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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 25 (LAST)



"hey...cookie...don't cry..." Swayam immediately cupped her face as she started crying after reading the letter... Soon her cry turned into sniffs and soon into loud sobs...

"array... cookie... kya yaar ye niagra falls mat baha... Kya kar rahi hai... ro mat... meri surprise itni buri thi kya..????" he tried to make her smile...

Sharon wiped her tears n sniffed her nose and then cooed into swayam's arms...

"haa bilkul bura tha surprise...mujhe rula diya tune... I hate you..." she kept her head on his chest and snuggled close to him...

"haa I believe you..." He chuckled when Sharon hit him on his back...

"kya yaar... pati par physical torture kar rahi hai???" he asked tilting his head to look at her...

"haa... zarurath pare to jhadu se marungi..." both of them laughed out...

After sometime swayam pulled out of the hug and looked into her eyes with a big smile on his face...sharon looked at him with a questioning look...

"kya chal raha hai tere dimaag mein????" she asked him with a smile...

"jo tujhe nahi de paya...wo ab dena hai..." he said as he stood up...

"chal..." he held his hands and pulled her out of the room much to her struggle...

"kaha ja rahe hai..." she kept on asking him trying to balance her steps as swayam literally pulled her downstairs... Sharon was shocked as he pulled her inside the mandir of their house...

"swayam...yaha mai track pehenke..." Sharon tried to go out coz she was waering her sweatshirt and track pants...

"to muskaan ati hai aya tracks pehenke..." swayam said as a matter of fact...

"haa par..." Before Sharon could complete swayam said...

"haa wo beti hai n tu bahu,...mom ko batau ye???" swayam smirked and Sharon gave a hopeless smile...

"par hum yaha kya karne ke liye aye hai..." Sharon asked...

"shadi..." swayam replied casually...

"kyaa????" Sharon literally screamed out and swayam immediately covered her mouth with his plam...

"dheere se... koi aur nahi to agar musky jag gari to fir se mujhe use nek dena parega..." swayam said... when he was sure that Sharon won't shout he removed his palm...

"tu pagal ho gaya hai... yeah fir amnesia... you know memory loss... Tu bhul gaya kya?? Hum already shadi shuda hai..." Sharon whispered gritting her teeth...

"haa par tab kuch chut gaya tha..." swayam said as he lit up the diya in front of DURGA MA's murti...

"haa teri akal..." Sharon said in irritation...

After he was done swayam looked at her with a serious face...

"dosti k saath hum shadi ke saath samjhota kar lete hai... par pyaar ke saath us shaadi ko jeete hai..." swayam held her hands as Sharon turned numb...

"aur humari shadi jab huyi to mujhe samajh hi naya tha ki mai tujhse kitna pyaar karta hoon... mujhe wo tab pata chala jab bohut der ho gayi thi... I don't know about you Sharon... I am sure tere liye humari shaadi bohut mahine lagta tha... kyunki tu janti thi... tu sure thi that you want me in your life...you love me... but tab mujhe nahi pata tha na... to maine tujhse shadi ki kyunki mujhe tujhse koi problem nahi thi... not because I loved you... at least tab mujhe aisa hi laga... but mujhe nahi lagta wo sahi tha...kyunki tu isse zyada deserve karti hai..." he smiled at her as she smiled back at him...

He took her hands and stood in front of the murti...

"dekhiye... mujhe koi mantra nahi ata... nahi mujhe wo sari vows yaad hai... sorry... but I know what is the right thing to do..." he talked to the murti and Sharon chuckled...

"so mai... swayam shekhawat... promise karta hoon... that I'll be the best husband of the world... Mai humesha Sharon ko khush rakhunga... humesha usse pyaar karunga... kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi use rulane nahi dunga and khud bhi nahi rulaunga...aur zindegi bhar uska hare k baat pe saath dunga... humehsa trust karunga uspe... " after finishing he looked at Sharon who raised her brows with a smirk...

"haa...yup yaad aya... use dher sara ice cream bhi dunga..." he looked back at her again

"good..." Sharon chuckled...

"aur kabhi kabhi...pareshan bhi karunga..." He winked at the murti and Sharon made a face at him...

"haa wo to tera birth right hai..." before she could finish she felt swayam putting sindoor in her partings... she looked at swayam and hugged him tightly...

"so vivah sampan hua..." swayam said raising his hands as if declaring it like a pandit and Sharon nodded her head laughing her heart out... swayam smiled seeing him smile...

Swayam picked her up in his arms and moved upstairs... as he moved inside the room he put her down and locked the door holding his back...

"kitni khati hai yaar tu... hati jitna weight hai tera... back mein pain ho gaya..." he said to irritate him... Sharon picked up a pillow from the bed and started hitting him with it... swayam ducked her and held her in his arms from the back and started tickling her...

"swayam...i am warning you... Chor mujhe... Leave me..." she somehow managed to say in between her laughter...

"pehele bol swayam is the best..." He tickled her more...

"in your dreams..." She struggled to get out...

"my dreams??? Dikhau tujhe mere dreams mein hum kya karte hai???" as he said that's ahron turned pink...

"besharam.." she hit his stomach with her elbow and ran out of his arm and ran and stood up on the bed... Swayam ran behind her and caught hold of her t shirt and pulled her down on the bed...Sharon in the process of balancing herself held swayam's t short and pulled him down over her...

They ended up laughing their hearts out... Swayam removed the hair from her face as Sharon got conscious of their proximity... swayam moved forward and kissed her cheeks and moved to the crook of her neck as she gulped her own saliva pushing swayam away... he fell on his back beside her as she moved away from him attempting to go to the washroom... But swayam was fast enough... He went and caught her elbow and flung her about facing him inches apart... he held her waist securely with a hand and with the other caressed her cheeks shoulder and arms as Sharon hugged him tightly in ecstasy...

Swayam picked her up in his arms and carried him to the bed and made her lay down...

He kissed her forehead and then was about to move away to sleep on the other side when Sharon held his hands... he looked back at her questioningly...

"kaha ja raha hai????" she asked him looking into his eyes intently...

"sone..." he gulped and looked away... He never wanted to do anything that might make Sharon uncomfortable...

"you don't need to stop swayam..." she tugged his hand urging him to sit beside her...

"cookie... if we don't stop now... there would be no turning back..." He wanted to make sure Sharon was all right...

"I don't want you... Us to turn back..." she hugged him tightly and swayam needed no more assurance...

He showered kissed all over her face as Sharon clung onto him tightly rubbing his back and moving her hands in his hair...

He pushed her down on the bed as they showered each other with all the pending love they were yet to have... the love which they deserved... Which was only theirs ..

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Swayam opened his eyes irritated with the sun rays enetering through the curtains... he opened his eyes to find Sharon cooing into his arms and immediately smile and left a kiss on her forehead whispering a soft love you to a sleeping Sharon... he didn't even know how long he kept staring at Sharon but a knock at the door broke his reverie...

"musky hoga... morning coffee..." He muttered to himself as he stood up beside the bed... He was already wearing his tracks and put on his t shirt and went to open the door... but then he truned back to check whether Sharon was covered or not... He came back and picked up her clothes from the floor and kept them under the duvet... He then went to the door and opened it...

"morning bhai... ye lo coffee... n ye Sharon di tea..." Muskaan handed him the tray...

"thanks..." he pinched her cheeks and muskaan made a face...

"Sharon di jag jaye to use neeche bhej do... she's the birthday girl...so mom aur badi ma ne unke liye unki favourite breakfast banaye hai..." muskaan told him and turned to go and then turned back again at him...

"bhai..." Swayam who was about to go back into the room turned to her and found her smiling...

"kya???" he raised his brows...

"wo sindur hatake neeche ana..." she pointed near his left shoulder ... he looked there to find sharon's sindoor smeared over her neck ... He looked back at muskaan who was chuckling by now...

"umm... ears pe aur cheeks pe bhi hai..." she teased him and swayam gave an embarrassed smile looking away...

He came inside and went to the washroom to get freshened... as he came out he found Sharon sipping her tea after getting wearing her tracks again...

"morning cookie... Sorry... birthday girl..." He came and picked his cup up giving her a kiss on her hair...

"morning..." She smiled back at him...

"fresh hoke neeche chali ja... tera favourite khana hai..." swayam sat down beside her on the couch...

"haa obviously...mumma choti ma...papa chachu and musky mujhe tujhse jyada pyaar karte hai..." she gave him a victory smile...

"excuse me??? Mujhse jyada pyaar karte hai..." he said as matter of factly...

"mujhse..." Sharon retorted...

"mujhse..." he retorted back...

And their fights continued till infinity and beyond... because that defines them... the day they will stop fighting their "special" thing will be lost... They don't let each other cry to sleep but they keep irritating the wits out of each other... They are kids... they are hopeless... They are the best of friends...

They make life...


PLS CHECK THE NOTE BELOW...😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE

so as you have read this was the last chapter...

although i'll update an epilogue soon coz i its someone's demand😉

pls leave ur likes n feel free to comment honestly whatever you felt about the story

be it good or bad ...

thanks again...

love ani
Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all im damn angry at you 😡
For many reason... One you were angry at me yesterday 😆
Second you ended..😡gosshhh you have any idea how much i will miss this FF or urs😭
Im damn sad... but everything has one ending we cant stop it... so its ohk...and update the epilogue soon .. waiting...
Loved the whole FF and this part was fab 👏
i loved the way you wrapped it... and the idea of marring again was out of world...i loved that the most...and u write emotions very well in hindi 👍🏼
Loved it.. and i miss this very badly... at last every stories of urs coming to end..and im waiting for new stories from ur side...now im waiting for that one... do start soon 😉
Excitedly waiting, u have told me that u will strart after this ff will end... now time for new one 😉
And it was amazing ff on swaron one of my favorite 😃

And in the last update i got to comment first
Yiiippiiieee me so happy
Loved it all whole...
Update epilogue soon


~Keechu
Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
last??
shocked to know

this chapter was sweet
sharon and swayam were really cute
looking forward to read epilogue

*_*
Edited by ..EnIgMa28.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww its last chapter:(
I miss this story
Awesome update
Love swaron fights m romance
Musky naughtiness
And they again start fighting
They never changed
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi!!
amazing part
swaron talks n romance
musky teasing swayam 😆

update the epilogue soon
thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...i ll miss this ff...had a ger time reading this...nw you start another one...okk...
Thankyou for all ur updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice i enjoyed this ff nice work
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a woderful story...👏👏
waitng for epilogue...
Keep writing !!!!

👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Needless to say i loved it :(
He married her again :o in his own way
I just love their way of showing love, their understanding ^_^ they are LOVE *-*
I will this FF sooo much :(

She understand him well *-* so do he
Before they could say anything they know whats going in other's mind ^_^
I loved the end
So true no wonder how much they love each other won't ever stop fighting and teasing each other :') but that care is what makes them different
I just love them bus :(
Friends turning into lovers :(
I'm so gonna miss them
Thanks alot for this FF it's really special for me :') and so is for you. I know

Waiting for epilogue *-*
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago

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