hey ani🤗i am back to give you comments on your all the chapters
ill comment on all the chp one by one
chapter 6
swaron are going out dats nyc
but duffer sharon sab ko lejana chahthi hai😆
smart muskaan coz in dono na kuch ni ho skatha
swayam had such an effect on sharon
she got lost in his touch aww
who is dis radhika😡😡
how dare she hug swayam😡
poor sharon how bad she wud feel
but loved swayams guesture of pulling sharon close to him
chapter 7
swayam is scaered of loosing sharon dat part was explained very well
oh god why sharon have to think in a other way
i dont want any misunderstanding
sharon in pain of loosing him
sharons feelings were explained very well her dialogue was very well written
sharon pagal hai wo swayam ko divorce degi r u serious
swarons bond was too gud
finally swayam said it
yay very happy ani😆😆😆
chapter 8
happy realisation
loved swayam d way he confessed his feelings his fears to sharon
the fear of losing her
d way sharon consoled him was very well written
sharon want to irritate swayam dat wud b fun to read
poor swayam😉
the ending was too sweet and cute
liked it to the core
chpater 9
naughty swayam mode is on😆
swayam have grown shameless
swayam held the intense gaze making sharon nervous
swayam hugging sharon aww dat was sweet
the understanding bw the dem was shown perfectly it was like understanding the silence of ua partner
all in all very nyc chapter very light and a bitof intense too
chapter 10
hayeee sharon blushing
the bond bw the sisters was well shown loved it
sharon opend up
but swayam heard all dat aww
the part where swayam brushes his cheeks on sharon was jus awesome
swayam crying oh god
but why
wats der in his hand
ways going on
ani jaldi se update kar de
i am waiting
uff finally commented on all the chp
hope ua happy seeing it
love
shini
Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago
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