a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow really very amazing chp...
Loved the way u hv written sharon's diary part...!!!
Update soon n thnkz for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
heya ani
sorry 4 d really late comment
but i had read all the updates being offline
coming to the updates
chapter 10
sharon explaining her feelings 4 swayam and
instead of ridddima swayam heard all that
and swayams majnu mode turned on in front of the house
i mean really????????
he is so cute
and as sharon feared he askd the same qn
and sharons blushy reaction
again here you left ua readers with an element
of suspense
i so wanted to know it and really waited 4 another update
chapter11
wow suspense revealed
sharons diary
her sweet natureis truly evident
she loves swayam from then
swayams place in her lyf and heart was truly prominent
swayams urge to read through the pages was well written
and he really wishd if he knew her feelings earlier
sharon felt hurt when she came to knw that swayam liked some1else
and still maintained her friendship
waiting to read more
update soonish
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

hey ani😃

thank u soo much for dedicating this chapter to me
and u need not thank me
i am always der to help u
so chill thank u math bol

i loved this chapter to the core
the dairy entry was too gud
very touchy entries
very well written
and u rightly said papers are very patient than people
ua dairy turn can be ua best frnd who will with you forever
and will never judge you
d entries were heart touching
sharon had fell for swayam 7 yrs back and she dint confess it to him
thank was really well written
all in all a very nyc update wanna know wat vl happen next

love
shini


thanks shini di!!!muahhh!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abcdghi

Oh...that was a dairy of sharon
Emotions we're we'll penned
Great gng ani love the way u write :)
Update soon


thanks!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

OMG!😲😲😲

Sharon ki diary... wait lemme sigh in relief first Ani di!😔
You had given me a mini heart attack with that Precap...😔
mera dimaag pata nahi kya kya soch raha tha.. *Slaps Forehead*
Anu tu bhi naašŸ˜† Trust your Ani di.. wo kuch galat thodi karti😳
Haan ab coming to the update..šŸ‘
What do I say?😃 It was such a beautiful update..😳
Swayam ka pain, you depicted it very beautifully Ani di😭
I felt so bad for this guy...
his love loved him from past 8 years and never spoke a word about it!😲
he must be feeling so terrible...😭 *Shudders*
Di.. Sharon use sambhal legi naa... I can't see my Swayam broken..😭
main ro dungi!😭
Main ye toh kehna bhul hi gayi!
Haan.. I wanted to say that Sharon ki diary mein jo love ka description hai naa... it was mesmerizing!
Loved Loved it!šŸ¤—
Loved the update bery bery much!šŸ¤—ā¤ļø
Hoping to see more Swaron moments now.. with Sharon comforting Swayam..😳
You know naa how much I love Swaron!ā¤ļø
Love you Ani didu!šŸ¤—
I know main late hun.. but this school isn't letting me breathe.. I am sorry😭
*holds ears*😭
-Anu


awweee...thanks a lot anu!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nautanki_PM

What The hell diduu!!

Yehh kya tha huh???!!!!

Ek toh heartattack pe heartattack dete ho aur upar se yeh kya!!
haye mai kya boluu!!
u wrote sooo wonderfully!
Par mujhe aapse ek shikayat hai!!
Mujhe lambe replies nahi milte *pouts*

heheee!!!!!
Chalo complaint kam karing aur update!!!
hehe!!!

The update was sooo sooo hearttouching!!
Mai aapse kya kahu!
Its just amazingly good
those diary lines... awh
Aise laga ki kuch unique horaha he!!
Aur fir Swayu ke emotions!!
Diduuu mujhe aapne diary mai itna kho daala ki i would have ignored Swayus part agar I wouldnt have seen his name!!!
U naa!! URGH!! For the first time ever aisa hua!!!! *puppy face*
hehe!!
Then when Sharon came in...
Haye, her confusion was amazingaa!!
And when she saw that diary.

God!!!!
I wanna know whats gonna happen next!!
Jaldi bataooo!!!!!!!

Love u!!! :)
But loved the update teeny sa less than u šŸ˜›
Jealous mat hona
I love only u!!!!!!!!!😊
Tight hugz!


AB UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Waiting like an idiot
-ME!!
diyu!
ur restless!


you know what diyu!!! i love u so much!!!!

thanks a lot baby!!!!

😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

res

OMG
You nearly gave me a heart attack,
Good it was nothing else than Sharon's diary
And aww all the past of Sharon's life was described soo good
and I liked Swayam's reactions on every single one
and the heart breaking up for not realizing that she loved him from that much time
and he didn't even notice
thanks for the update


thank u!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Ani
Vaise to i was nt going 2 comment😔

Bt phir socha jane de kar hi deti hu😔

Ja maaf kiya😊

Coming 2 d update😊

It was Nice😊

Loved itā¤ļø

It was emotional also😭

Bt i ws so worried after reading d b4 chapter😊

I tot it must be very seriousšŸ˜†

Bt esa kuch nai huvašŸ˜†

It was jst a diaryšŸ˜†

Bt tat was also nice totšŸ‘

Sharon loves him since so many year😃

N he still didnt knew it

Bt finally he gotta knw 😃

M so happy fr tat😃

She had describe every feeling fr him in diary😃

Swayam's emotions while reading diary were well pennedšŸ‘

Bt y is he unhappy??😲

Dumbo he is😔

He should be happy😊

Nw wat will happen😲

Update d next part supersoon😊

N thankx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊


first of all thanks for maafing meee...hihi!!!

n haa malum hai yaar wo swayam pura dumbo hai...

kya karun mujhe wo waise hi pasand he u knw...😳😳

thanks for d comment...muaahh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ujwalv

Omg awsm it was...sharon ki diary šŸ‘šŸ¼ loved it.


thanks!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks!!!😊

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