a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shaaz23

Hey ani
Nice update
The best friend bond which they share is too cute and adorable
Soon they will be marrying
So waiting for the swaron couple
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon



thanks for the lovely comment...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
nice concept!!
pls update soon and do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
chapter 1 was superb it justified the ur title
swaron bond was fantastically penned
it was nice to see a care free sharon n swayam
sitting rite here in the cafe deciding thr future
i was waiting for swayam to come up wit tis thought
it will definitely be interesting to see
how the story shapes up from here
sharon's pov was very well put forward
do update soon 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli

chapter 1 was superb it justified the ur title

swaron bond was fantastically penned
it was nice to see a care free sharon n swayam
sitting rite here in the cafe deciding thr future
i was waiting for swayam to come up wit tis thought
it will definitely be interesting to see
how the story shapes up from here
sharon's pov was very well put forward
do update soon 🤗


thanks dear...i'll update today only...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

PART 2

Sharon was standing on the balcony of her room staring at her finger... There was a silver platinum ring with small diamonds sparkling there... Yes , Sharon and swayam were engaged for a week now and were going to get married next week...

"what are thinking Sharon???" her sister riddhima came and patted her shoulder... Her sister was staying with her from the engagement to the marriage from her in-law's place...

"kuch nahi di...ice cream chahiye..." She sulked...

"to jaa na fridge se leke aa..." riddhima said...

"tumhe lagta haa maine nahi dakha???nahi hai fridge mein..." She made a crying face...

"to apni fianc ko phone kar...abhi aa jayega ice cream lekar..." Riddhima teased her...

"haa raat k ek baaje????"

"haa swayam tere liye kuch bhi karta hai Sharon..yeh tujhe bhi pata hai..."

Sharon picked up her phone and dialed swayam..he picked it up and spoke in a sleepy voice...

"kaun hai???" swayam asked...

"Jhansi ki raani..." Sharon snapped and swayam jerked up on the bed...

"kya hua Sharon ...sab thik to haina???"

"nahi kuch thik nahi hai..mujhe ice cream chahiye woh bhi abhi..." Sharon stomped her feet...

"kya??" swayam asked in disbelief...

"ha ...tu la abhi ice cream..."

"accha thik hai aata hoon..." he knew there's no point fighting with her...

After half an hour swayam entered sharon's room through the window...

Riddhima was sitting in her single bed and Sharon was sitting in her bed...both of them shared a room before marriage...

"woh dekh a gaya tera swayam..." Riddhima smiled...

"I don't care woh aya ki nahi... De ice cream..." she almost snatched the paper bag from his hands and opened the tub...she took the plastic spoons out and started eating the ice cream without sparing swayam or riddima a look...

Swayam nd riddhima smiled and shook their head...

"swayam...tune bigar ke rakha hai use..maine ek baar bola tujhe phone karne ke liye aur isne sach mein kiya...aur tu?? Raat mein koi drive karke aata hai kya??? Aur tu nahi badlega na?? window se kyun aya?? Ab to darwaje se aa..." Riddhima pulled her ears...

"array riddhima di choro na... aur raat k der baaje darwaje se ayunga to uncle aunty bohut aache se swagat karte haina??"

"shaitaann..."

"aur aapni behen ko dakho...khud kha rahi hai...abbey besharam humhe offer to kar..." His voice rose...

"idiot sshhh... mom dad will wake up..."

"haa to humhe offer to kar..." He whispered...

All three of them sat on the floor and started eating ice cream and chatting...

Swayam scooped some ice cream in his spoon and forwarded it towards sharon's mouth...as soon as she opened her mouth to eat it...he quickly passed it to riddhima and she ate it up while Sharon sulked and swayam and riddhima laughed sharing a hi five...

They kept having their own sweet moment and riddhima kept on adoring them...

After they finished their treat riddhima picked up the tub and the spoons and went outside to throw them and bring some water...

"sorry swayam...itni raat ko tujhe saatane k liye..." Sharon said with a puppy face

"haa...yeh accha hai...pahele to raat ko jagao...fir ice cream mango..fir khao bina offer kiye...fir khane k baad sorry bolke nikal jao..." Swayam cracked...

"haaawww!!! Tu mere liye itna nahi kar sakta..." she frowned with a pout...

"aur yeh to aur bhi accha hai... Blackmail karo... Emotional ones... tu mere liye itna nahi kar sakta'... you know I'll never say no that's why you take advantage..."

"I take advantage of you??? HOW DARE YOU...thik hai ja...aur khabhi kuch nahi mangungi... Aur waise tujhe kya?? Maine manga aur tu chala aya?? Kyun???"

"kyunki tere liye kuch bhi..." He smiled and said in the cutest way possible...

"now that's like MY swayam..." she grinned widely in return pulling his cheeks...

Meanwhile riddhima returned and gave them water...

"ho gaya jhagarna aur patch up bhi??? Tum dono bare nahi hoge kabhi?? Abhi bhi baccho ki tarah larte ho... for god sake you guys and engaged and you will be married..." She said with a hopeless expression...

"to kya hua...hum to abhi bhi best friends hai aura age bhi rahenge..." swayam said pulling sharon's cheeks...

Then he hugged both of them and left from the window..it was almost 2:30 in the morning... riddhima hugged Sharon and went to sleep in her bed while Sharon kept sitting on her bed...

to kya hua...hum to abhi bhi best friends hai aura age bhi rahenge...'

hum to abhi bhi best friends hai aura age bhi rahenge...'

aura age bhi rahenge...'

age bhi rahenge...'

his words kept echoing in her ears as tears streamed down her cheeks...she stood up and went to the washroom...she opened the shower and sat on the floor of the wasroom beneath the shower...

As the warm water flowed on her pain lessened... Her tears were hidden behind the water as she kept on sobbing and murmuring

"I love you swayam...and always will..."


thanks guys for your support...if you like this update pls do hit like and comment...

love , Ani

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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
nyc update n thanks fr d pm :)
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
E update...cut eone...thanks fr d update ...do writr fadt n pm 😊...thanks fr d pmm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Di Di DI!!
Awh this update was sooo cute!!
The ice cream part,
hayeee loved it soo much!
Shar khud khaa rahi thi aur dusro ko diya hi nahi, lol!
The masti was tooo goood!!
And the end, shocking!

Gods, I wish Swayu falls for her tooo!!
Loved loved loved this update a lot
Love u too!!

-Diya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Nice update👏
swaron engaged😃
sharon craving fr icecream at 1 in night😆
n she called swayam 😃
n he came 2 her with icecream😃
it was a very cuet moment😊
n swaron's friendship i love it❤️
she loves him😃
bt she thinks he doesnt😔
hope they come 2ghter soon😊
update soon😊
will be waiting😊
n thanx fr d PM n scrap😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
ani🤗
very nicely written i must say
sharon wanna eat ice cream dat late nyt
n swayam brings it forher dat was soo sweet
i loved the sis duo
and swayam said dey are and will be frndz
and i felt sharon shattered very nycly penned down
wanna read the next chp soon

love
shini
Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago

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