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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww dear what a fantastic update! After MB got over I was so upset that I wouldn't see the ParAv moments, but reading your pretty sweet updates, I imagine them n feel as if the story is going on TV..in front of me..😳 Love the frndship of ParAV..my Sweetiepie Krishna..love himmm
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Posted: 10 years ago
^^^ 😆Even i can only imaging Saurabh Shaheer in this story😳
Arjun(shaheer) being grumpy n sulking n Krishna?(Sourabh) trying to manao him. rem the friendship segment where SRJ said ye rooth jaata hai baar baar😆
Edited by naq5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ha ha ha.. i like this...
poor door cant take more damage.. lol!!
you have excellent timing babes...

ha ha.. i cant control my laugh.. Krishna do irritate...
update soon dear.. cant wait!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
U have updated it after a long time... I had to re-read the previous chapters b4 reading chappy 6.
Anyways coming back to the update... I enjoyed reading it...God Krishna pestering the gritting Arjun & Nakul giving smart comments other than making fashion statements 😆... that was funny
continue soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
hello people i dint update for such a looonngg time due to various private reasons. but then a good friend made me realize that i shouldnt let stuff like this affect me and stop me from doing what i love. so here i am! im back! and im gonna finish this story off this time. thankyou for constantly sticking around guys it means soo much to me! and this chapter goes to Naq for lighting the fire under my a** and making me return 😉 anshi for being my friend in need and krish for her unwavering faith and patience with me. love you guys!! yea those are too many dedications i know 🥱

Krishna left Arjun to his devices enjoying his strong tea.. He had always liked it like that Krishna couldn't help but think with a smile even 5000years ago. They weren't very different this Arjun and that one. Just that they had gotten to a very different start. Arjun had practically fallen into his arms the last time around. Krishna giggled at the mental thought of trying the same with this Arjun he'd probably stab him with a compass. "5000years Parth" he muttered "And still a day doesn't go by without you surprising me" He spotted the other four brothers and walked to them.. He now had new things to know
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Arjun hummed in contenment as the tea slid down his throat, "Hello!" Said a familiar voice. "Kalyani" Arjun cried opening his eyes.. "Whatever are you doing here?". "Well" she said "I came to meet my fiance" there was a sad sort of wistful smile in her face as she said this. Arjun was surprised what was wrong? Kalyani and his brother had always been soo together and deeply in love from the moment they set eyes on each other "Is everything okay between you two?" Arjun couldn't help ask tentatively. "Oh! Yeah! Everything is fine! Don't worry your pretty little head over it" she leant forward and mussed up his hair and walked away. Probably in a quest to find Bheem. Arjun being Arjun couldn't help but be curious and eager to seek answers. Arjun sighed it was probably just a rough patch. Everything would be okay. 'Right now' Arjun thought as he leant back on his chair and went back to savouring his tea 'nothing in the world could touch him'. Fate was laughing at him.
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The pandavas were walking home. Thanks to Arjun's disappearance act, most of the priveliges were snatched front the brothers. And they.were.not.happy.about.it. Arjun figured as much considering the way they were all looking at him."I'm sorry" Arjun tried again. "Lets not talk about it" Yudi muttered sensing the impending argument and bheem's growing anger. Arjun sighed and people had the audacity to call HIM the drama queen.
"So,"Nakul began "You should've seen bratha Arjun today morning" "Why what happened??" That was Bheem. Arjun could literally feel his anticipation. He hurried to clarify "Nothing I was just a bit late for class"
"He slammed the door and was screaming"
"You what?"
"I did not!"
"You were always a bad liar"
"Looks like we finally found someone who can get through the ice cold exterior"
"Who was it?"
"Krishna"
"the college topper?" Sahdev sounded positively gleeful
"Will you all just shut up!"
"Ooohhh!" Bheem Nakul and Dev imitated Arjun's lofty tone. Arjun turned to Yudi for help who seemed too amused to call the others off him.
"Fine!"Arjun exclaimed hicking his bag further up his shoulders and walking ahead of his brothers. He'd be fine on his lonesome thankyou very much. His brothers laughed before running forward to catch up with him.
"C'mon! Bratha Arjun,We rarely have anything to tease you with! And this feud between you and the college topper is just too priceless" sahdev said
"For you perhaps! He's annoying the living daylights out of me"
"Obviously" Yudhishthir muttered.
Arjun just rolled his eyes and let his brothers continue to tease him as he walked forward. He played with the locket on his neck as he walked.. The days hubub had almost made him forget what had happened the previous night. That man! Who was he? A student? A teacher?? Whatever was he doing there in the middle of the night and how did he know that there was a Halloween play? Even if he was proabably one of the captains and was aware of such information or hell forbid even a participant why was he there in the middle of the night ? And there had been blood but Arjun was pretty sure that In the current daylight he'd never heard any such sound in the morning yesterday in the college. That scream had been bone chilling he shivered mentally. Something was extremty fishy here and damn him if he dint get to the bottom of it.
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The five brothers reached home. Their mother was not at home probably out by their neibhours. Bheem went to the kitchen to make some dinner while Arjun proceeded to have a shower today had been gruelling. The Mumbai heat seemed to get worse everyday. He missed having Satya around. Just sitting around doing idle chit chat. Flirting with each other to put every other boy and girl off. In Delhi the whole college was under the impression that they both were together. Neither had bothered to correct them. This kept hopeful guys and girls off their back and gave them both a bit of breathing space. Arjun remembered with a slight chuckle the last time the cheerleader had asked him out Satya had punched her on her face screaming at her to stay away from 'her' man. Of course they dint know how Arjun was Satya's man. Arjun and Satya had been best friends for soo long that the prospect of having a romantic relationship with each other was crazy. It'd be like dating a sister. Finishing his shower Arjun came out and fished some pyjamas out of his cupboard. He heard the door opening downstairs and smiled mum was probably here. Going downstairs he heard a lot of noise. Gasps screaming yelling and his mother.. Crying?? He took two steps at a time and rushed downstairs to find his mother crying on the sofa
"What's wrong?" Arjun asked. His brothers and mother rose forward and hugged him tightly. "What's wrong?" He asked again distangling himself from the hug after a few moments.
"You know the girl next door?"Yudhi asked slowly
"Yeah!"Arjun said. She had asked him out 5times in the last two days and Arjun had been extremely frustrated with her.
"when you left last night to the college I think she followed you"
Arjun couldnt see where this was going but gestured his brothers to continue
"she followed you to the college I guess you didn't know,but?"
"But what?" Arjun aksed frustratedly
"She's been murdered
Edited by srinithi07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
aw thankyu so much sri:*😳i m glad and overjoyed u continued this lovely story of my loves Parav❤️cant wait for their romance!it was quite thrilling and filled wid suspense!😲cute teasing of arjun too😳😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
ah wow srinithi an update at last. i love to read anything Parav😳 so my edging u on to complete this has completely to do with how well u write n because of the wonderful chemistry between the characters
so this is getting interesting and murkier. a murder!!! were the murderers trying to harm Arjun n murdered the girl instead?
Krishna remembering 5000 yrs back n the meeting of arjun in his arms n him comparing to do the same with this arjun was sweet 😳& funny. I always love it when krishna's feelings are so not in control n filled with love when it comes to arjun.

And its so sweet of you to dedicate it to me & all others😳🤗
Edited by naq5 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey anshika .. how have u been.. long time since we met...😳😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey guys here you go chapter 8 . here i must thanks all of you who commented on my 6th chapter which i know i dint reply too becuase well its been too long. but neverthless you must know i appreciate every single comment. hemangi ayu radhkikerani each and everyone of you. your support means a lot to me.
CHAPTER-8
Arjun sighed he was busy and tired. Don't forget the tired. The police had visited and had mercilessly and relentlessly questioned him for hours.
"how did the man look?"
"no! It was too dark I couldn't see his face"
"build?"
"taller than me"
"everyone is taller than you" yep that was bheem. Arjun wasn't short at all as a matter of fact. But this was bheem so everyone was shorter than him. So Arjun dint put much stock into his words.
"his voice?"
"deep and husky"
"skin tone"
"how many times do i have to tell you? It was too bloody dark god damnit"
"ok fine fine"
Only at times like this Arjun was very glad to have been born as a son of Pandu. It meant people listened to him even if he raised his voice a little.
So after the gruelling hours Arjun had come to his room only to realize he still had stuff to do from college today. So regretfully taking his books he had immersed himself in formulas and equations. By the time he finished it had been nearing 3a.m and Arjun had been soo exhausted that keeping his eyes open had been too much of an arduous task. He had quite literally fallen into his bed clutching Satya's locket tightly in his hand and curling around it. That peacock feather calmed him down and made him feel peaceful like nothing else did for some reason. While asleep he dreamt that someone was sitting in his room and watching over him. With that secure and protected feeling he actually fell into a relaxing slumber.
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The pandava house hold woke up to a high pitched scream. Arjun started awake and reached out to grab his bow by his bed. It wasn't there! What the hell! Arjun rubbed his eyes and looked around. Wait! Why should he have a bow in the first place? How strange! He pushed it into the back of his mind and jumped out of his bed and promptly fell flat on his face. He had somehow gotten soo tangled up in his bed sheets that he had to actually stop for a moment to detangle himself before rushing out of his room barefooted with his new awesome weapon namely a torch. It had broken the night he had visited the college. He had realised that only after he returned.. But it had pretty much been in working condition..anyway.. He rushed towards Nakul's room where the scream had originated from. He was joined by his older brothers both of whom looked sleepy but had obviously had more presence of mind to bring their guns. Only then did Arjun remember he had one too. All the five of them did. What with a death threat and all.. They had all been given a license. Arjun sighed banging his head in the nearby wall seemed all too alluring. His day was already off to a spectacular start. Damnit he wanted to talk to Satya.Sahdev came rushing around the corner "what happened" he panted he had nothing but a pillow with him. Arjun instantly felt better. "that's what we're trying to find out, come on!" Yudhi said as all of them rushed to Nakul's room. Bheem and Yudhi leading, their guns cocked, none of them though,could ever have been prepared for the sight that met their eyes.
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The five pandava brothers were sitting around their table with their mother in the head. Four of them trying to stifle their laughter while Kunti was blatantly not looking at any of her sons. A beautiful smile graced her lips. "go on! Laugh then" Nakul said grumpily. All of them burst out laughing simultaneously.
"oh!my god,I cant actually believe.."
"you.. Nakul.. Oh my godd!!"
"hehehhaha!!" Arjun was laughing too hard to choke words in between and Bheem had actually fallen of his chair guffawing loudly. Even Nakul couldn't help but join the antics of his brothers.
Kunti finally sighed wiping her eyes."oh my poor baby!"she coddled. Arjun and Sahdev dissolved into laughter again.
You may ask why they were laughing soo hard or what had screamed that morning. Its all pretty related you see. Beautiful handsome Nakul had woken up to find a huge rat on his beauty products. While this had no doubt terrified the boy he had braved the rodent without even screaming once. Then what actually caused it ? The ever dainty Nakul had caught sight of his reflection. While usually this was a source of delight to him.. Today not soo much. Nakul you see had a huge pimple in the middle of his face. Right at the tip of his nose. This was the reason for our damsels' distress and the amusement of his brothers.
"I should've crossed puberty by now" Nakul whined
"ohh!! Its okay baby you'll be up and fine in no time at all" Arjun cooed. He had too much to take revenge for.
"Shut it! Your skin is always perfect. Even Yudhi baiyyas. You both would never know"
This was true. Both Yudhishtir and Arjun had had the fortune of inheriting their mothers flawless skin.
Yudhi taking pity on his brother said "its okay nakul. You're still the prettiest pandava brother" unfortunately the forever tactless Yudhi dint realize men weren't called pretty. They just weren't. Bheem, Arjun and Sahdev dissolved into laughter again while Nakul looked livid."thank you soo much bhaiyya"he gritted out. Yudhi, in his defence looked lost.
They heard soft dainty footsteps at the door and mother called out for the person to come in. "You shouldn't just let people in,what with a death threat and all" Kalyani called out. "Yes!But no one else has such dainty footsteps apart from you"Sahdev replied. They heard her giggles as she walked inside the house a radiant smile on her beautiful face. "Bheem.." She began but froze in place staring at Nakul.
"Oh!My!God!" She said before bursting into helpless giggles.
Nakul winced
"this!" Kalyani chocked "is beyond priceless."
Nakul sighed despondently looking towards the houses' ceiling as though hoping for divine intervention.
"well!" Kunti said reigning in her laughter . "you boys are getting really late,get going"
Only then did they realize the time.They were already almost too late. All the five brothers rushed off the tables their chairs hitting the ground in perfect sync. Kunti just sighed despairingly
Arjun dashed into his room. Pulling on the first pair of clothes. He threw anything he thought he might need into his bag and rushed downstairs and was about to leave when he spotted his whole family staring at him with wide eyes and mouths open ajar. "What?" He snapped.
"You're dressed all white" Yudhishtir seemed faint "since when did you like white"
"I am? I dint notice. Anyway I'm late and so are you in case you dint realise. While I know my admirable self is beyond awesome you can gawk later" Arjun muttered grabbing his keys and rushing out of the room. His family. Arjun decided. Was beyond strange.
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Arjun parked his car and rushed out into his classroom,tripping over chairs, tables,legs,obnoxiously long skirts,books,flirty girls,guys,and just about anything in the universe.
"Calm down princess,you're going to hurt yourself"
Arjun promptly swung around staring at the grinning man."Krishna" Arjun swore "what the hell?" Krishna smirked
"well I did get you tea yesterday"
"yes!and I thanked you for it"
"yes!but it wasn't enough"
"fine! How much was the tea?"
Krishna laughed "I don't want your money prince"
"fine"Arjun gritted out. The posting a sweet smile on his face asked in a simpering tone "would you like a huuuggg?" He purposely drew the word out as long as possible to make it sound more sarcastic.
"yea! I actually would!"
"what?" Whatever Arjun had expected it was not that. But damn him if he was going to let this annoyingly charming handsome stranger make him loose his cool again. He glared at krishna. He seemed more amused than anything else and was trying to reign in his laughter quite unsuccessfully.
"Well?Princess?Backing out on our word?"
Arjun took a Deep breath and asked all the gods in existence for patience lest he strangle the man in the pretext of a hug. Arjun grudgingly stepped forward and put his arms around the other mans neck in a loose hold for about two seconds before immediately letting go. "Happy now??"
Krishna seemed too chocked up with laughter to speak "oh Arjun you are a princess after all"
Arjun growled low in his throat turned around and stalked off.
"see I managed to get a rise out of you again"
Arjun groaned.
Krishna-1
Arjun-0
It would do well to his Parth to taste defeat once in a while
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

aw thankyu so much sri:*😳i m glad and overjoyed u continued this lovely story of my loves Parav❤️cant wait for their romance!it was quite thrilling and filled wid suspense!😲cute teasing of arjun too😳😆😆

haha! i know! romance? expect a hell a lot of drama! 😉😆

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