a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update BT u r giving m heart attack wht d hell ?? wht happened to swayam ?? now update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg awsm update...
why ws swayam crying.??? 😲 ab kya twist hai.????

plz update sonn...
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyy aniii😉

u updated again
thanku for the fast update
i love u for this
thanx for the pm...😆

hmm so this was the shock?
i know its going to be the good shock na?😲
plz i only want good shock, u shocking girl😲

the part awesome..👏
its a full update...
i loved the swayam at first
but end u made me angry😡
my swayam crying😭
i hope its for happiness only
otherwise u gone die my sweet sisii😡
mind it😡

sharon and riddima scene was so sweet...
why sharon stop at wrong place?????
arggghhh😡

hayeee hayeee😳
im loving this swayam...😳
he is hell behind her😆
that scene was good..😳


and yaaa i loved the lines sharon Spock about his love...
at last as usual u shocked me😲
you expert in it..
my shocking sisi😲
you stopped again at wrong place😡
i wanna kill u😡

update soon
im waiting
okk
and yaa i want only good shock...


with lots love
keechu di











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Posted: 10 years ago
The update was very gud the part whr sharon says it all never knowing tat swayam can hear her was fantastic ...sumwhr i loved tat sswayam knew abt sharon's feelings n then thr was a small epic moment b/w them ghar ke samney
U completely lost me in the end ...
Sumwhr tis mystry makes me eagerly waiting for the next update
Ps will give small reviews till exams cant help it :p🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dii u updated so soon yipeee
D update was so good
So finally sharon confessed her feelings and swayam heard thr confession
Nd the teasing prt was amazing
Bt wht happend at the end
I guess i need to ready for a big shock
Update soon
Edited by ritz15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update👏

Loved it❤️

Sharon was about to confess😃

Bt she came 2 knw its swayam😔

Shitt yaar

Loved d part where swayam was teasing her😃

It was amazing👏

Their out house romance make me go aww😃

N wow wat a great end😡

U stopped it der😡

How could u😡

Y was he crying???😭

N wat was in his hand????😲

Ahhh y u halted it here😡

U r becoming a halt queen😆

Update d next part supersoon

N thankx fr d PM😊

Lots of Love

Mansi😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Are again a cliffhanger..ab aisa kya mila Swayam ko that he was crying??
The whole part was so adorable & nicely written. Update soon yaar.
Love, sree
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thatsss A sweet update 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a update :o
Swayam heard her say that all, how she love being loved ^_^
:p she is trying damn hard not to confess
But what happened to Swayam why was he crying??? 😲
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry won't reply for the previous chapters only this one.
So the chapter is like written well
OMG Swayam heard her say everything still pretending to be normal
But he brought the question when they reached home
hehehehehe his teasing style
Okay so what was that in his hands because of which he is crying and sharon is shocked?
I want the next chapter quick cuz it is left in a cliffhanger like another story I am reading :|

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