My Fair Khushi COMPLETE!

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ShiningHearts

@ShiningHearts

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Aweome Start!!!

Khushi is working as waitress

bt her dream is to work in event management comp...

looking frwd to nxt prt..

thnx fr d pm...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

part 1
awesome dear...
nice...
poor Khushi...
kya soch kar aayi Dilli aur kya kar rahi hai...
hmmm interesting...
cont soon dear...

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ipkkndeternity

@ipkkndeternity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Loved your story

Very interesting concept plsss pm me

And continue soon

Waiting for akash and our bari wala ASR

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: chavvi16
okay its maneet this time
but poor her
she wants a sweet guy
and she gets aru
just her luck
ahhh so she is orphaned at age of eight
thats sad man
but she is carrying on naa
and then aru cometh
oh teri is that good or bad well only time shall tell

Damn lost my comment
Oh well now will say what I wanted to say
I can't believe some peeps
Being from high society doesn't guarantee good human behaviour
If this pervert is anything to go by I think not
That old man has no decency I tell you
How dare he leer at her
Well what khushi said to abuse him well its mild
Hell yes am sure we would have turned the air blue had we been there right kappa
Khushi don't fret am sure aru can help you out
Though who will help him man
Well let's wait shall we to see who helps whom

OMG! You took one scene and turned it into something else!🤣

The only reason I used that buddha leering at her scene was because I wanted to show how loudmouthed and rural the girls are! Thats all! It was to establish the girls' personality!😆 And you noticed the buddha and reacted to it! Awesome Kittu! You always see some of my scenes in different angle and make me think differently. After reading this comment of yours, I actually had the awesome idea for the next chappy! So keep ranting like this and make my stories more better!

Love you,

Kappa!

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archa2810

@archa2810

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

interesting.. n different... sharaab bhari gilaas... lol

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: IDatIF
Nice start of the story

One tiny request it's very hard to read hindi dialogues of khushi ,can u plz write them in English that would be brilliant

Will be waiting eagerly for future updates

Cannot do that dear! Sorry! It is essential for Khushi to talk in hindi as she does not know how to speak in English much. Her English is horrible and that is why she will be speaking in Hindi. But I will try to use more English lines for Arnav!

Thanks for review dear!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: archa2810
interesting.. n different... sharaab bhari gilaas... lol

I knew it! I knew that whether others noticed that line or not, you will notice it!😉

Thanks for commenting dear!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: apekshash
awesome.. lover reading any story that is adapted to arnav and khuhi..
happy going..

Thank you dear!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ShiningHearts
Aweome Start!!!
Khushi is working as waitress
bt her dream is to work in event management comp...
looking frwd to nxt prt..
thnx fr d pm...

Glad you liked the chapter!

Thank you for commenting!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
awesome dear...
nice...
poor Khushi...
kya soch kar aayi Dilli aur kya kar rahi hai...
hmmm interesting...
cont soon dear...

Thank you dear!