Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant update, the humour just giggling whiles reading.
Arnav the goonda,, I hope he tells Bauji he's the goonda
proposing marriage to Khushi 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update wonder if Arnav will tell Buaji that he is the one who proposed
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Super updates as always :)
Loved goonde Singh raizada's expression towards the end
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Gunda??? Now arnav will be more alert..
Thnks 4pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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love the names that you are coming up with !!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic. Love the fact that the story is so different from the serial. makes it very fresh. you are not only a good writer, kaheto you are also a good director. it shows in the selection of photos portraying minute but perfect expressions
that saree is of course gorgeous. looking forward to the anjali buaji milap as well as arnav khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
great
and buaji is talking to that gunda...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Diii.. both Diiis.. 😆
Namaste hai ji.. kaisan ho??muje pehchana?? meko pichle dori me dekha gaya hoga..

I read the kahani from parts 24 to 34 😳

So the kahani is revolving around an Arrogant...Baawla..Diabetic Singh Raizada who ban gaya hai.. Goonda...Generous..Gadha...aur Ullu Singh Raizada.. & is hopelessly in love with Pagli Kumari Gupta.. 😎


I like tht.. All the parts are hilarious.. 🤣 Khushi is a bindas gal..I loved the ph call she made at madhouse.. and mamiji's Dialog...tht her Arnav bauwa laptop ko chod k ladki ched raha hai.. 🤣 Tht was epic..!!

Buaji is telling Our Goonda Singh Raizada tht a Goonda is behind her Sankadevi.. Aab aayega maza.. 🤣


P.S- Rashmi Di.. 🤗 Woh kya hai na.. phwa me Jo mail app tha..usko delete karna pada..ph me gadbad hua tha kuch...so I do not comes to knws tht u hv sent me mails.. 😔

P.P.S- Smita Di.. is bar bhi Anjali Di is not going to do anything abut Her husband's gussa.. 🤔
is she only going to cry all day.. 😡
Sirf aap he anjali Raizada ko akal de sakti ho Di.. pleej. ask her to do something other thn crying..😡


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Please ignore him.. he is mad. 😡 🤔
Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Innocent Singh Raizada is going to advise buaji to marry Khushi to an innocent boy so that no one troubles her anymore 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poor Khuhsi thinks she is delusional, imagining Arnav is near by... .. and now Arnav is talking to Buaji ,, oh dear, " Iss Gunda ko kya Naam Doon !!

Wonder what buaj will do when she finds out it is her beloved Arnav Babua !!

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