RaBir FF -A Cast of Characters chapter 97/98 & Epilogue pg121/2 (4

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Selina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Great update
Luved rabir
Thanks 4 pm

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RaBir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#482

Post next part soon Kelly ji! I waiting.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: nividances
Res!
Finished the dreaded 10 pages...only 20 more to go. 😭

But first to read this much awaited update. 😃

*Edited*

That made up for the lack of Rabir in the last update for sure. 😃

I love how you portray their day-to-day routine so naturally.

Rachna counting down the time of Kabir checking on her was hilarious, as was the comment about her being thankful of the fact that her sensible loving KT hadn't turned into an overbearing dimwit. 🤣 I literally laughed out loud at that part, eliciting a few odd stares from my roommate 😳(of course I will now have to go explain to her what I was laughing about since she's already pestering me to tell). 😛

And from the 3 options offered, I liked most what hearing the third option led to; good going Rachna...show him who's boss. 😆

As open as they are being with each other on both a personal and professional level, I worry if this is something that can allow a third person to create a rift between them. But I trust you because I know you will give us good things in the future as well.

Thanks Nivi. glad to have redeemed myself 😊 As you know, since I'm sure you do the same thing, I just write RaBir as I wish I had seen them portrayed in the serial.

I hope your roommate at is familiar with how crazy we RaBirians are, so she could fully appreciate the humor. Don't worry I've had to explain to my family my loony behavior at times to over RaBir.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter 😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Well I am satisfied we have a Rabir full update love reading about their daily routine.[/QUOTE

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed😊

New update coming up.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#485

This was really a nice suprise...just rabir great... i like naomi and rajveer but it is always a pleasure to read about rabit..had missed them...great to see them like this...[/QUOTE

Thanks for your comments! Because this FF is so much more involved than my first where the focus was solely on RaBir it is difficult to maintain the right balance. So I'm glad to have you guys to keep me on the straight and narrow😆. Suffice to because everyone has there own part in this story, I hope that you will see why the emphasis in on certain characters at certain times.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: RaBir

It do good. Thank you.

No problem...I need you guys to keep me on track😆

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: RaBir

Aww poor Nivi. Ache se padh par. Idhar udhar dhyaan mat bhatka. 😆
Just kidding but finish school work and give next update soon.

Let's face it Nivi is just a super woman😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: hailly
Nice update , continue soon .Thanks for pm

Thank you for following. New update coming up.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Sweet update Kelly. Rabir part it was cute and lovely.
I like how Kabir also take care of his little girl.

Keep it up. thank for pm me

Thank you Nurit...I wish we could have seen RaBir like this on the serial😕 Anyway glad you enjoyed. Next chapter to be posted soon.