a modern day parav os ( chap 8-23)

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srinithi

@HelloHell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: naq5
ah wow srinithi an update at last. i love to read anything Parav😳 so my edging u on to complete this has completely to do with how well u write n because of the wonderful chemistry between the characters
so this is getting interesting and murkier. a murder!!! were the murderers trying to harm Arjun n murdered the girl instead?
Krishna remembering 5000 yrs back n the meeting of arjun in his arms n him comparing to do the same with this arjun was sweet 😳& funny. I always love it when krishna's feelings are so not in control n filled with love when it comes to arjun.

And its so sweet of you to dedicate it to me & all others😳🤗

i always loved your long comments. im not all that good! i just write because it makes me happy... yeah a murder...now, i wouldnt tell you that and ruin the surprise now would i ?? 😆 so do i ! so do i !

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Aww! It was soo sweet! And why was that girl murdered?

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naq5

@naq5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Ah so we have a fast update😛

Arjun Krishna hug.😳.. woh bhi krishna got it forcingly.😆. Poor krishna arjun wont even give him a hug properly.

I loved how arjun holds the mor pankh in his hands & finds peace through that. Arjun & his love for morpankh's is quite well known. 😳😆rem tht dialogue in MB. "mai to bhool hi gaya tha ki morpankh swayam ne itne sundar hote hai. Mujhe to aisa prateeth hota tha ki madhav ke mukut e hai isliye sundar dikhte hai" wasn't tht the most romantic dialogue ever😳