RaBir FF -A Cast of Characters chapter 97/98 & Epilogue pg121/2 (4

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Nurit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Lovely update kelly.
Poor KT i sure he didnt mean to hurt naomi. I also feel sad for rajeev he was ready to propose to her. I think sonal also take part in it.
The part f the lovely family was cute i like the converstion bettwen rachna and sanjay hebso sweet boy. Poor kt he still feel bad after what happend i hope rachna can help him beacuse after all she noami good friend.

Lovely update dear thank for pm me

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hailly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

nice update continue soon . Thanks for pm .

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Next chapter soon?? Please 😊

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Please please Kelly ji update soon!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: RaBir
Wow Kelly ji! This one too good. Rajeev propose to Naomi but he no get to because Kabir. Rachna still no know about what Kabir say I wonder how she react when she find out. Family play time good relax before argue. Update soon. Thanks for pm.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this update . I hope the next one is as good😊.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: nividances
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Will comment once I finish writing. 😊

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I'm speechless. The trailer you gave me was great, but the entire part was another level altogether. Every word that came out of Rajeev's mouth was bang on. Kabir should feel terrible for what he said and the consequences that his words had. I do wonder how Rachna will react to hearing about this. Somewhere I want her to be angry with him and side with her friend, but at the same time I hope she can convince Naomi to forgive her husband. Looking forward to the next part Kelly! 😊

Thanks Nivi, I followed you advice and went for it and let Rajeev have his say. I hope you enjoy the next update which I've finally got around to completing😕

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

owww dont know what i should say,

ufff what will happen now, im sure kt will solve this problem ...

but what will be rachnas reaction when she knows about it...

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Yes KT will have to work hard to redeem himself and I'm sure that Rachna won't be too happy about it all. I hope you enjoy the next update.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: sb1410
Awesome update hope Kabir will find a solution to the problem he faces. I have the feelings that he was only trying to be a good friend, a big brother to Naomi but somehow the advice got mixed up/conveyed the wrong way/and interrupted wrongly.

You're absolutely right, his intentions were right, but everything just came out so wrong. Well now he has to fix it so let's hope he does a good enough job.

I hope you enjoy the next update.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Lovely update kelly.
Poor KT i sure he didnt mean to hurt naomi. I also feel sad for rajeev he was ready to propose to her. I think sonal also take part in it.
The part f the lovely family was cute i like the converstion bettwen rachna and sanjay hebso sweet boy. Poor kt he still feel bad after what happend i hope rachna can help him beacuse after all she noami good friend.

Lovely update dear thank for pm me

Thank you Nurit, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes very unfortunate what occurred between KT, Naomi and Rajeev, a bit of sorting out to do, and you can count on Rachna helping to sort things out .

I really enjoyed writing the family time.

I hope you enjoy the next update