes with things that I wish I could have seen on the show. 😊

You do an amazing job with it though. The chapters move fluidly and it doesn't seem drawn out at all (I still have to work on that bit with my own writing I think. 😕)

Originally posted by: nividances

By no means at all. 😳

I pull way more all-nighters than one normally should and my to do list is still overflowing with things that have yet to be done. I enjoy writing new updates so much though that I treat them as rewards by getting through some work and then allowing myself to pen down a few scenes. 😊

Well you are doing a stellar job of managing it all.

Originally posted by: nividances

Rachna and Kabir's conversation in preparation for the NY trip was sweet. It's great to see Rachna wanting to bond more with Sanjay, but Kabir is absolutely correct in his spot about wanting his wife to stay away from Sonal. I predict some dramatic turns coming up in this track soon.

For some reason, the way you ended the last RaMi chapter I had a feeling that something like this would happen. The way that you had shown dadi warning Naomi about not going too far and then Naomi realizing Rajeev's true feelings for her, I felt like they would get physical in the heat of the moment, so in that sense I kind of expected this "twist." Rachna clearly knows about what transpired between her friend and coach, but I wonder if the matter is known to dadi, and if this point will become a hurdle in RaMi's relationship.

I guess I see that Kabir was completely in the dark about why Naomi had suddenly taken ill so it was nothing less than a shock for him to find the drug fact sheet about the contraceptive pill. It was wrong of him to accuse Rajeev of taking advantage of Naomi, especially when he himself was vying for the couple's togetherness. But I can understand that he was looking at the situation from the perspective of a concerned friend to Naomi, as he has known Rajeev for a shorter time period and in a lesser capacity. The slap from Naomi was definitely well-deserved though. 😛

I'm not surprised that you had picked up on that. I hadn't decided at the end of the chapter if that was the way I wanted to go, but left the option open. I really did have to think about it, but I reckoned everyone is a little older now, and sometimes these things happen. So I did some research on the morning after pills and went for it. I was really surprised to read how so many young women use them as their choice of bc...makes no sense to me. Anyway I digress...Yes Kabir , as much as we love him is a totally irrational male. Despite his heart being in the right place, everything just came out so wrong...hopefully he can make it up to his friend.

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

What happend to Noami? I hope she is ok She act weird.

I like how KT Worried for his wife.

I little worried about sonal.

nice update dear keep it up