*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes

If you are intimidated then I should be having a panic attack.
You guys write hot and amazing stuff!!!😳😳

no u shouldn't say that coz u r an amazing writer n hot stuff is easier to write than subtle romance which is your forte😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: skm27395
no u shouldn't say that coz u r an amazing writer n hot stuff is easier to write than subtle romance which is your forte😊😊😊

😳 thankie!! I think we can all learn from eachother! And this will be fun!

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#13

Originally posted by: skm27395
oh you evil evil girl...wait for my turn n I will show u😆

Waiting eagerly!!!

Pst...waiting for my present as well (the os I asked you for yesterday!😳)

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#14

@Ash u r welcome n i think u r right, this is a gr8 opportunity to learn from each other...about ur gift it will be delivered to u by tomorrow or next week so be patient coz u know the saying about fruits n patience😊😊😊

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#15

YES!!

I will wait!! ;-)

Lol!! This is going to be amazing!

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Originally posted by: Burn_the_Ashes
YES!!
I will wait!! ;-)

Lol!! This is going to be amazing!

yeah promise it will be utterly worth waiting for so bye for now😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Im not vidarth but still i like it

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#18

Originally posted by: MDKRM
Im not vidarth but still i like it

thanks for reading! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Nice one..really nice one..Will be looking forward to next chapters..😉

P.S-Bigger comment next time.Guaranteed.😆

Edited by ..-DeViLiA-.. - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

reswa *sigh*

That's me getting late as usual...

*edited*

Vidushi is sooo in trouble.

I liked the chapter very much, because I could feel it all. His head throbbing, him blinking, his nose flaring in pure anger and irritation on seeing that girl. Even the bump with the Junior holding a metal spare part, I could feel it dig a bit into my own skin.

And then his vice like grip on her upper arms. Refusing to leave them alone, leaving their impressions, cutting off the circulation. Her own annoyance at being questioned like she's a criminal. She just wanted him off her back and that's why she gave him a 'bitchy response' which is 'what he expected of her'.

At least his questions would stop. But. She took the wrong path. She is realising right now how she has given him a free pass to break her more, vandalize her more, twist it all more.

I especially loved the 'lower lip rubbed by his thumb and then tapping her lips with his index finger' thing. I could literally feel the pain when Parth pressed her lower lip too hard as he spoke.

I know, I know. I am very bored with my homework, that's why moi reading this very impending assignment on IF! 😆

Annie

P.S.: Thanks for the dedication, love! 🤗 It is always a treat to read your works!

Edited by PhoenixRadar - 10 years ago